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Posted: 13 years ago
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"Kya kar diya tumne mere saath Khushi... ... Itni koshish ki... Itni zyaada koshish ki tumse nafrat karne ki - par nafrat nahi kar paaya... Khud ka dil meri baathi nahi maanta."


Edited by Shravani_21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice future track... very interesting...
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Chapter 3: Door of Destiny




In Mumbai

Tall man: "Akshay, is mamma ready?", he asked the kid

Kid(Akshay, Akki): "She is bringing my lunch box" and then they both stood near the car which Arnav is searching for

Arnav: Listening to their conversation he said to himself "Akshay, cute name but who is this boy?"in a lost voice. He then moved one step only to get stopped, dumb struck; he did not believed in what he is seeing, Kushi running towards him with all the grace. She looked the same, draped in a saree, looked bit modern, tamed, angelic, beautiful as ever. He started running towards her only to get stopped once again, as she started shouting "Akki " and stopped by the car"

Akshay(Akki): Mamma, make it fast, I am getting late, tum ek bhi kaam teek sai nahi karsakthi ho kya (can't you to do one work perfectly)

Kushi: She gave one on his head, and said "Ek tho tiffin box andhar bhool gaya and upper se hum per,... Chodo, aur phechee hato, she sat in the car along with him" and the car left. (translation: first thing you left your box inside and you are shouting at me)

Arnav: is all dumb struck, millions of questions in his eyes, who is that guy, who is this kid?, why is he calling kushi as mamma?, he followed their car. The car stopped at a school.

Akshay: "Mamma, bye".

Kushi: " Akki, Buaji will pick you up in the evening as we have a meeting today" and the car moved.

Arnav: Meeting? We? He started following the car. "What the..., Red light", he got jammed in the traffic, and the car escaped. "Dammit, I missed the car". For a second his mind stopped working, then he said "oh ya, the kid... , at school..." and stared driving back to school.


Raizada Mansion, Delhi

Payal: I have to tell him this good news, he will be very happy" and is eagerly waiting for Aakash, it is already 11pm, she heard someone opening the door and started running down stairs happily.

Aakash: OMG Payal, you scared me, why are you in an hurry?

Payal: I want to say you something, go get refresh soon and lets have dinner first.

Aakash: Please payal, I don't have time for your stupid chat, also I ate outside in a business meeting. I am tired today, let us talk tomorrow.

Payal: She was all disturbed, tears rolled in her eyes. All these 5 years she tried to hard to become something and today she was selected as an assistant manager for a very big semiconductor company. She wanted to share her happiness and show him that she is a women of substance, but he did not cared. She was all in thoughts "Does he still love me?", "Why does he always neglect me" and slowly she went into sleep.

Back to Mumbai

Arnav went to school, and asked the Receptionist their, that he needs details of a kid.

Receptionist: Sir, we cannot give details of kids to a stranger.

Arnav: See the kid knows me and you can even confirm it with the kid.

Receptionist: Ok sir, You give your details, also if you say his name, we will call the kid to confirm,

Arnav: His name is Akshay.

Receptionist: "sir, could you please say his full name?"

Arnav: Could you please search for "Akshay singh Raizada"

Receptionist: Sir, there is no one with that name

Arnav: could you please check with first name Akshay and whose mothers name is Kushi Kumari gupta singh Raizada

Receptionist: Sir, yes we have 5 kids with that first name Akshay and one kids mother's name matches with Kushi kumara Gupta

Arnav: " Yes could you please call that boy"

Receptionist: She called an office boy and told him to get that boy.

Arnav: Yes she is my wife, he said to receptionist.

Receptionist: But sir, your said your last name as singh Raizada, but her last name is different, how is she your wife?"

Arnav: He was shocked, tears brimmed in his eyes, "what.."

Receptionist: "Yes sir, her last name name is different, Her full name is Mrs. Kushi Kumari Gupta singh Ma''.

Arnav: "Stop it", he did not want to hear the last name. He feared for listening to that. He remembered tall man, Kushi and the Kid together and said to himself how could you do this to me Kushi, he was all broken"

Receptionist: Sir,the kid came and she asked Akshay "do you know that man?"

Akshay: Yes miss, I know him.

Receptionist: Ok go to him. He wants to talk to you

Akshay: Hello Mr. Stranger, what are you doing here? What do you want to talk to me?

Arnav: He took the kid in his arms, and asked, "is your mother happy?"

Akshay: "yes, she is very happy and she loves me a lot"

Arnav:" you are a lucky one" and said "I just came here to say you good Bye as I am leaving Mumbai".

Akshay: Ok, but why? I know you from the park, and bla bla bla non stop questioning without allowing Arnav to answer them.

Arnav: He thought about Kushi seeing that kid, he is not stopping, going on and on with his never ending questions, he closed the boys mouth and said bye, I must leave now.

Akshay: "By the way what is your name?"

Arnav: "Arnav singh Raizada"

Akshay: "Oh that's great, even my father's name starts with Arnav".

Arnav: "What the'" , what do you mean? I mean, what is your father's name?

Akshay: "Arnav Mallik"

Arnav: He was all shocked, listening to this. Tears of happiness, couldn't utter a single word,all shocked, confused, millions of questions in his mind. He just felt quenched who is all thirsty, very happy and asked the kid " who is the other guy who dropped you at the school along with your mamma?"

Akshay: "Oh, he is Rohit Maamu, Mummy's friend, they both work in the same company"

Arnav: He felt like so stupid for his weird thinking and asked him with all love "where is your father?"

Akshay: He was all depressed and he removed a book from his bag and wrote something. Then said "Bye, I guess you are getting late, you should leave" and he turned back and stared going back to his class.

Arnav: he called him back but the kid did not want to listen.

He is happy, but he has million question unanswered, who is this kid?, Is he my kid? Why Kushi gave our name as his parents? Is Kushi pregnant when she left? If so, why did she not mentioned it? Did she adopted him? like that many...are eating his mind


Note: Silent readers please do comment, Dont make shravani a bitch😡😡.


P10)
Chapter 2: A Glimpse of Hope
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59222012

P18) Chapter 4: Paths Crossed
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59627835

Edited by Shravani_21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys i updated chapter 3, enjoy reading
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Posted: 13 years ago
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precap is amazing ... chota packet arnav ... wow
waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: skp2007

precap is amazing ... chota packet arnav ... wow

waiting for next part



thank you and yes there are lot more interesting twists comming in next chapters, stay tuned
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Plz PM me . Whn u update... love Payash.. 😊

So sad , for Anjali😭
Agar Shyam change ho gya hai , to plz bring him back in ff..😊



I added you, just check it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow... plz update soon/////😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow... that sounds intersting.
this reminds me of a telugu movie "daddy".
waitng for ur next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it like father like son

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