ArHi FF:Two Star Crossed Lovers, Chp6 updt 12/7/12 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice stry

Plz add me to ur PM list



Thank you Afsa
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: alonebird

interesting OS,

continue...



Thk you, sure i will continue it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63


what do you think?
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"Loving you was not my dream, loving you was my passion."



Edited by Shravani_21 - 13 years ago
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Chapter 2: A Glimpse Of Hope



Guyz this chapter is a build up for several sub plots. So you might not get more ArHi. But i promise from next chapter you will see ArHi most of the time

In Mumbai

Arnav finished his first day business meeting and went back to the hotel.

Maami: Arnav bittuva aagay thum, Why are you so latez
(translation: Arnav, why are you so late)

Arnav: Maami, as it is evening i got stuck in the heavy traffic.

Maami: Okeyz, you go get refresh and i will order your favorite evening snacks. She is enjoying while watching fashion TV and asked Arnav to close the window as she is getting disturbed because of children shouting in the park.

Arnav: He went to the window and got a sight of the little kid, whom he met yesterday, playing with his friends.

Lil Kid: "Hurry up guyz, look at that star it is falling down. Close your eyes and make a quick wish"

Arnav: He instantly remembered Anjali's words and closed his eyes and wished to get his Kushi back. They he opened his eyes and looked at the boy.

Lil Kid: He opened his eyes after a long time and has taken out a book from his bag and wrote something.

Arnav's Phone: tring tring

Arnav: "Hello, haan Payal, how is Ananya and when are you taking Di to the hospital?", and got seriously involved in the call and barely noticing what he is seeing through the window.

Suddenly he stopped talking and exclaimed "Buaji!". He did not believe his eyes, he has seen Buaji in a car near the park.

He ran down to the park, and started running behind the car shouting "stop the car, stop the car", but the window is closed, what all he could see is a back of women, who is driving the Car.

He was very sure that other women must be his Kushi. He went back running to his Hotel, to find about the car details.


Raizada Mansion, Delhi

Payal helped Ananya with her homework and told her to call Naani to the dining table. Meanwhile, she went to bring Anjali. Ananya is 6 years old daughter of Anjali. Anjali went into hysteresis, to depression state, lost all her senses after knowing the truth of Shyam. Payal brought her in the wheel chair to the dining table and fed her.

Naani:" Payal bittiya, did Aakash came home?".

Payal: In a sad voice, said "No".


////////////////////flash back///////////////////////////////////////////


After Kushi left RM, Aakash has taken over most of the responsibilities of the AR industries so that Arnav has less pressure, as he was already in depression and also he has to take care of Di. Payal tried her best to steal some interest from Aakash, but Aakash is not good in multitasking as Arnav, so he completely neglected Payal. PayAsh has no children yet.


Payal spent many lonely nights, to survive this loneliness she started her MBA. She know that Aakash is interested in women with some identity. She struggled hard, all these four years, and this is her last week to finish her MBA. She made her mind to become a woman of identity whom Aakash wants, so that she can get her husband's love back. Even Aakash has started noticing this difference but he never cared much to tell her the same.

////////////////////Flash back ends/////////////////////////////////////


Next day morning Payal took Anjali to the hospital.

Dotor: After some tests he said "Payal, these medicines will never work on her until she really wants herself to live. She has to get her confidence back. She has to try from her side, otherwise we cannot help"

Payal, could you please wait outside for a while as I have to finish some more tests.

Payal: came out of doctors room, and was shocked to see SHyam crying, holding Ananya in his arms. "How dare you to touch her" and pulled Ananya from him and told him to get out.

Shyam: Payal, I am a changed man now, I cannot live without my daughter and Anjali.

Doctor: he rushed out of his room and asked payal who is the guy who was talking now.

Shyam: "I am the one doctor"

Doctor: "could you please come into my room, as Anjali is reacting to your voice. She just moved her hand."

Payal: "Doctor, please no. He is the reason for her state. I dont want him to see her". She was hell bent in agreeing for shyam meeting Anjali and shyam left the place.

Doctor: Payal, I think it's a good idea of bringing Shyam into her life, as she is reacting to him. And above that it's your families wish.


Back to Mumbai

Arnav: He banged the door open, all panting and called Aman and told him to find the details of the car number immediately.

Maami: "Arnav bittuva, Kya hoyi gava. Bhat'z the matterjj" looking at his restlessness

Arnav: Maami, I have just seen Buahi in the park and told her about the car number. Aman called him back and told that it is on the name of Madhumati and told him the address.

Next day morning Arnav went to the address which the car belongs. It is very close to the park where his hotel room is. It is a very big apartment with many rooms. He did not know from where to start. So he asked a random guy who is passing his way for House No: 506, and he pointed to a room where a Tall handsome guy is standing and said "it is that room".

A kid ran into the arms of that tall man. He held the boy and asked him "is mamma ready?"The kid is none other, but the same whom Arnav knew from the park.


Guys in this chapter i included Payash, Anjali and Shyam, let me know about your suggestions. Should i continue there story or just go with ArHi.

(Dear you forgot to press the like button and comment on it) 😊.


P5) Chapter 1: I am lost because of you

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2989114/arhi-ff-two-star-crossed-lovers-chp6-updt-12-7-12?pn=5

P11) Chapter 3: Door of Destiny
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59488584

Edited by Shravani_21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
ohhh it is going to be intresting and what is snake doing back i cant belive that he changed but okay lets wait but anjali is also responsing to him not good but okay now waitignwhat arni will do
but i also think that akash is not doing anything because maybe he feels bad for kushi wairting for more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Guys, i updated chapter 2, and i hope you like it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
"The courses of true love never did run smooth"



Edited by Shravani_21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Plz PM me . Whn u update... love Payash.. 😊
So sad , for Anjali😭
Agar Shyam change ho gya hai , to plz bring him back in ff..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
continue soon,,,,, loved it😊

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