New AbhIya SS:Never Let me Go(EPILOGUE*pg88*Jan14) - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: bellaaa

tanzie wow like it yr
abhay used piya
poor piya suffered alot
miscarriage too
love to see abhiya in this relationship
u shuld cont it
pm me plss



Thanks beenish. Abhay actually loved her so it wasn't using her but he lied. Abhiya will hate each other to the core but can't deny the feelings as well - complicated is the word 😆

Originally posted by: -Sonia-


Awesome update..
Abhiya has a past !! Interesting !
Loved the start..
Continue soon
do pm me
tc



Thanks Sonia. Abhiya has a history and you will know it by time. glad u liked it. i will continue soon.


Originally posted by: luckdiya

superb!yaar its awesome 🤗 ... POor piya & b****** abhay 😡 😆 Shreya is sooo cute ❤️ continue...entertainment shuru kia jaye 😊



Thank you Diya. Abhay ko gali mat do 😛 he is not that bad and nothing like you are thinking. yes, Shreya is cute and apple of Abhay's eyes. will post the CS and next chapter soon 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

looks like u got the story writing madness like me and indu😆..but no complaints haha!!this is a brilliant concept👏...hmm..abhay wanted to use pia for his pleasure?then why did they marry?😕omg!!poor pia..suffering a miscarriage...is this a tragic love story??..



Are bapre..no way 😆 my limit is 3 only. I put an hold on the ff based on book and I will restart it after I finish beautiful disaster or this one.
glad you liked it. Not like this. he fell for her and whatever happened between them was out of love only. but yes, Pia has surely gone through a lot. I donno if its tragic... i haven't decided.



Originally posted by: barki

i love to read full story so please add me in your pm list👏



Will do. thank you.

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Wow tanzie just brilliant start!!!
I loved it.
Plz continue soon and pm me



Thanks Romi.

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

simply outstanding.

i hate abhay for what ever he did to pia...bt nw since she saved shreya's life also and is back in his life...wonder what change and turnaround would it bring in abhay's life.
btw did abhay regret his behaviour towards her.



Thanks Megha. Dont hate him. he did everything out of love. he truly loved her and so did she. everything will change. Abhay surely does regret and that's why he is like this now. He can't forget her but accept her too.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

awsm start tanzie

do continue ... nd pm me ...😃



Thanks dear. will PM you.

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

hey dude no need to ask wheather u continue dis or nnt d ans is +ve.. jst go for dis ff... actually i like and like and like,..,. no no i love d concept and first chapter but dont forget to pm me pls pm me also and plz continue soon



Won't forget and will PM you. thanks.

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

:-* Do i need to say anything?



Chal no 😛

Originally posted by: Divya6696

whoa tanzie.. this is beautiful..!!
so.. abhay-piya are already married.. nd divorced too..!
waiting for aglaa chapter.. eagerly..!!
update soon..

do PM me when u update please.. :) :)



Thanks dear. they r NOT yet divorced 😉 will update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Tanz, i am so sorry i am late!
Fab first chapter and more so becoz my name is there...yay!



No problem Shreyu. your name would be here more and more. 😛

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

brilliant Tanz do i need 2 say u should continue it considering how much i love ur writing coming 2 update loved it like always and dude Abhay used her and left her 😲 how could he do that 😡 and poor her she suffered so much and also had a miscarriage now continue it soon as per ur convenience 😊



Thanks a lot Ankita. 😳
He didnt used her but yes he left her... those r two different situations. she has suffered a lot true. will continue soon.


@Neetu and Koli, trishna, Tanvi: thanks girls.. will surely PM you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Awesome concept Tanzie.I so loved it. Thanku 😊

Pehle maine socha ki shreya will b Abhiya's baby or may Abhiya got divorced or Pia is in coma etc etc thn maine kaha lets not make any guesses & read the updat & all my guesses proved wrong:P😆😆 dimaag jada chalne ki prb bhi hote hai 🤣
LOL Abhay was nerd in college but apni harkato se casanova zyada sound kar rha hai.I guess he cheated Pia coz he wnted 2 take revenge frm her & wnted 2 teach her lesson.Poor Pia she had miscarriage.Lets c wht Pia will do wid Abhay later on?But y Abhay became iron man?Infact it shuld b Pia who shuld b Iron lady coz of wht Abhay did wid her so Y Abhay became so serious whn he was actually playing wid Pia's emotions or is there something else?😉😆😆.Plz cont. & PM nhi kiya toh maar padegi😡😆😆 he was no nerd. he was just loner and moody and people thought he is nerd because he was a scholar. the purpose of fake relationship was surely a revenge game but he fell in love with her and whatever happened between them was out of love only. but later something happened which changed Abhay's decision again and he ditched her. I didn't PMed anyone.. will send after the CS n next chpt...😛
Love u🤗 love u too 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

👏 amazing wrk dear...maza a gya...u rocks...looking frwrd for more updates ...plz pm me ...



sure will do. no problem 😳

Originally posted by: anjali0111

amazing start!!!!!!👏
interesting story!!!!! thanks Anjali.

first i felt bad when i read abt abhay being all alone and iron man n all that but when read further abt his n pia's story i felt he deserves all this...pia's curse has worked i guess😆 to some extent yes he does deserve this loneliness and actually from another pov, its all a stupid misunderstanding.

so thats a simple story of abhay being jerk used pia for pleasure then threw her out of the way or there is something more to it????😕 u think my stories could be simple, EVER? 😉

feeling bad for pia😭...first cheated..then miscarriage then disease ...btw what disease she has??? not really disease.. she was suffering from trauma and depression, then miscarriage so these things took a toll on her health.




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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: zoozoo123

How dare u Tanzie...Mujhe pm nahi kiya...😡...n tht too such a wondeerful story...😭...U know me na...Iam a lazy person...I jst read...press like button n thn run away...😆...Bt u were saved 4m my ghatiya comments...now see wht have u done...aa gayi na mein...😆... I didnt send PM to anyone 😛 yea, nice to see you commenting. 😃

Ok now enough of daant quota...Comg 2 story...I loved it...bt Abt aBHAY...😡...hOW cld he do this 2 her...or is thr any othr reason...I cant feel tht...Feeling bad 4 Piya...Jaldi se update kar...I dnt have patience...😆...n pm bhi chahiye... Abhay is still in love with her, both are actually but at the same type they hate each other too.. - complicated it is see 😆 I will update the CS n next chapter soon.



@Vampireking, Iqra, Peehu, Shivani: thanks.. will PM you for sure.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

**I dont have time to put the photos so if you want to know about any character ask me in comment later. I will put them in note. And Aryan is my Aryan from Till the end of time only 😆

All the character's name not written in bold are deceased**


--- Character sketch ---

Abhay Raichand: A charming scholar, sharp business tycoon and partial owner of the Raichand Empire. Known for his arrogance and professionalism. Likes to be all by himself. Treats his father as second god. Whatever his father will say he will listen. Closet person on earth: 5 years old niece Shreya. Single (atleast people know it till now)

Rajlaxmi Raichand: Widow mother of Chand Raichand and grandmother of Abhay. Stronger than the age specially by authority no less than Abhay.

Chand Raichand: A rutheless business tycoon who doesn't value anything other than profit.

Haseena Raichand (deceased): When Abhay was 5 years old she died with a very freaky accident of short circuit.

Aryana Juneja (deceased): Apple of Abhay's eyes. His elder sister. Died along with her husband while their anniversary celebration in Wasaga beach. Reason: another freakish accident.

Sunil Juneja (deceased): died in a accident with wife Aryana while their daughter was only 3 and a half years old.

Shreya Juneja: 5 years old daughter of Aryana and Sunil who now lives with Raichand family. Only light in their lives.

Pia Dobriyal/Raichand: Youngest daughter of Arnab Dobriyal. One of the successful Indian business tycoons of Toronto, Canada. Daddy's princess. Beautiful, Popular, scholar but sometimes snobbish. Secretly married to Abhay Raichand and lost a child.

Sugandh Dobriyal (deceased): Died while giving birth to Pia.

Arnab Dobriyal (deceased): One of the successful Indian business tycoons of Toronto, Canada. Died in heart attack after hearing his daughter got married to Abhay Raichand, pregnant and now abandoned.

Misha Dobriyal/Rathod: Settled with United States with husband Kabir Singh Rathod. Eldest daughter of Arnab Dobriyal. A painter and loves Pia a lot.

Dr. Aryan Malhotra: Abhay's childhood best friend. Inspite of being separated in Canada and India, always know each other inside out. He is charming, funny and amicable with his super patient healing abilities.

Edited by Phoenix.Xeelan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb update tanzie!! ⭐️ I loved every bit of it. Omg abhay thinks the punishment is right, but I guess it's not right, a miscarriage is not just a simple thing na. Abhay must be feeling bad na inside. I loved that hospital cabin part, that was so beautifully described. I guess piya hurted abhay or something like that kya? Hope u will answer all this soon as the story will proceed more. Loved abhay's granny and the slap, lolzzz.Last part was damn cute, poor abhay now have to tolerate disaster with hurricane, that is piya's tantrums and sweet revenge and nany is with piya too. continue soon.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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