FAN FIC

THIS IS MY SECOND FANFIC IN THIS SECTION. HERE I AM GONNA CONTINUE FROM WHEN PRENA GOES TO THE JAIL. NOONE COULD DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT.SHE HAD SEVEN YEARS OF PRISON. IT WAS ALREADY 5 YEARS. PREM AND DEBONITA WERE MARRIED AND ONE DAY. THERE WAS A KNOCK ON THE BAJAJ HOUSE'S DOOR. KUKI OPENED IT. SHE WAS SO SHOCKED SHE COULD NOT EVEN MOVE.MR. BAJAJ AND TUSHAR WERE TALKING ABOUT BUSINESS IN THE LIVING ROOM.

KUKI: PA....PA..... TU...TUSHAR...BHAIYA.....

MB: KYA HUA KUKI BETA.

KUKI: IDHAR AAIYA.

MB: KYA HAI?

HE GOES AND SEES PRERNA STANDING AT THE DOOR. HE COULDN'T UTTER A WORD.

P: MAIN ITNI SAALO BAAD GHAR AAYI HU MUJHE ANDAR AANEKE LIYE BHI IJAJAT LENI PADEGI

THEY THOUGHT THEY WERE DREAMING AT FIRST BUT AFTER HEARING HER THEY WERE TOO EXCITED.

MB: PRERNA.

THEY HUGGED. SHE CAME IN. TUSHAR WAS SO SURPRISED. HE CALLED EVERYBODY DOWN. EVERYONE WERE SO HAPPY TO SEE HER. EVERYON WAS THERE BUT PREM.

MB: PAR PRERNA TUMHE TO 7 SAAL KI SAZAA HUI THI NA TO PHIR?

P: MUJHE KISSINE CHUDAYA HAI.

MB: KISNE?

SOMEONE ENTERS THE ROOM. SHE WAS WEARING A SAARI WITH BLACK COAT( THE THING THAT LAWYERS WEAR) . SHE WAS NO OTHER THAN MUKTI. SNEHA RAN AND HUGGED HER.

P: MUKTI KO MERE BAAREME PATA CHALA TO USNE BAHAT TEHKIKAT KI AUR PHIR SARE SABUT SHARAD KE KHILAF THA TO MEIN BAHAR AGAYI.

M: SIR MAINE AAPKO KUCH NAHI KAHA AAP NARAJ TO NAHI HAI NA?

MB: NAHI BETA. AND THANKYOU.

M: ACHHA CHOTI MAA MAIN CHALTI HU .

AS SHE WAS WALKING OUTSIDE AND PREM WAS COMING IN SO THEY CAME FACE TO FACE. ACTUALLY MUKTI WAS SO CHANGED. HER HAIR WAS A BIT LONGER AND SHE WASN'T WEARING ANY SPECTS INSTEAD SHE HAD LENS. SHE HAD A LIGHT MAKE UP AND LOOKED REALLY BEAUTIFU.

M(WITH A SMILE): HI PREM.

PREM COULDN'T UTTER A WORD

M: KYA HUA? OH SORRY TUMKO TO BAHAT GUSSA ARAHA HOGA HAI NA TUMHARI SABSE BADI DUSHMAN AGAYI HAI. BUT DON'T WORRY MAIN YAHA SIRF CHOTIMAA KO CHUDANE AAYI THI AB MEIN WAPAS JAONGI .WAISE BYE.

PREM STILL COULDN'T SAY ANYTHING. HE CAME IN.

PR: O HI MOTHER INDIA. TO APP AT LAST WAPAS AAGAYI. WAISE MAINE ABHI BASANTI KO DEKHA THA. SHE IS SO CHANGED YOU KNOW. SHE WASN'T CHASMISH ANY MORE.

PART TWO
MB: PRERNA KYU NA HUM TUMHARE AANI KI KHUSHI ME KAL EK POOJA RAKHE AUR PHIR SHAAM KO BACHOKE LIYE PARTY.
P: HA PAR
PR: DID SOMEONE SAY PARTY?
P: YEH ABHITAK NAHI BADLA?
MB LAUGHS: WAISE ANURAG SAMPADA AUR PIYA BHI ATE HI HONGE.
P: PIYA?
MB: HA WOH UNKI BETI.
P: KYA UNKI BETI BHI HOGAYI?
MB: HA ABHI 3 SAAL KI HAI BAHAT PYAARI BETI HAI.
P: ACHHA TO ABHI MEHMANO KO BULALE?
MB: HA THIK HAI.
P: SABSE PEHLE TO MUKTI KO BULANA PADEGA.

SHE CALLS HER

M: HELLO
P: HELLO MUKTI MEIN PRERNA
M: JI CHTI MA MAINE PEHCHAN LIA.
P: ACHH SUN KAL SUBHE YAHA PAR EK POOJA HAI AUR SHAAM KO PARTY TUHE DONO ATTEND KARNI HAI OK.
M: PAR CHOTI MAA MERI SHAAM HI KI FLIGHT HAI
P: TO USE CANCEL KAR PAR TUJHE KAL SARA DIN MERE AATH REHNA PADEGA
M: OK CHOTI MAA. WAISE KYA AAP SNEHA KO BLAH BLAH BALH
ADDRESS MEIN BHEJSAKTI HAI?
P: HA SURE.AUR KAL AGAR HO SAKENA TO PLS ANYA KO LANA.
M: PAR WOH TO PUNE ME HAI.
P: HA TO USE BULALENA.
M: THIK HAI CHOTI MAA.

SHE HANGS UP.

MB: YEH ANYA KAUN HAI?
P: MUKTI KI BETI.
PREM WAS SHOCKED TO HEAR THAT.

NEXT DAY IN THE POOJA.

THEY WERE DOING THE AARTI YOU KNOW THE TRADITIONAL WAY .HUSBAND AND WIFE FROM ELDER TO YOUNGER. IT WAS MUKTI'S TURN JUST THEN EVERYONE HEARD SOMEONE SAYING "MAMMA". EVERYONE TURNED AROUND THEY SEE A SMALL GIRL RUNNING TO MUKTI.MUKTI HUGGED HER AND CARRIED HER. THEY DID THE AARTI TOGETHER.

P: HI AANYA BETI.
A: HI DADI. DADAJI KAHA HAI?
P: (POINTING TO MB) YEH RAHE TUMHARE DADAJI
A: PAR MAMMA NE TO KAHA THA KI DADAJI MUJHE DEKHTE HI CHOCOLATE DENGE.
MB: ACHH TO KYA HAI( SHOWING CHOCOLATE)
A: DADA JI
S: AAP TO SBKO JANTI HAI AB YEH BATAIYE KI HUM KAUN HAI

SHE TURNS TO EVERYONE.

A: AAP ANURAG UNKLE HO, AAP SAM AUNTY, AAP TUSKI CHACHU HO, AAP DORRIS CHACHI, AAP SNEHA AUNTY HO, AAP KUKI AUNTY HO, AAP DEBO AUNTY HO. PAR KOI MISSING HAI. HA PREM UNKLE KAHA HAI?
P: WOH APNE KAMREME HOGA.
A: OK ME UNHE BULAKE AATI HU.

SHE RUNS TO HIS ROOM. MUKTI WAS BEHIND HER.IT WAS OPEN SO SHE JUST GETS IN.
PREM WAS IN A TOWEL. SHE SEES HIM AND THEN TURNS AROUND.

A: AAPKO SHARAM NAHI AATI AISE NANGE GHUMTE.
PR: TUMKO KOI MANNERS NAHI HAI KYA. KNOCK NAHI KAR SAKTE? AND BY THE WAY WHO THE HELL ARE YOU?
M: ANYA KAHA HO? (COMES IN AND SEES PREM IN THE TOWEL AND LAUGHS)
M: CHALO BETA.

PREM CHANGES AND COMES OUT TO THE POOJA . IT WAS TIME FOR THE PARTY. THEY ALL WERE DANCING BUT MUKTI WAS LOOKING AT THE WATCH. IT SEEMED LIKE SHE WAS WAITING FOR SOMEONE. SHE WAS LOOKING DOWN AND WAS IN HER OWN THOUGHT. SOMEONE LED IS HAND AND SAID.

CAN I HAVE THE HONOR TO DANCE ITH YOU PLS?

MUKTI LOOKS UP.

that so gud continue plzzzzzzzz whos tha tperson who asked mukti to dance wit her 😊 😊

omg i jus read ur ff n got updated u hav 2 continue i wanna no who dat person is plz continue soon 😉

wow...that was great..you jus have to continue very soon..its so exciting that she has a daughter..and especially the fact that she is back!..lol..
plz continue soon..

gr8 fanfic......plzzz continue soon. can't wait for the next part... 👏

wow continue soon!this is great!

PART THREE.

THEY ALL WERE DANCING BUT MUKTI WAS LOOKING AT THE WATCH. IT SEEMED LIKE SHE WAS WAITING FOR SOMEONE. SHE WAS LOOKING DOWN AND WAS IN HER OWN THOUGHT. SOMEONE LED IS HAND AND SAID.

CAN I HAVE THE HONOR TO DANCE ITH YOU PLS?

MUKTI LOOKS UP AND TURNS AROUND.

OH COME ON MUKTI I AM SORRY MEIN THODI DER SE AAYA.
M: THODI DERSE. MEIN PICHLE 3 GHANTOSE INTEZAAR KAR RAHI HU. MR. KARAN MALHOTRA AAP PURE TEEN GHANTE LATE HO.

THEY SHOW HIM FILMY WAY YOU KNOW WITH THE LIPS FIRST AND THEN EYES AND THEN FROM BOTTOM TO TOP AND FINALLY ITS EIJAJ AS KARAN MALHOTRA.

K: MUKTI AB SORRY BHI KAHA NA.
M: MUJHE TUMSE BAAT NAHI KARNI.
K: ACHHA YEH DEKHO AB TO MEINE KAAN BHI PAKADLIYA HAI. SORRY
EVERYONE WAS STARING AT THEM SPECIALLY PREM.
M: KYA KAR RAHE HO. OK BABA MAAPH KIYA( THEY HUG) AB CHALO SABSE MILATI HU.

ALL THE ELDERS ARE TALKING. THEY GO THERE.
M: CHOTI MAA,SIR YEH KARAN HAI. MEINE AAPKO BATAYA THA NA. JINKE OFFICE MEIN KAAM KARTI HU AUR SAATH HI MEIN REHTI HU.
P: OH MR. KARAN MALHOTRA.
K: HI AUNTY WAISE MUKTINE BAHAT BATAYA HAI AAPKE BAREME.
M: CHALO MEIN TUMHE BAKI SABSE BHI MILATI HU........ YEHI RUKO MEIN ABHI ATI HU.
K: OK...........(SEES SNEHA. HE CANT TAKE HIS EYES OF HER. SHE LOOKSED SO BEAUTIFUL.HE GOES TO HER. HE KNEW SHE WAS SNEHA.) HI SNEHA.
S: HI... DO I KNOW YOU?
K: NO AAP MUJHE NAHI JAANTI PAR MEIN AAPKO BAHAT ACHHI TARASE JAANTA HU....I AM KARAN ... KARAN MALHOTRA... MUKTI KA BEST FRIEND.
S: OH TO AP HAIN MR KARAN. MUKTINE BATAYA THA AAPKE BARE MEIN.
K: WAISE ME TO SABSE MILA PAR HAMARI PYAARI BETI KAHA HAI.
S: AAPKI BETI?
K: OH AANYASE TO MILE HONGE.
S: HA PAR WOH TO...
K: WOH MUKTI KI BETI HAI PAR USKE JANAMSE LEKAR AAJ TAK MAINE USE APNI BETI MANKAR PALA HAI.

MUKTI COMES.
M: TUM DONO EK DOOSRE KO JAAN GAYE HOGE HAI NA?
K: HA BUT HAMARI BETI KAHA HAI?
S: WOH PREM KE SAATH HAI. WAISE PREM KO KITNE SAALO BAAD AISE HAS TE HUE DEKHKAR BAHAT ACHHA LAGA.
K: OK MEIN USSE MILTA HU. (HE WAS ABOUT TO GO WHEN HE TURNED BACK.
M: AAJ BHI BHUL GAYE. YEH LO.(HANDING SOME CHOCOLATE)
K: THANKS. YOU ARE MY DARLING. HE KISSES HER CHEEK.

PREM AND AANYA WERE TOGETHER.PREM WAS HAVING SOME BEER.
A: PREM UNKLE YEH KYA PIRAHE HO?
P: BEER
A: AAP BEER KYU PI RAHE HAI?
P: KYUKI MUJHE ACHHA LAGTA HAI
A: AAPKO ACHHA KYU LAGTA HAI.
P: OH GOD.
A: MUJHE BHI PINA HAI.
P: NO YEH BACHO KE LIYE ACHHA NAHI HAI.
A: KYUN?
P: TUM APNOI MAMMA KI TARAH HO HAR BAAT PAR QUESTION.
A: GIGGLES. PRE UNKLE WOH KAUN HAI.(POINTING TO PIYA. AS I HAVE MENTIONED SHE IS ANURAG AND SAM'S DAUGHTER)
P: WOH MERI BEHEN HAI.
A: AAP ITNE BADE HO AUR WOH ITNI CHHOTI WOH TO AAPKI BEHEN NAHI BETI LAGTI HAI.
P LAUGHS.: ACHHA MERI BETI.
A: HA. (SOMEONE CLOSES HER EYES FROM BEHIND.) HHHMMMMM KARAN PAPA. (SHE HUGS HIM.)
K: TO AANE MUJHE MISS KIYA.
A: NAHI KIYA AAP ITNE LATE KYU AAYE?
K: WOH KYA HAI NA TUMHARE LIYE CHOCOLATE CHOOSE KAR RAHA THA.
A: REALLY.
K: YEH LO.
A: OK MEIN PIYA SE JAAKAR DOSTI KARTI HU
K: ACHHA JAO...... WELL HI I AM KARAN. AAP PREM HO NA.
P: YEP. AAPKO KAISE PATA.... JAROOR BASANTINE BATAYA HOGA.
K: HA USINE BATAYA. YOU KNOW. AAP NA MERE IDOL HO. MEIN APKA BAHAT BADA FAN HU PAR SAATH HI MEIN I PITY ON YOU.
P: MEIN KUCH SAMJHA NAHI.
K: AAP JIS TARASE GIRLFRIENDS BANATEWE AHI NA MEIN SOCHTA HU KASH MEIN BHI WAISE HOTA BUT THEN I THINK AAPNE JO KHOYA HAI TO MEIN SOCHTA HU KE THANK GOD I AM NOT LIKE YOU.
HE LEAVES.
P: MAINE KYA KHOYA HAI?

IT WAS TIME FOR COUPLES TO DANCE. KARAN ASKED SNEHA FOR DANCE.THEY WERE DANCING AND SOMEONE WAS MIS BEHAVING WITH MUKTI.
PIYA: WOH DEKHO KOI TUMHARE MAMMA KE SAATH BATTA MIZI KAR RAHA HAI.
A: ACHA AB YEH DEKHO .( SHE GOES AND KICKS THE MAN FROM BACK) EH MERI MAMMA SE DOOR RAHO SMJHE NAHI TO I SWEAR I'L HAVE TO KILL YOU. CHALO MAMMA.

PREM WAS SHOCKED TO HEAR THAT, SO WAS MUKTI. THE PARTY IS OVER. EVERYBODY IS LEAVING.
P: MUKTI BETA TUM HAMARE SAATH HI RAHO NA
M: NAHI CHOTI MAA. ME CHALI JAONGI AUR WAISE BHI PACKING TO KARNI HI HAI.
K: WOH ACTUALLY. HUMEIN KUCH DIN YAHI REHNA PADEGA.
M: KYU?
K: WOH MUJHE MR. BAJAJ SE NAYA CONTRACT MIL GAYA HAI.
M: HA TO TUM KARO MEIN JATI HU.
K: MUKTI TUMHARE BINA MEIN KUCHH KARSAKTA HU KYA.
M: YEH KYU NAHI KEHTE KI TUM JAB DISCO MEIN JAOGE TO TUMHARA KAAM KAUN KAREGA HAI NA?
K: PLS PLS PLS YHA MUMBAI MEIN KITNI HOT GIRLS HAI.
M: ACHHA THIK HAI. PAR TUM KYA LADKIYO KE SIVA KUCH AUR NAHI SOCH SAKTE.
K: SOCH SAKTA HU NA.
M: KYA?
K: TUMHARE BAREME.
M: HA HA HA VERY FUNNY.( SHE LEAVES)
K: ARRE YAAR SACH KEHRAHA HU.

THEY ALL LEAVE.PREM IS IN HIS ROOM. DEBONITA HAS GONE TO CULCUTTA TO MEET HER FANILY.PREM IS THINKING ABOUT MUKTI AND KARAN. THEN HE KEPT ON HEARING ANYA SAY" ISWEAR I'LL HAVE TO KILL YOU" JUST THE WAY HE USED TO SAY. HE COULDN'T SLEEP THE WHOLE NIGHT. IN THE MORNING FOR FTHE FIRST TIME HE WOKE UP ARLY IN THE MORNING TO GO FOR MORNING WALK TO MEET MUKTI. THERE TOO HE SAW KARAN AND MUKTI TOGETHER.HE WAS FURIIOUS SEEING THEM TOGETHER EVERY TIME.

itz gr8!!!! i guess you should start writing the mext part if you think you can do. gud luck

thx 4 the update....that was brilliant.......plzzz update soon... 👏