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Firebolt

@Firebolt

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

You have captured perfectly, the thing going on between Arnav and Khushi in the current track, loved the last paragraph 😊

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Liked Arnav's perceptive. The phrase oh how the mighty have fallen flew into my mind.

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

how's a man supposed to hold a grudge when everything she did made him forget who he was, sucked him into her world and filled his with colours?

I loved the above--it is exactly what I see happening to Arnav on the serial recently. He seems to forget that he resents her. They both seem to forget, don't they?

In terms of the writing, I thought it flowed effortlessly--it doesn't read forced.

I'm a believer that you write as you write; there is no style to adopt or emulate.

Your voice is as individual as your thumbprint.

The moment one tries to write like someone else, one is doomed.

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saiqa

@saiqa4eva

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

well i for 1 abs loved it...its so nice to hear and read things from arnavs point of view..

amaizng pls cotinue

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

I adore it! :)

Its just beautiful and fits ArHi and Arnav to the T!

Just beautiful! <3 <3

Love the analysis and the deduction! <3 <3

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Madia

@kawkabon

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

great OS.

perfecty described the situation.

she has him wrapped around her pinkie but is unaware. 😉 very tru lol. reminded me of 2days epi when khushi told him to turn on the spot and he did. hahaha

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pikudika

@pikudika

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing! true essence of what is currently happening in the show to the measured and calculative ASR!!

Kudos!👏

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

u think this is poor work? wow, cuz i found it great.. i reread it a couple times too... the only thing i didn't get/like was how u said he's been in 4 serious relationships AND the intelligent women left him... i really doubt it.. i mean ASR in a serious relationship, where he doesn't dump the girl... hard to believe..lol but yah writing in asr's point of view is tough and ur attempt was wonderful!