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plz plz give us a update plz plz...
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Loved both the teaser...
Wat Maan gave to Geet.

N wat happen to Geet???

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Jaldi update karo dear waiting 2 read abt their 1st fight. Plz ab aur intezar nahi hoti ppplllzzz
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valli post the next part soon me waitng yaar
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THIS LIFE IS YOURS
PART 25
Hai friends.
thanks for the friends who gave cmnts n likes

maan:sry geet..i must not have left u alone..

geet:maan..it happens to all girls ..not only me..vikram jese insaan sab jagape hotha hai..

maan:phir bhi..when I know his intensions are not gud..i must not have left u alone..

geet closed his mouth..

maan,lets go home..n forget this topic here itself..

she said..but her hands on his lips created a fire in him..his eyes expressions n the breathe on her palm made her realize what she is doing..she immediately took her palm from him..

geet:im sorry..n don't ask sorry again..it happens some times..

he nodded still in the spell of her soft touch..

geet:shall we go..dadi will be waiting for us..

maan started to drive to mansion..his eyes caught the attention of a big shop..the showcase having toys dresses for all..

maan remembered that he promised to give a toy to jaanvi ..he stopped the car infront of the mall..

geet:what happened maan..

maan:I'll be back in 15 minutes..i want to buy something for jaanu..

geet smiled n said ok...

Maan went inside the shop n looked for a teddy'which he promised to give jaanu'the shop keeper showed him all sizes of teddy..maan choosed a big one which was pink in colour..then his attention went to the rhymes cds..he bought that too..when he was waiting for bill his attention caught the board'for mothers after pregnancy..he entered that partition ..he looked around n his eyes fixed on one thing..he took a half dozen in it n billed..

Shopkeeper:sir,there are more for mothers..n he showed some more stuffs..which made maan turn red..

Shopkeeper:this is stretchmark remover sir..it will be very useful for womens..

Maan thought went to geets image when jaanvi pulled her saree n geet was standing in blouse..he has seen the marks in her stomach..

He took that also n avoided other things..

Maan st:I hope geet accepts this..what will she think if I give this to her'I hope she doesn't misunderstand me'

Maan paid the bill..n collected the bags..

Here in car..baby started to search her feed in sleep..geet folded her legs in seat..she tried hard n removed her back buttons..n gave way for baby..when baby got what she needed she slept again..but did not leave geet..

Geet:ive made u spoiled jaanu..you are not leaving me..n this is my most embarrassing moment before ur papa..

geet weared maans shirt one sided so she covered baby under her n her loosely hanging blouse was covered under it..

maan came back with few bags in his hands..n shoving in back seat of car..

geet :how much u will purchase maan..we can keep a toy shop in our house..

maan:I can buy toy factory for our child..

geet looked out the window with a small smile..maan always addressed jaanvi as our child'.

Maan saw her wearing his shirt n babys position..he concentrated on the road..

They both reached KM..maan came n opened geets side of car..n asked to give jaanvi to him..

Geet gave her to him n he moved to their room..

Geet came after him wearing his coat fully..carrying the bags he has bought..

Maan placed baby in bed..

Geet went to wardrobe to take a saree to change..

Maan cleared his throat to get her attention..

Maan:wo..umm'geet'wo'this is for u'

He gave the packet in her hands n rushed to washroom not able to see her reaction'

Geet was surprised by his act'the way he ran away from the place made her confuse'she opened the pack n saw nighties in it..

Geet:whats in this he ran away from here..waise,I don't wear night dress nowadays..then why he gave me..

That's when her eyes went to the zips in nighties..

Geet:omg..feeding nighties..with coats over it..

She blushed seeing it..

he must have noticed me struggling in sarees at night..n he bought this..

maan took a bath ..he took long time than ever..

the thought what if geet rejects made him think..what will he answer why he bought it..how can he say he saw her bra marks red n blue on her..

he slowly opened the door n came outside'he saw geet near wardrobe still in same sari n coat..maan avoided meeting her n went to dresser..same was geet..she now went to washroom to freshup..when she came out..maan felt relief.she was wearing the night dress he gave..he left the breathe which he was holding from the time he gave the dress to geet..she did not misunderstand me..

geet:hmm..wo..tha..

she stopped thinking..not to say thanks to friends..

both maneet slided on either sides of jaanvi n slept..when jaanvi woke up in middle geet felt relief feeding her opening the zip of curves..it did not expose her much as blouse did..

the next day geet was taking the baby soap in washroom when she saw the stretch mark remover kept there..

geet:omg..did he noticed that also..is that so visible to all..he has kept this here..

at night maan smelled the lavender coming from geet..n smiled she has applied the remover..

they never said their needs..sometimes their silent language is also enough for them to know each other..

the next days went smoothly with maneets dream land,drooling sections,attractions,admirations,playing with jaanvi,Vicky n dadi..

n the week end came..

dadi has went to a function..n Vicky to his friends place..

geet must go to college...geet packed all things for baby which she will need..

she freshed n changed to a sari..maan looked at her..her mangal sutr n the kumkum added her beauty..their was no artificial makeup..she took the bag gifted by maan n stuffed the books needed..she took baby n looked at her..

geet was holding baby..like she is holding her life.. n not giving to anyone

she was continuosly cribbing..

how jaanvi will be taken care in between works..who will take care of her..her food..her change of dress'

maan just wanted to pull her cute chubby cheeks n say now u look like baby jaanu..but he controlled himself..

maan:geet,im there na..then pinky n adi is also there..

geet:phir bhi..how can I be in peace leaving jaanvi alone..

dadi is also not there..

maan:geet,its only matter of 7 hrs.9.00.-4.00.u will be back to office after ur college finishes..


as it was her first day maan with jaanvi went to drop geet in college..

geet stopped him before entering college..

maan:why geet..

geet:maan,if anyone knows im ur wife they will give me special respect..i don't want that..

maan:so what u want me to do..if u want u can hide u r married..

geet:maan,I'll never do that..all will know me as married..n I'll not tell who I am till they themselves find out..i want all to be friends..

maans st:she hided her princess status only to get a normal life..here too she needs same..

maan knowing this accepted it...

geet half heartedly left to college giving a tight hug to jaanvi..her eyes moisted leaving her..she again took her n kissed her madly..

maan took baby from her..

maan:jaanu,say bye to mama..

jaanvi waved her hands n geet left to college..

maan called the principal n requested him not to introduce as mrs.khurana,as she wished to have a gud friendship with all..

geet entered her class..she called maan..

geet:maan.have u reached office..what is jaanu doing..

mmaan:geet,we are still in way to office..its not 5 min yet ive dropped u geet..n as usual jaanvi is having fun with site seeing..

geet:hmmm..ok

maan:say..have u found ur class

geet:yes..

maan"have u made friends..

geet:not yet..i just entered n called u.i think proff is coming..i'll keep..take care of baby..

maan:ok..

the professor came n they all were given a formal introduction.between all girls n boys..mostly all were in job n persuing the masters in week ends..n must say all were attracted by the beauty of geet..she was unique among them .wearing a sari.it was geets turn..

proff:introduce urself..

geet:my name is geet..

classmates:u look like married..i mean u r wearing the symbols of married women

geet:yes..

proff:about ur family..

geet:ive my dadi,my bil,my husband n my daughter..

classmates:hmm..u hv daughter..

geet:yes..

classmates:u don't look like a mother..

geet:what can I do for that..

classmates:about ur husband?his name..his work..

geet:.. i think he is not ur classmate..so,I must share details about him'I can say he is a businessman..no more details..

she played with words without answering them..

classmate:hmm..seems u r hiding ur husband from us..looks like a hot hunk..dont worry we will not steal him from you..

all the class bursted into laughter..

geet rolled her eyes n said..if u want u can try..but he wont look after u..

classmates:so much of confidence on u..

geet:no..not on me..but on him..she said proudly without knowing the fact which her innerself knows maan will not look another girl than her..

proff:nice to hear mrs.geet..n I think we can move to the subject about todays topic..

he started to take lessons'though geet concentrated her mind wavered to jaanvi'after the first class,she called maan..

geet:hello,jaanvi kesi hai..she is not crying na..is she troubling you..what is she doing..did she had anything..ive kept her food in the bag..aur..

maan:geet.geet..hold..hold..

maan:saas tho lo..she is fine..pinky fed her cerelac..n she is playing silently..dont worry about her..concentrate on ur class..

geet kept her phone..

maan ,pinky n adi were sincerely working on a project..

the next classes also geets heart was going all the while thinking about jaanvi..n often she called maan,pinkky or adi'what is she doing ..how is she..

n her calls were disturbing maan'.he couldn't concentrate on work..

it was lunch time..geet was feeling heavy..she called maan'

Maan took the phone n saw the name flashing..

It was again geet..

In this 3 hrs,she has called all upteenth time..n maan was getting really frustrated as her calls has made their work disturbing..

Maan literally shouted at her without even hearing what she is trying to say..

For gods sake geet,jaanvi is my daughter..n I know how to take care of her..dare u call again.,till ur class finish..he cut the call without even giving a chance to speak..

He don't know what he said in anger..but he wanted geet to concentrate on her studies..so,only he shouted..

Geet was in verge of crying..

Maan has said jaanvi as his daughter for first time..she was brutally hurt..

She did not have her lunch..she attended the next half like a doll..

Her mind was repeating the words maan said..my daughter..isnt she my daughter also..am I not her mother..

Maan was looking at his phone for geets call..

Why she is not calling now..its been so many hrs..she must have called atleast once..then why?

Now he is not able to work'

Adi n pinky smiled at each other..

Maan missing his geet..they told they will finish the final work n excused themselves..

Maan was sitting n thinking about geet..still expecting her call..

It was 4..

Her classes will be over..she will come here now..maan smiled'I missed her so much today..

Here geeet came out of her class giving a weak smile to her classmates..she was crossing the parking lot,when driver called her..

Mam,our car is here..

Hmm..

He opened the door n she sat there lost in maans words..

Driver:mam,mansion jaun..

Geet did not hear him..

Geet:hmmm..

The car reached the mansion..

Mam,ghar aagayi..

He opened the door n geet walked inside like a zombie

Dadi:you came geet..how was ur first day..

Geet :hmmm..

She walked to her room ..

Dadi:what happened to her..she never behaves like this..

Driver:dadima,mam ki bag..she left inside the car itself..

Dadi:ok..

Driver:dadi..wo..mam is not her usual self..she is lost somewhere in her thoughts..

Dadi:I'll see..u can go now..

Dadi went to maneets room n saw it was closed..she opened n saw the room was dark..she switched on the lights n saw geet in bed cuddled like a ball..

Dadi came n sat near her..she caressed her hair..

Dadi:what happened beta..are u tired..

When her hands touched her forehead,she saw geet having temperature n shivering..

Dadi:achanak,tumhe bukar kese hua..

Dadi panicked n saw geets hands over her chest..

Dadi:geet.are u having pain..when u fed baby last..

The concern in dadi's voice n jaanvi's thought broke her..

Geet started to cry bitterly...

Geet:dadi,kya jaanvi meri beti nehi hai..

Dadi:what question is this geet..she is your daughter..

Geet:then why maan said,jaanvi is his daughter..

Dadi sensed something wrong went between two..first geet must be taken care..she will solve their problem later..

dadi called maan..

In office,maan was looking at the door waiting for his geet to come..

Dadi:maan,where u are..

Maan:in office dadi..

Dadi:where is jaanvi

Maan:she is sleeping..

Dadi:I give u 10 minutes..come with baby to mansion as soon as possible..

Maan:but dadi..i ve works n meetings lined up..

Dadi: to hell with ur work'come n see what u have done to geet..

Her tone was very serious n the name geet alarmed him..

Geet is in mansion..she was supposed to come here to Kc..what happened to her'

He took the sleeping jaanvi without waking her n rushed to mansion'

Dadi called nakul n asked him to bring hot water ..she removed geets upper clothes ..she dipped the cloth in hot water n kept over her chest.geet hissed in pain..she repeated the process collecting geets milk in babys bottle..geet was blabbering what maan said when she called him..dadi thought of giving peace of mind to maan when he comes home..

Maan entered mansion n asked nakul where is dadi n geet..

Nakul:in ur room..

Maan rushed to his room..he found his room closed..he opened n saw geet lying on bed showing her bare back to him..the blouse n her inner was lying in bed .her pallu loosely hanging near her waist..her upper was covered with a towel...dadi was near her doing something which he couldn't understand..

N dadi saying geet:thodi der aur beta..fir dard kam hoga..

Maan:dadi..

Maan neared geet n saw her teary face.wet cloth kept on her forehead .she has kept her eyes closed..she looked pale n vulnerable..dadi kept the babys bottle which she filled from geet..

Dadi: don't maan..first give jaanvi to me..

Maan:dadi what happened to geet..

Dadi took baby n placed near geets bossom..

Dadi:u urself see..first say me when she fed jaanvi last..

Maan: she woke up at 5 that time she was feeding her..

Dadi: after that

Maan:then she went to college n jaanvi was with me..so she didn't feed..

Dadi:did she called u at lunch time..did u heared what she tried to say..how can u hurt her by saying harsh words..

Maan:dadi..what u r trying to say I don't understand..yes she called me..not once many times..but what I said u r taunting me..

Dadi looked at geet..who was now feeling better by jaanvi latching near her..

Dadi: how can u say jaanvi is ur daughter n differenciate geet..how can u say u can take care of baby without her..

Maan:mei..kab..

Then he remembered ..

Maan:oh..shit..dadi..i never meant it..how can i..its a slip of tongue..so only she didn't call me after that..

He cursed now for his words..n geet was not still opening her eyes which made maan worry..

Maan:geet ko kya hua dadi..

Dadi:she called u to bring baby to her..she was feeling heavy..n as she did not feed her for nearly 12 hrs the milk clotted..n how will u know..how it pains for a mother...she got now fever bcoz of it..i ve removed her clot by giving hot water massage..still it belongs to jaanvi..n the amount of feed she takes..

N u..u have broken her inside..she was blabbering in her fever u differrenciat ed geet , not as babys mother..try to clear it..

Dadi gave them space n went out..if it's a slip of tongue then maan will make it..she knew..

Maan sat there near geet n slowly touched her forehead..her fever was high..her one hand cocooning baby n the other trying to hold her pain in chest'maan slowly touched where she was touching..her soft skin was hard n she winced in pain..

Maan:im sorry geet..i did not mean those words..

He lowered n kissed her forehead..his first kiss to her..

He started replacing wet clothes on her forehead..he can hear her murmuring..

Geet:maan,she is also my baby na..i cant live without her..

Maan had tears in his eyes..though it was not intentional,he has hurt her..

He came to her ears n said..

Geet,wo tumhari bachi hai..mujse zyadha haq tumhe hai..she is ur girl..ur baby..n will remain till last..mujei maaf kardho pls..

His words was soothing her..she tried to open her eyes..but failed..

Geet take rest..you don't want to stress now..

Maan wanted to check baby..but now he don't know what to do..it was not like other days..she was fully bare n the half shoulders itself was attracting him..his hands itched to move over her skin..he stopped thinking about her position ..

Dadi came with kada for geet..

Maan:dadi,you be with geet for 10 minutes..i'll make a call n come..

He moved calling adi to cancel his meetings which were next..he came to dadi n gave her geets night dress to change..

Maan:dadi,u change her..i'll also change n come..im not going back to office.

Dadi was happy..maan is not going back..it means he will look after geet..

Dadi somehow changed geet..baby was still sleeping..maan came out..

Maan:dadi,I'll take care of geet..

Dadi:ok beta..I'll send soup for geet n medicines also..if she woke up give her..

Maan:Hmm..

Maan took baby n placed in crib..when they are in their room jaanvi always slept between them..today maan want to take care of geet ..he cant keep the distance..he came n sat closely to geet..he continued keeping wet cloth in her forehead till her fever reduced..he hesitatingly kept his hands over her softness to check if she was still in pain..as jaanvi has taken her feed,geet did not have pain now..maan took geet in his arms n leaned to bed post.kissing her ears...

Maan:im sorry geet..jaanvi is ur girl..

Geet in her sleep..thanks maan..she snuggled close to him finding solace there..

After a while jaanvi woke up n saw her mom n dad sleeping'vicky who entered to check geets fever n jaanvi..took jaanvi silently n moved down without disturbing maneet..

Jaanvi was busy playing with dadi n Vicky..

Geet was feeling better n she woke up..she tried to move ..then she saw she was sleeping over maan..his arms wrapped around her waist..she saw the time it was 6..maan never comes to home at this time..then how..n what I am doing in his arms..how can i..

Maan missed the warmth over him..he opened his eyes n saw geet starring at him..she was remembering what happened that day..n her face soon fell down n her eyes showed her pain..

Maan cupped her face immediately..

Im sorry geet..it came out of my mouth..i was disturbed by ur continuous phone calls n in that I blutterred which I must not have said..

Tears filled her eyes..

Maan:geet,I hate tears in ur eyes..i promised myself to give you all happiness..but today I am the cause for ur tears..give me punishment geet..but don't cry..i cant see u in tears..pls..im sorry for my words..i didn't mean it..jaanvi is ur daughter..more than mine..u only have the right on her..pls muje maaf kardo..

Geet looked at him..he was really repenting for what he said..n as he said may be my continuous calls has made him irritated n he said so..

Geet:u did not mean it na..

Maan:I know geet jaanvi is ur life...when I married u to keep u as her mother. how can I take ur life from you.believe me geet..

Geet sniffed:sachi..she asked like a small girl

Maan touched her nose n said muchi..

Geet:I want baby now..

Maan looked the crib ..it was empty..

Maan:where is she..she was sleeping in crib..he panicked..

Geet:Vicky must have taken with him..

Maan:are u sure..

Geet:I know..when he comes from college he will take jaanvi with him to play..

Maan touched her forehead

Maan: ur temperature is down..how are u feeling now..

Geets hands automatically went to check herself..

Geet:im fine maan..

They both came down n saw jaanvi playing there..seeing geet jaanvi jumped to her n geets eyes moisted ..one day away from jaanvi looked like a century for her..she kissed her madly n jaanvi also kissed her making bath in her saliva..

Maan:im sorry geet..really'

Geet:maan..stop it..u said na u didn't mean it..then y r asking sry..leave it..

Dadi was happy to see them normal again..

Dadi asked how she is n how is her pain..geet said she is fine now..then they all had their coffee together..maan asked about her college n she said what all happened there from start to end..evn the questions they asked about maan..she was again in her usual self n maan found himself drowning in geet again'


precap:meri ghar aayi ek nanhi pari

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Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago
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Superb part.
I loved it.
Wow maan brought zip wali nighty & scratch remover to geet & geet accepted.
Edited by SONU_29 - 13 years ago
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Didi first of all thank u sooo much…love u didi …hummaaa….then cuming to update , lovely didi…I felt like family oriented subject, not like usually naintara, sameera or other craps , but really really different…u showed my maaneet totally different…

Didi the way my maan took care of his geet…oh my maan brought night dress, mark remover.,.. oh no see didi how my maan caring for his geet…the way maan running to bathroom to hide himself, im laughing imagining that scenes...geet wored that one, so sweet…oh maan u really big buddhu, don't know wat to talk and then u will regret…but wat to do my geet will forgive u so soon , that's my geet and me too….and my maan know how to manofly his geet and see she atonce for give him…lovely scene didi… maan 1st kiss wow superb… they hugging and sleeping wow…cute didi…

Naughty maan, .. why u seeing geet's sketchmarks , u naughty , but maan don't think so much, my valli didi will make u too drink lots of water,…so be careful… before that u act fast….didi wat is tis u made him drinking water, tis is not fair….bechrae my maan always giving a long breath seeing his geet like tis… didi u r feeling with my maan's emotions…tis is not right…hmmm….lovely lovely lovely update…I loved it didi…te way u presented….who is that nani pari…

Edited by Desigirls12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
no precap??
it was awesome update.
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Originally posted by: mannu1988

no precap??
it was awesome update.

oops sry dear..now see..precap below the part...
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Update was owessome


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Edited by Angelic_analyst - 13 years ago

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