ArYa Os - Unconsious Jealousy

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi!!!!
am back with a os...

I'm naming neha as the character name for neha sargam…..

Scene:

Artii is still working with yash in order to help him because her mother-in-law had ordered her to do so. She was continuing on helping her husband without any expression on her face. Actually she was thinking about what pratik and vidhi bhabhi had told her. Was she really in love with her husband? Did he have any fellings for her? But a person in his lifetime loves only one person, right? She didn't know, but she knew this that she was going crazy with her continuous thoughts…..

Suddenly she heard someone calling her and then she heard yashji calling her!!!!

"artiiji, artiiji kaha kho gayi, aap thik hai na??", asked a conserned yash to his lost wife.

(where are you lost, arti)

"ji haan bas kuch soch rahi thi….."(no, there is nothing, just thinking something)

"ok. Who main zara caterers se baat karke aata hoon, aap ye continue kariye!!!!"

{I'll just talk to the caterers and come, you continue….}

"ji thik hai…"(alright)

And artii continues working on the design in front of her……

Meanwhile yash goes to caterers company to have a talk , while he was going to sit in the car which was in front of the house when suddenly someone came running from the opposite direction and ran into his car.

Yash felt as if he had seen the person somewhere and suddenly he recognized the girl was the minister's daughter whose marriage he was currently organizing . when neha saw him looking at her she suddenly came forward and hugged him, it was such a instant reaction that yash couldn't see it nor could he stop it. Suddenly he heard a loud gasp……

Artii had almost finished her work when she saw that yashji had left his mobile phone , she went instantly running through the whole house so that she could hand it to him and he doesen't forget it, otherwise he would uselessly get angry, not that he would say anything but she could guess from from just looking at his face. She liked to think that she could read him. As she reached the main gate , she saw a view that shocked her to her core, there stood her husband of 2 months who was a reserved person and loved his 2 girls equally as her ansh and in his arms was whom she knew as the ministers daughter.

She unknowingly gasped loudly looking at the figure of a mere girl around her husbands neck and his hard body.

Hearing the loud gasp yash turned his head to look at the direction to focus on his wife who looked shocked and surprised with her hands on her sides, his mobile cluched tightly in her hands as if it would break from the pressure and herself fuming , her cheeks red.

Yash suddenly pushed the girl back and started stuttering in front of his enraged wife

" aree artiiji …aap …woo…nehaji…"(arti … you…that…neha…)

"nehaji nahi neha, mujhe neha bulaye…."(call me neha)

"oho hi neha , yashjii mujhe laga ki aap bahar jaa rahe hai to maine socha ki aapko iss mobile ki zarorat , lekin…..", said artii with his teeth clenched and stopped suddenly before she revealed her fellings further.(hi, neha yash I thought you were going out and u would need your cell, but…)

Arre nahi artijii main to ja hi raha tha…."(no no I was going…)

"woh ye ye tabhi aa gayi…aur..aur.."(she just came then and…and…)

Artii then started glaring at neha

"tumhe sharam nahi aati kissi ke pati se galle milne mein aur tumhari shaadi hone walli hai na…..", asked a angry and demanding artii .

(u don't have any shame hugging a guy when ur own marriage is coming right away…)

Here yash was both confused and little happy on inside hearing his wife say the things that every husband wants to hear and the felling he wants his wife to feel due to some other girl…

Ohh …. Ye aapke pati hai kya, sorry I didn't know that, mujhe laga ki ye mere prince charming hai… par lagta hai iss baar bhi main late ho gayi…..", said a wronged but somewhat sadly neha specifically to artii.

(is he ur husband , I didn't know that, I thought he is my prince, but I think I'm late again…)

"thank god for small mercies!!!!", mumbled a jealous artii to herself but that was heard by her hubby standing 2 steps back…

"aur aap , aapko apni princess mil gayi ya abhi kisi aur ko bhi gale milna baaki hai…."

(& u, u got ur princess or u have to hug someone else…)

"ye lijiye apna mobile aur jaiye, shayad aapko caterer walon se mila tha…. Main tab tak aapki guest ko "entertain " karti hoon…", said artii while handing yash his phone in his hand with her teeth together.

(take your cell, maybe u had to meet the caterers..i'll entertain ur guests till then…)

"par artiiji….main..", starts yash but stops seeing his wife's glare…

"aap ko kissi se milna hai na….aap jaiye, I promise main isse nahi khaungi, main ladkiyon ko nahi khati…"

(you go, I promise I'll not eat her, I don't eat girls)

Saying this she pulls neha with her and goes inside the house…

Yash saw them go away and last he heard was neha asking his wife, whom did she actually eat if not girls like her……

Saying something like "crazy women" yash went away to finally meet the caterers…

After sometime we see artii and neha in Scydhiya house arguing and talking about something and then artii suddenly smiles and whispers something in neha's ear which causes her eyes to turn like saucer…..

Next Morning:-

Artii was in the room cleaning the room when yash came from his daily exercise full of sweat everywhere & looking hot.

Yash: wo artiiji aaj neha ki engagement hai, too..woo..aap ko bhi aana hoga….

(today is neha's engagement, you have to come too….)

Artii – kyun yashji aap apni princess ki shadi kisi aur ke saath kara rahe hai kya, kal toh aapko dekh ke aisa lag raha tha jaise aap hi dulhe bannne wale hai…

(why, u r making her marry someone else or what,looking at u yesterday I thought you wanted to become the gloom…)

Yash : artiiji, apko pata hai ye sab kuch nahi hua tha, wo toh wahi aakar mujhse lipat gayi thi…

(you know that's not right, she just hugged me….)

Artii – thik hai aap jo kahein… waise main aa jaungi par mujhe thoda late hoga, kucch kaam hai aap chale jaiye ga, main baad ,mein aa jaungi….

(whatever you say, I'll come late I've some work, you can go alone…)

Yash – par aartiji hame saath mein jaana chahiye na…..

( but we should go together…)

Mumbled yash but stopped after looking at a furious artii….

Artii – main aa jaungi yashji……don't worry…..

( I'll come)

Engagement party

The engagement party had started when yash entered the hall decorated by him and his wife. When he had gone home to change and come here , artii wasn't at home, she had left 2 hours early.

He was just greeting the minister when suddenly the light went off and a small light was focused on a figure standing on the stage which was artiiji's idea.

the host came up the stage and invited everyone to come on the dance floor when neha came and stood near him.yash got scared that what artiiji will say if she saw neha near him again and started to search for her in the hall , when he saw the guy that was going to marry neha, what was his name again? He forgot but the boy was currently asking for someone's hand and it wasn't his fianc cause she was standing next to him….

Then he saw to his right only to see a vision of godess in a black seafon saree with a single strap of her blouse…..he was shocked seeing his wife like this and he was further shocked when he saw her flirting and laughing with that boy whose face was so smug as if he had captured the moon….

It should have been him yash thought as artii gave her hand to rahul, and what type of name was rahul anyway, yes it was a stupid one, yash satisfied himself. Rahul was now taking aartii to the dance floor where that stupid dj was playing slow songs, he sweared from next time he wouldn't be calling this idiot…ever!!!!!

As yash saw artii in rahul's arms , her hands on his shoulder and his on her waist which was only his right, he saw red. He forcefully cluched neha's hand and dragged her to the stage and took a place close to his wife and that dumb creature so that he could look out for his wife and if that rahul tried anything then he was so gonna get it….he decided!!!!

Artii was looking at rahul for any sign of emotion on his face when suddenly she saw yashji dragging neha to the dance floor from the corner of her eyes. She had thought that neha would be dragging a reluctant yash but this was other way round, looking at the rage on her husbands face she knew there was something wrong going on….

If she didn't knew better then she would have thought that he was jelous because she was dancing in some other man's arms, but then she was distracted cause she saw the colour of rahul's face change when he noticed his-soon-to-be-bride dancing with someone else.

Both the couples started dancing on the slow number going on with both the ladies waiting for the moment to happen and the men with their face red with jealousy, not that both of the ladies noticed that….both the men were going on cursing each other when the anchor decided that the partners had to be changed, but once….

When the partners were changed neha automatically went to rahul whereas artii came to her husband who was somehow releaved that his wife would no longer dance with some other man cause if that happened he was sure he couldn't have controlled himself from beating the person black and blue…..

Artii was really happy seeig the soon to be wed couple looking longingly in each others eyes after all this was her plan all along when neha had told her yesterday about her problem of rahul not giving her attention, which was also the reason that she had started looking for her prince again and stumbled on yashji…artii had a big smile on her face…..finally!!!!!!!!!!!

Yash saw artii smilng looking at the couple and had to control himself from blasting at her. He somehow controlled himself………

Yash – artiiji aap aise smile kyun kar rahi hai, aur aap rahul se kab milli…

{why are you smiling, when did you meet rahul…}

Artii – (not looking at his face)arre dekhiye na dono kitne acche lag rahe hai saath mein, ekdum made for each other. Pata hai kal neha apne prince ko kyun doondh rahi thi kyunki rahul use attention nahi de raha tha aur use laga ki use kissi aur se shadi karni padegi isliye main bas rahul ko jealous kar rahi thi, maine hi neha ko kaha tha ki wo apke saath dance kare…haina mera idea accha…

{they looking so good with each other, u know why neha was searching for prince cause she thought that rahul doesen't love her anymore and if she has to marry then she'll search her prince so I was making him jealous. It was all my plan to make neha dance with you….}

Artii said all this without looking at her hubby and if she would have then she would have seen the releaved and happy expression on his face which he quickly molded into a serious expression….

Yash then tightened his hands on artii waist which drew her attention to him. He was not having her attention diverted somewhere other than himself after all, she was his wife her attention shouldn't be anywhere else but at him and after all that drama that was his wife's idea he knew what it was to have her as his wife, his forever and he wasn't about to forget that any soon.

Artii looked at yash when she felt pressure on her sensitive waist and what she saw took her breath away , yashjii was looking at her with so much tenderness that she felt her breathe stop….that's when she heard a sweet "breathe artiji" from her husband and she knew that she was finally in love…..


pls tell me if u like it

english translations for you cynthiagem as you requested...


love ya...

vishruta😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yehey! Thank you so much. Hope they add this concept in the tv series. It would add thrill and excitement to the story.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very cute...the whole play is juzz before me !! Damn interesting!!
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Wonderful... Tq so much 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb os !!!
loved all the way 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i hope the CVs are reading it so they'll have Yash get jealous and Arti look a complete bombshell in another man's arms and Yash all RED with jealousy 😃😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it loved loved it loved it!!!!!!!!absolutely beautiful...wonderful job...I really wish this to be portrayed in the serial👏
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This was really nice. Great job
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aww that was cute!
Loved it (:
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Really really great! I loved it!

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