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Posted: 13 years ago
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i think is high time they open swamini's past and i have a strong feeling that some how jeevika amnd manvi's parents fit into all this so this is my way.
it is all crystal clear
virat is deeply hurt that his brother who he loved like his father slapped him he only was going back to get a shock of his life to see manvi standing there how dare virat accused manvi how dare you say that you are in love with me and love when did this come between us. when did i say you love me i love you stated virat calmly. but the storm had just started this was just the first strike of lightinning suddenly the voice of thunder was heard and on the door stood a man. swamini called that man drawing everybody attention towards the door.
arjun swamini bua adressed that man.
dadaji yeh kaun ha inquired viren.
koi nahi beta tum andar jao
arjun:tum virat ho yeh viren
viren:mein viren hoon app kaun hai
dadaji:viren, virat, manvi, jeevika, tum sab andar jao
arjun:app in saab ko kyun andar bhej raha hai mujhe in se hi baat karni hai.
manvi:hum se
arjun:ha
manvi:lekin hum app ko janta bhi nahi.
arjun:mera naam arjun ha mein swamini ka paati hoon.
viren, virat, jeevika and manvi were shocked.
(in my story viren is 26 jeevika is 24 manvi and virat are both 22 virat is 2 months older than manvi)
arjun:aur tum manvi choudary nahi ho he said looking at manvi aur nahi tum virat vadhera he said looking at virat. aur jeevika manvi tumhari behn nahi ha aur viren virat tumhara saga bhai nahi ha virat jeevika ka bhai ha aur manvi tumhari bhen he told viren.
all four were dumstruck.
arjun:jeevika's and virat's father and manvi's and viren's father were best friends and i knew both of them very well i had left swamini because my father had gone very sick after my mothers accident i had to suddenly leave for 3 years when i came back to india i was lucky to meet my two best friends vikram vadhera and vishal choudary they both had babies in their hand vikram aksed me why i leaved swamini i told him the reason he told me that you hate me so i told him that don't tell you about me i asked him why he was so worried he told me that babubji had forbidden the birth of a girl in the vadhera khandan because he did not want any more girl to get married for money and then get dumped but that day vanshika gave birth to you, manvi. i asked him what was he going to do then vishal came and told him to take virat in place of manvi but when vikram took her vikram proimses to get manvi and virat married when they grow up so that she can come to her house . i wanted to tell this to all four of you long time back.but i proimsed your fathers when virat and manvi are 22years old they will be quite mature to handle this.
viren:lekin yeh saab ab batane ka kya fida humra zindigi ka itne saal guzarne ka baad bhi.
arjun:mein yahan sirf tum logon ko saach batane nahi aya balke jo vada vishal ne vikram kya usse pura krne aya hoon he said as he went up to manvi and put her hand in virat's virat aur manvi ki shaadi.
manvi:yeh shaadi nahi hoon sakti mujhe cancer ha.
dadaji:ek vadhera ki zuban tori nahi ja sakti yeh shaadi hogi.
i know is rubbish but this thought is haunting me since y

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hahaha... aate hi Arjun ne Bomb blast kar diya.. Bina break k sab kuch bol dia.. lol.😆
I dont think so that it Manvi and Jeevika had any connection with SB's past.. Bt nice attempt..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Viren Manvi nd Virat Jeevika are siblings lol bt seriously i would love to read something on that line completely diffrent bt nt in the show v bro nd Csis<3!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting!!😃
Hilarious from the show's POV, but a lovely attempt at an OS!!!👏
You've got some imagination, pal!!👍🏼
Keep 'em coming!! And I wonder if you could make it into an SS or FF? Not with this particular scene as the start, but as one of the first few chapter/parts of your Fiction!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely thought kahi toh virman unite ho

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