FF:Jaane Dil Mein.....Kab Se Hai Tu!

I have two fanfic's i'm writing, but I felt like sharing this one with you guys. This one is close to my heart so I thought of sharing it with you guys, but if you all love the character info and the summary than i'll pos part one later. And also I added couple of more characters.

Walia family

Piyush Walia: He is kind, and the most understanding person. Piyush is Jai's older brother and oldest son of Om and Riya Walia. After his parents death he took care of his brother and sister. He is married to Mehek and has one daughter named Riya, after her grandmother. (His age is 38)

Mehek Walia: Married to Piyush and mother of a lovly daughter Riya. Mehek came from a riches family, but she is a kind person who treated Jai like as her own son; there may be a big difference between her husband's sister. ( Her age is 34)

Riya Walia: Very close to her parents and most attach to her Jai Chachu. She hates her dad's sister because of the way she as treated her mother when she was kid, but know it's her turn to teach her a lesson that she will rememder. ( Just turned 18)


Jai Walia: Jai is a short temper person and looks at everything his point of view. After Jai had broken up with Roshini; he choose not to get married. He lves his bhaiyya and bhabhi so much and his mansi. His best friend is Adtiya and Riya. (His age is 36)

I decided to make Adtiya's sur name Metha!

Adiyta Metha:Jigyasa's husband; Jai's childhood friend; Very likable character; He also lives in the walia mansion along with his mother. ( His age is 37)

Jigyasa Metha: She is after her brother's money, not a kind person, and loves to be fashonable. She is married to Adtiya and as three kids. The oldest one is Ranveer, Anu and Sahil. Hates her bhabhi and her Saasu Ma. Stays in her brother's house. ( Her Age is 33)

Dadi: Adtiya's mother, but mother of the Walia Mansion; Alway treated Piyush and Jai like her sons;
Loves her grandchilds; Very kind person and loves to watch flims. (age 50)

Ranveer Metha:Mummy's boy, follow her all around; hates his mamiji, but loves both of his mamaji; promise not to get married; loves to do puja every singal day. (age 24)

Anu Metha: A kind person; close to her dad than dadi; sometimes attach with her mamaji and her mamiji; Riya and her share everything, but not there personal things like clothes, makeup, etc.... (age 19)

Sahil Metha:Another hot guy; Aditya's and Jigyasa's youngest son. He is the youngest of the three siblings; He was influenced by his friends in the beginning, but later turned nice. (age 18)

Dixit Family:

Nishikant Dixit: A loving father of two daughter and as one bahu; atfer his wife's death his life changed forever. (age 38)

Bani Dixit: Sweet, kind, and a honest person; Supose to get married with Ronit Dixit, but before they can get narried he died in a accident; lives in Mt. Abu with her sister Pia and Rano; Never wanted to get married after Ronit's death. (age 23)

Ronit Dixit: He always planned to give his family the best, but failed; His love of his life was Bani and they were getting married, but he had to go Puna for a meeting, but never returned only his dead body came back. (age 25)

Pia Dixit: Her away of seeing things by money; her dream is to marry someone with lots of money; after his brother's death she never treated Bani like a outsider, but instead she calls her "DI" after Ronit died. ( age 19)

Rano Dixit: Understand Bani the most after her brother's death; loves to study and never fall in love. (age 17)

After Ronit's death she stayed at the Dixit's house, but in her family she lives with her brothers and one sister.

Sinha Family:

Jiggy Sinha: He is loving kind person; take cares of Vikesh, Bani, Divyang, Sonu, and Trishlla; and his child hood friend is Ritesh. (age 30)

Divyang Sinha: Honest person; Loves his family, but mostly his sister.
(age 27)

Sonu Sinha: Works in the family busince with Jiggy; loves his sister more than his life. (age 25)

Vikesh Sinha: Also works in family busince; he falls in love with Riya Walia; loves his sister, but more close to Bani and can't see her in pain after Ronit's death. (age 24)

Trishlla Sinha: Cute, yougest of all Sinha's, but loves to read, cook, puja s and makes friends; miss her parent and her sister, but loves her brothers. (age 16)

Sumarry:
Bani falled in love with Ronit Dixit, they were supose to get married soon, but on their wedding day Ronit went to Puna for a meeting. He was supose to return before the wedding time, but instead his dead body came no one new how he died. After his death Bani stay at Dixit's house for Pia and Rano becasue she promised Ronit day before their wedding she will take care of his family forever. Two months have passed by and no improvement in Bani's life she stays in a small room and crys when she is a lone, but never letted Pia and Rano feel motherless or brotherless she became there morther and sister. One day they their lives have changed over a big busince loss.
Find out what happens in Bani's life?

Please tell me to continue if you guys like it or i'll stop here.

WOW!!

so many characters!!

u should continue!!

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Tell me to continue or i'll stop right know or do you want me to post part 1 tell me soon.

u must write.....!!! soundz very interesting...

I cant wait for the story to begin..loved meeting the characterz...they seem real full of life!.. 😛

you have to write. All that work into introducing the characters and then asking our permission to write. You are talented and your works shows it. Please continue as soon as you can. You well proable get a lot more comments in the morning because not many people are online, so don't let that stop you from posting past one. please!!! 😃 😃

Originally posted by: Jai-Bani_Kasamh

Tell me to continue or i'll stop right know or do you want me to post part 1 tell me soon.

don't give us empty threat s about 'stoping right now' because we know that you want to continue as much as we want you to contine! 😆

wow.. everyone's in this ff.. i mean EVERYONE.. plz cont soon.. 👏

WOW sounds sooo interesting.. you have to continue... i can't wait to read the first part.. please continue soon

Here you go guys




Nishikant got a call about his loss in bussince; he was worried how will he pay up after his son's death he loss everything. Bani was in her room cleaning up the mess left by Pia in her room. Nishikant went a meeting with Piyush Walia because he was doing their contract. Piyush and Nishikant talked for a long time than they came to argeement than one of Nishikant daugther will have to marry his brother.
Nishikant was helpless, but argeed to him and he knew that Pia is to young only hope was Bani.
Nishikant thought how can I ask her to marry someone else when she loves my son. [/BLUE]

*At Home*
Pia: Di lets go out for shopping?
Bani: Pia not today, but forsure tommrow.
Pia: Fine
Rano came back from her college.
Rano: Bani Di ( gave her a hug)
Pia: What about me?
Rano than gave her a hug too after all three of them hugged when Nishikant came.
Bani: Papa what's the matter?
Nishikant: Beta I need to talk to you?
Bani: Ok Papa
Nishikant and her went to his room; He told her about the big loss they had and the only way he can aford to pay was by argeeing with them.
Bani: Papa what kind of argeement?
Nishikant: They said that one of my daugther as to get married with Piyush Walia's brother.
Bani: was shocked!
What did you tell them?
Nishikant: ( took a deep breath) I told them yes.
Bani: Papa Pia is too young.
Nishikant: I was thinking of you?
Bani: Shocked
Papa you know the truth about my life than how can I?
Nishikant: Beti I know that it's hard for you, but help me ( by saying this he put his hands together)
Bani: No Papa please don't make me a stranger. Just Me time to think?[/RED]

*Back in Mumbai in Walia Mansion*
Piyush called for Jai
Jai (camed and asked him) what's the matter?
Piyush: I have decided your wedding with one of my client; and I hope you don't mind.
Jai: Bhaiyya I need sometime to think?
Piyush: Fine, but I need your answer by tommrow in the morning.
Jai: Ji Bhaiyya [/BLUE]

Jai went to his room and thought about what his brother said to him. On the another hand Bani was thinking to about the marriage proposeal for her. Bani thought that before she make a deacsion she needs to talk with the person she's getting married too. Jai also was thinking that he needs to talk with that girl. They both went up to their family members and asked if they could meet before gettng married?[/RED]

Will they say yes?

Part II

Recap: They both thought about their marriage proposual.

After hearing Jai; Piyush called and Bani picked up.
Piyush: Hello! Can I talk with Nishikant?
Bani: Hold on ( Covers the phone and say Papa someone wants to talk to you)
Nishikant: Hello may I know who is speaking?
Piyush: It's Piyush about the marriage and my brother wants to meet your daugther so I was wondering if your whole family comes to Mumbai.
Nishikant: Okay bye
Piyush: Bye
Nishikant: Bani beta they wnats to meet you so we have to go Mumbia in this week.
Bani (was in the kitchen and had tears) Yes Papa whatever you think is right I'm okay with it.
Nishikant was happy after hearing Bani.

Piyush told his family about the rishta for Jai and the girl's family are coming in three days. Jai was kind of upset because he dosen't want to get married.
Bani was packing her bags and looked at Ronit's picture; few tears came out and put his picture in her bag. Than packed Pia and Rano's bag and than Papa's bag. They all were set to leave tommrow; Bani tried to sleep, but can't stop thinking about Ronit.

*Next Day*
They reahed Mumbia and Piyush sent his driver to pick them up; It was a long drive to the Walia Mansion. Bani was lossed in thought when a car came to a dead end.
Driver: Mandam please come out of the car.
Bani came out and looked at the Walia Mansion.
Tony took them inside the out house to get ready for the night. Bani went inside and went to a room and thought this might be her last meeting with Ronit's picture and his memory. Pia and Rano saw Bani's pain, but they also can't help her.

*Inside the Walia house*
Nishikant went inside first to talk with Piyush, but before he could Bani came in with her sister. Nishikant introduction Bani his oldest daughter than Pia and youngest Rano. They all were happy to meet Bani and Jigysasa( I hope Jai bhaiyya don't get married to her) Piyush told Mehek to call Jai.
Mehek went upstairs and told Jai to come down.
Jai: Bhabhi please tell how is the girl.
Mehek: Her name is Bani and pretty inconent.
Jai thought just go and meet her; they go downstair and Piyush said here is Jai.
Bani looked up and saw Jai he was wearing everything in black.
Piyush introduction Jai to Bani; they both looked at each other for a while. Pia thought how can Bani marry him because of his age.
Piyush asked Jai to take Bani in his room and so around. Bani looked at Papa for permission. Nishikant said Bani Beta tum jago.
Bani: Just looked to the ground.

They both went upstairs Jai showed her around and Bani just stared at the ground; Jai knew that Bani was shy around him. When Jai showed Bani his room, Bani looked at the room and saw every thing in baby blue and white in between. Bani said nice room; Jai thank you. Bani notice a shooting star; she went to the window closed her eyes and wished that she can make right deacsion about this marriage for a moment she was lossed in Ronit's memory. Jai came and touched Bani's shoulders and said what are you doing. Bani told him when she was little her brother told me about making wish when to you see a shooting star. Jai you have a brother? Bani I mean to say my friend's brother told me. Bani called him by his last name Mr. Walia I need to tell you something before we get married. Bani was about to tell him, but there was a knock.

What was Bani going to tell him?

Part III

Recap: Bani tried to tell Jai about Ronit, but there was a knock.

Jai went and open the door
Riya: Hi Chachu
Jai: Hi
Riya saw Bani: This must be my new Chachi?
Jai introduction Riya to Bani: This is my best friend and my brother's daugther Riya.
Bani: Hello
Riya: Chachu I came here to tell you that Papa as called you and don't worry i'll bring Chachi down after I talk with her.
Jai leaves
Riya: Chachi can I tell you something about my Chachu?
Bani: Nods her head to say yes.
Riya told her that her Chachu is a sweet person uutil you break his trust or keeps secerat from him.
Bani was scared to tell him about Ronit after hearing Riya. Riya snapped her finger's in front of Bani; Chachi In what thoughts you were in?
Bani: Nothing, but I think we should go down.
Atfer they had dinner they ask Bani her permission for this Rista. Bani say that she needs time to thing? Piyush: Of course Beta, but from our side it's a yes ( Jai said Yes when Piyush called him)

*Bani in her Room*
Bani thought about the marriage and her ateet with Ronit. (Nishikant came in)
N: Beta
Bani: Papa
N: What are you thinking?
Bani: Papa half of my mind say yes, but the other half say no because I still love Ronit Papa.
Nishikant: Beta I understand, but if you don't want to get married; I won't force you.
Bani: Papa I'll tell you in the morning.
Goodnight Papa
Nishikant: Goodnight Beta and I know my daugther will make the right choices.
Bani gose in her bed and closed her eyes (saw a dream with a song in the background from Yaddien)
Bani was laying on the bed when Ronit comes and say Are you mad at me.
Bani: No. but upset because you are going Puna.
Ronit: I promise I'll come on time, but if I don't please marry someone for me and take care of my family; never let them feel lonly.
Bani was crying and said I promise, but I will always love you.
Ronit: I know. but if you miss me just kiss my picture and I'll come running to you.
Bani opened her eyes and look at Ronit's picture.

*Next Morning*
Bani woke up and looked for papa than saw Pia and asked her if she saw Papa.
Pia: Di Papa went to the Walia Mansion
Bani: Okay, than Bani gose outside and saw everyone sitting in the garden.
Bani: Papa GoodMorning
Nishikant: Good Morning Beta
Bani: Papa if you have a minute
Papa: Of coruse Beta
Bani: Pa...pa I have decided that I'll get married to Jai Walia.
Nishikant: Beta you made me happy (touched her head to give her blessing)
Everyone was happy and Bani touched everyones feet. Piyush gave her something that reminded her of Ronit chooriyans. Bani just stared at them, after went running to her room with few tears.
Piyush: What I did worng?
Nishikant: My beti is shy thats why.

Bani in her room and stand in front of Ronit's picture.
Rano wasn't happy because of this marriage cause it reminds her of Ronit and her wedding that never happened.
Nishikant came and said the shaadi's in on August 9.
Pia that's this Saturday
Bani had a fake a smile.

Will Jai find out about Bani's Ateet?
or
They will get married soon before Saturday?

Part IIII

Recap: Bani said yes to marry Jai Walia, but still feels hurt after Ronit's death.

Everyone went to the Walia Mansion for dinner, but Bani stayed. Bani thought this might be her last time to see Ronit's picture, but no one can steal her memories with him in Simila. After a while Bani called her work and told them she is quieting because know she will stay in Mumbai after she his married. Bani's boss was pretty understanding person and told her that she can pick her check or he can give it to her Papa. Bani said give it to her Papa because he will need it after the wedding is done.


*Walia Mansion*
Everyone finished their dinner; they talked about the wedding. Dadi, Adtiya, Piyush and Mehek were happy for Jai, but Rano was upset ( she thought that she should call Vikcy to stop this wedding because Vikcy is the only person who understand his own sister) Pia touched Rano; Rano snapped out of her thought and said excusse me. They all wonder what's wrong with her, Rano went and called Vikcy and told him every thing about Bani's wedding with Jai Walia. Vikcy was shocked, but send he will try to come soon as he can after Jiggy leaves for USA. Rano put the phone down and prayed to god for Bani.

*Two Days have Pasted*
Pia came in Bani's room and said today is her Mehendi and Sangeet together. Bani just smiled; Rano knew what Bani was going through another funcation with someone she dosen't love before with the person she loved. Jai just camed back from his meeting with Divyang Sinha from Sinha's group interprize; Jai had invitated him without knowing he is Bani's brother. Before they were gets ready she thought that I have to tell Mr. Walia about my ateet before we get married because for me this wedding will be only a real one in front of outsiders, but in their room they will be strangers; Jai also thought the same because he needs to tell her about Roshini.

Jai was getting dress with Riya and Anu's help; Mehek was happy that her Devar is getting married after Roshini lefted him. They all knew Roshini wasn't a nice girl for him; she went to London for her career and ever came back. Riya mummy tell Chachu not to wear this grey watch with his black Kurta. Mehek ( went up to Jai and put her hand on his shoulder and said) don't wear this watch, but wear this one; it had his name inside the clock area. Jai: Bhabhi it beauitful. On the other hand Pia and Rano where getting Bani ready. Nishikant waiked in when Rano was putting on her necklace and Pia was putting on her earings. Bani notice her Papa was standing behind them, Bani stood up and walked over to her Papa; and said she is leaving from their house, but not from their hearts. All of them hugged each other with tears in their eyes. Bani was thinking in her mind should I call Big B and tell him about my shaadi or not to after what happened between him and Ronit.


*Walia Mension*
Piyush welcomed Nishikant by hugging him; Nishikant also dose the same Mehek hugs Pia and Rano. Mehek asked where is Bani?
Pia: Di is finishing up her last touch than she'll come.
Everyone was having fun, but Bani didn't come yet Nishikant was getting worried, so he asked Rano to go and get Bani.
Rano: Yes Papa; on her way she bumped into Divyang. Rano: Aap?
Divyang: Tum Rano?
Rano yes because Di is getting married to Jai Walia.
Divyang felt sick after hearing Rano; than he said where is Bani my little sister.
Rano took Divyang with her; Divyang gose up to Bani and says are you happy with tears in his eyes.

Part IIIII

Recap: Rano bumps into Divyang. Divysng felt sick from hearing that her sister is going to marry Jai Walia.

Bani turns around and say Bhaiyya aap.
Divyang: Yes; I came here for Jai's wedding funcation, but I didn't knew that the girl is you.
Bani: Bhaiyya please don't ask why, but to let you know i'm happy today because Papa is Kash Big B was here to see me happy. ( They both hugged in tears) Rano was happy finally things are getting better with them, but only if her Big B understands her. Divyang wiped her tears; Bani did the same and asked him to make a promise that he won't tell anyone that I am you sister. Divyang: I promise.
Divyang leaves first than after few seconds Bani and Rano leave.
Nishikant: Beta why where you late?
Rano: Papa Di was doing Puja that's why.
Mehek took Bani and put the first suhgun ka mehendi on her plam than gave it to Riya and Rano.
Bani had smile on her face; Jai saw had a smile. Suddenly the ligts turn off; Sahil came out with the mike and say today his a special day for the Walias and Dixit and we have tonight with us Sonu Sinha and he will perform a dance for my Mamaji and Mamiji. Bani was shocked to hear her brother's name.

Sonu came out and danced on this song:
Eh hey, aa aa aa, oh ho, ho oh oh
Aa ha, ha aa aa, ho oh oh
Taaron ka chamakta gehna ho - 2
Phoolon ki mahekti vaadi ho
Us ghar mein khush haali aaye
Jis ghar mein tumhaari shaadi ho
Taaron ka chamakta gehna ho
Phoolon ki mahekti vaadi ho
Us ghar mein khush haali aaye
Jis ghar mein tumhaari shaadi ho
Yeh phool tumhaare zevar hai
Yeh chaand tumhaara aaina
Tum jab aise sharmaati ho
Dulhe ka dhadkta hai seena
Har aaina tumko dekhe
Tum to aisi shehzaadi ho
Us ghar mein khush haali aaye
Jis ghar mein tumhaari shaadi ho

In the middle of his dancing he saw his sister ( He wanted to go and hug her,but he can't cause of their Big B) Sonu was happy to see her because when came back from London she had moved out to Dixit house. Next line he danced on was:
Meri behna hai phool bahaaron ka
Meri behna hai noor nazaaron ka
Meri behna ke jaisi koi behna nahin
Bina iske kahin bhi mujhe rehna nahin
Jaise hai chaand sitaaron mein
Meri behna hai ek hazaaron mein
Hum jaise bhole bhaalon ki
Yeh duniya to hai dilwaalon ki


After he was done he gose up to the mike and say something, but Bani stands up and runs to him and hug him and say thank you for coming to my shaadi's funcation and tell Trish i'll miss her because she is my best friend. Piyush comes up and say how do you know the Sinha. Sonu was about to say it, but Bani say that he is her friend Trishi's brother and they always treated me like their sister when I was small. Piyush oh than you all have to atend this shaadi this thursday. Bani was shocked and said wasn't on saturday than how thursday. Piyush actully I have to go Canada on Saturday and I want to see my brother's shaadi thats why. Sonu like that's tommrow. Bani i'll drop you by the door.

After Sonu leaves Bani turn arround and saw Jai next to her. Bani: Tum?
Jai: Haan, but I came here to talk with you if you have a minute. (Bani took a deep breath and said thank god he dosen't know that I'm Jiggy Sinha's Sister.) Bani: Mr. Walia even I need to talk to you about something. Jai: even you need to talk with me than why don't we go for a small walk. Bani: ummm why don't we talk here or in your room?
Jai: Maybe your right so they were going in Jai's room, but got stop by Anu, Riya and Sahil. Jai: Oh God please help me. Riya; Chachu where are you going? Jai in my room cause I need to talk with your Chachi. Riya: Of coruse you can go in your room, but Chachi is coming with us? Jai: Riya I need to talk with her? Oh come on Mamaji you can with Mamiji tommrow after your guys wedding Sahil said. They took Bani with them and Jai went to his room and changed into his nightsuit and went to bed cause the party was over. Bani also changed and went to bed with the fear of tommrow.

Rano trys to call Vicky to infrom him about the weddin, but his phone was out of serives. Rano oh god please help Di tommrow.

Will Rano get held of Vicky or not?

By Kashish Patel