OS- A Little Thing Called Love

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Awesome writing. So well written.

Please continue. Would love to read some more of your fabulous work.

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Chandra

@Roark

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

The mental turmoil of Arnav and his feelings are so beautifully captured by you.

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Sukirti Singh Raizada

@sukirtiraizada

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

luved it..

beautifully written..

thanx for the pm...

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

it was beautiful dear!!! it was as though im listening to arnav's thoughts which are floating in the air :p
seriously... the entire write-up was brilliant... no break of thoughts n loved the continuity in the ideas... keep writing :)

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roumila

@roumi

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

hmmm loved the way u ve captured the feeling of arnaav for khushi..

do continue..:)

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-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

really great OS...you know when you told that you didnt write any arnav POV's because you wouldnt be able to justify his character well???after reading this...i loved it!!!!you captured his thoughts,emotions,attitude ,ego really well!!!you gotta write more stuff from his POV...no seriously...im not flattering you or anything but you are good at it!!!obviously...write when you get the time to...maybe after your exams or after TCOKG ends(which i hope is not for a long time)...or even such OS' will work magic!!! :D...

My favourite part from the whole OS was this:

Pray tell, how's a man supposed to hold a grudge when everything she did made him forget who he was, sucked him into her world and filled his with colours?

He tried his best and damn hard to fight the alien emotions of love. Regrettably for him however, how much ever Mr Raizada refused to acknowledged his feelings, Mrs Raizada seeped into his system that much more.

He practically self-confessed his feelings...congratulations...you just made me fall in love with him even more...;)

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smiley13

@smiley13

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

It was always khushi's point of view, her thinking...but nice to hear about arnav's thinking about his life & his cute khushi...oops mrs.raizada...😃...nice one

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enigma17

@enigma17

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Love so majestic, love that has no boundaries and does not give two hoots about Man's arrogance in thinking he controlled his destiny and dealt his own fate, stampedes all over our mighty ASR's heart and his so called fundemental beliefs. Loved it. Thank you
Well written with such eloquence

Edited by enigma17 - 13 years ago