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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant update dear.
thank u for the update..

OMG!!u r 8 months now...take care of urself dear..
love u ..😊


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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

Part 201

I was just joking misti.. he said it very sincerely.
She tried to smile.. entertainment tax.. u see.. she mocked fluttering her lashes.. killing the burning sensation in her eyes. not something he liked.. but tried to ignore it..laughing.. & taking her into another passionate love making...
they probably would have forgotten the rest of the world.. but then.. reality.. she had to get back!!!.


he didn't even let her pack her bags.. every time she kept something in.. he took it out...making a cute baby face. She tried to explain .. she just had a business visa for few days..
he argued on the petition .. an unsaid acceptance of their relation
aisen kaisen puchki
mujhe nahi pata tum kanhi nahi jaa rahi ho
he pulled her back into the bed...

she had tears in her almond eyes as they drew to the airport.. they fought.. in between that quickie enroute.. & a painful tearful departure at the airport. He was not willing to let her go!!
puchki jane do na plz, dehko announcement bhi hogaya
plz misti.. mat javo he pulled her closer I will get all the documents done.. plz.. misti don't leave
aap kyun nahi aaten meren saat.. she said between her sobs
he just looked at her blankly unsure wat to reply. She had never told him anything like this.. it kind of shook him totally.. she walked away not hearing any reply from him.. a pain in corner..he had not made any commitment..any promise.. or anything.. for that matter she doesn't even know when they would be seeing each other again.. will he call her?? even that she doesn't know
she was abt to step in for the security check.. he dragged her to the corner.. cupping her face.. misti.. I can't live without u.. he kissed her soul out.
Mujhe aisen choten ke mat javo he pleaded
puchki main aapko chotken nahi gayen thi
but this is not fair.. u r just leaving me like this now he cried like a small baby
puchki main aisen yanha nahi rah sakthi, yeh mera ghar nahi hain.. mujhe office bhi tho jana.. she cried.. kissing his lips tenderly.. wo mera boss bhi tho office nahi aaten .she complained cutely
tumhari boss ki tho main
she took him in a deep kiss
misti.. u don't have to go.. u know we can be together.. u can easily get a job here
she pulled out painfully.. I can't leave KC puchki
he got really frustrated & turned his back angrily
she looked at his back.. his anger.. his baseless argument & left painfuly
Oh dammit.. I can't even hate u.. he banged his hand on the wall as she passed through the security check..wiping her tears. Adi gave her bags & other documents.
Geet sat in the plane..like something in her was falling apart. So many things in her little heart to bear.

Maan sat in the car..blankly.. part of him just wanted to catch the same dam flight & be with mistimia..but then his job.. his career!!! why can't she be here.. he was so dam frustrated & just then his phone beeped.. he looked at the message.. something from his bank.. something of least interest right now.. but then the amt..striked his attention.. he closed his eyes painfully..
the entire shopping amt.. transferred back into his a/c.. she even termed it as entertainment tax!!!
he threw the phone angrily.. wat the hell is wrong with her.. uff yeh ladkiyan.. why can't they just think straight.. I just told her wat it was. Why did she have to feel bad.. bura laga hain tho.. why can't she just tell me.. kal tho ..she smiled it off.. aab paas nahi hain tho yah sab!!!
if I needed that money back.. why would I spend it on her at the first place.. shift
he hit his hand angrily on the wheel. He was not sure the reason of his anger was it this money fiasco or her not staying back for him or just that.. he can't think of a sec without her now!!! or own himself.. to have hurt her by mentioning credit card stuff infront of her.. or a begin of small hatred towards his own dream!!!
Back home in India... she had a very warm welcome. Yash didn't let her go away from his sight for couple of days. His attachment towards her was getting more emotional.. may be his longing for Maan was showered on her as love. All that he couldn't express to Maan it came out on her.. & kyun na ho.. only person who made him feel Maan was still around in KC.
Geet couldn't even go home.. but then caught up with them on phone & updated all abt her trip. She parceled the gifts to them. She had so much to t
couple of weeks had passed Maan didn't call her.. he was angry not sure on wat. More on himself
Geet tried calling him.. he only snapped her back in anger. She didn't say anything. She continued with her work & her usual reports.
Things changed to worse when during a board meeting Yash hard a severe heart pain. Geet & Dev rushed him to the hospital. Geet called Maan..
puchki yash sir
he was again going to snap.. but then paused hearing dads name
kya huwa misti?
His tone changed .. totally
her mouth went dry in fear..
dammit kya huwa dad ko?
For gods sake Geet speak up!!!
he roared fearfully
Dev took the phone from her.. Maan dad had a mild heart attack
kaisen huwa yeh sab?
Abhi kuch pata nahi Maan.. drs r stilling checking him.
Daadi ma kanha hain he asked worriedly
Dev ' wo Nt ke saat ghar main hain
Maan ' I will try to come at the earliest.
After the call he speaks with his boss in India. After a long discussion he manages to book his ticket for the weekend.
Precap
mistimia angry with her puchki
-PREV PART 200 NEXT PART 202-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yipee me first heheeh read karne k baad will comment
wat the hell ye puchki bhi naa kabhi apne guse pe control nahi rakhta😡😡😡😡
hope everything will be fine s0on😕😕😕😕
ufff mistimia ka gusaaa beta puchki u are gone hahaha
thanks for the double update dii 😉😉😉😉
love you 😳😳😳😳
superb part
bss hate their separation like alwayzzz😃😃😃😃
Edited by 786muskaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Welcome back Muskaan :D
Back with a bang.
Loved the updates :)
Oops geet felt bad about him mentionning about the shopping. :(
Maan is too lost in his passion to think rationnally.
Their separation was painful. Very well written.
Yash daddy had a heart attack :o
Maan cominh back. Cant wait for more.
Geet is right being angry on Maan.
Take care :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

kya hoga maan aur uske mistimia k...maan kitna gussa karta hai...thoda sabhalkar maan babu...

awesome n mindblowing update...


loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
yeh maan bhi gadha hai...wants G to leave everything for her...when will this man do anything for her😡
i am scared of the upcoming ywists..hope no separation, MU...

and yippi...one more month to go...and we all become maasis...
dont stress urself much...
and our prayers and blessings are with u and the baby...
enjoy ur pregnancy 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
wah Muskan, today you made our day!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I seriously couldn't believe that u finally updated =D
Seems like even now there is room for misunderstandings to occur between
them, I can sense some sarcasm there in update 200! Yet to read 201! Thanks for the double update =)
Edited by anmirza - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Welcome back Muskaan :
Back with a bang.
Loved the updates
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Posted: 13 years ago

🤗🤗My dear Muskan

Did not know you were in your 8th month already warna kabhi tang nahi karti for updates. Take care of your health first and foremost.
Time for puchki to grow up. I love how you showed his boldness in confronting Milind. Also his care for Prachi and his desperation to be with misti. Now the love for his father will come out. Congrats on 201 updates.
Edited by had2bu - 13 years ago

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