UNDERWATER PROPOSAL OF KRIYANSH

Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey forum wasio ... i just wrote the "KRIYANSH'S PREPOSAL" i just wrote it in a different way i hope u all like it
NOTE:THIS IS ACTUALLY THE CONTINUATION OF MY FF "KRIYANSH REUNITED WITH HELP OF SWARON" SO DNT GET


NOTE:PLEASE SPEAKERS SWITCH ON KARO
The gang was in RDX"S farm house for a party ...
The whole gang was in the swimming pool except rey and den Kriya tricked him and pushed him from behind trying to save him self

rey caught hold of her hand and both fell in water together ...

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Wen they fell in the water they both went till the ground coz of the force...and both swarl and roll up and down by touching each others shoulders... and looking at each other and den an idea stuck rey's mind ...kriya was about to go to the surface but .he pulled her and said her to wait through gesture by showing his palm . . He puts his hand in his pocket and takes out something ...(the things which happen in the water is all gestures...)

Kriya ask him in gesture dat wat happen by shaking her palm left to right ...and her mouth was like she has stuffed lots of chocolates ...it was like a balloon ...both wer looking at each other they wer looking pale coz of the water they thought they could have never look more beautiful than this...now rey gestured something to her and she looked at him
~"Rey pointed his finger towards him ( WHICH MEANS"I")"~
she was watching him carefully ...and trying to understand wat he is trying to speak...
~"Den he took her right hand and placed her hand on the position of his heart(WHICH MEANS "LOVE")"~
~"Now took their both hand towards kriya's heart ...
(WHICH MEANS "YOU")"~
and den he showed her the ring ...by seeing the ring she got amazed and she jerked and moved back
Then he pulled her towards him ...her eyes went wide .she was staring into those chocolaty eyes ...she felt dat some one has filled her heart with lots of butterfly,she was feeling that the gravity pulled her no more she was on9th cloud ...he was just lost in her beauty...and looking at her like she was looking like an angel ...to whom he might take in his arms ...
Now she understood that what he wanted to tell her.is..
"! 0v€ Y0U" ...she forgot that she was under water and she blurred out ...
"Y€$" from her mouth after which air passed from her mouth and bubbles wer formed and immediately rey placed his hand on her mouth indicating her nt to speak coz which will lead to shortage of breath and they might drown ...
Den she nodded her head in. A"Y€$" and den ( the most precious moment) he place the ring in her ring finger . .and den took her in his arms and gave a hug to her and now both faced each other...and looked in each others eyes and wer lost ... She was so happy and mesmering the ring dat they both forgot they wer under water ...
now reality stuck his mind and he was out of the stock of the breath... and rey pulled her out of the water with full force . . . . and now both wer looking at each other and wer blushing and smiling hard...

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and now if u wanna read the remaining part den check my post ...
thanks for baring please review good or bad

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow..! it was soo mEgical..! beautiful maagi loved it..<3
Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abshu_Arsha

Wow..! it was soo mEgical..! beautiful maagi loved it..<3

THANKS ABSHU...GLAD U LIKED IT...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww jst awesum
luvd it to the core
mere saath bhi aisa ho bt da problem is i cnt swim 😆
Edited by cookie_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was fabulous and innovative...

and the romance was flowing all around and than medical proposal just so perfect...

and very nicely written too...thumbs up for you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazingly beautiful . . . . 🥳

dats unique 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aweee it was amazing part...loved it to the core
proposalwas unique and awesome
loved the way rey said I LOVE YOU to kria and then split ring in her hand aweee it was magical
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Super awesome!!!totally loved the idea of the underwater proposal!!wish there had been a simiLar track in the show!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊 Maggie u were magical there
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one.
Thanks for the pm.

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