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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm updt...

rashi ke scenes mujhe bahut pasand hai...

n d titles fr d next 2 updts r jus awsm!! luking fwd 2 d next chapt...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you so so much guys,i thought it was a bit boring but i got good response so i hope next update will make you more happy.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede

thank you so so much guys,i thought it was a bit boring but i got good response so i hope next update will make you more happy.😆



Will Be Waiting For That !! (With A Double 😍😍) !😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER-17-A CERTAIN SOMEONE,WHO IS HE??

Dhuru was sitting in her room,her mother came with a plate of food.

Mother-durdhara,putri bhojan kar lo.

Dhuru-nahin maa,hamein bhook nahin hain.

Mother-putri,bhojan nahin karoge to swastha kaise rahoge.

Dhuru-hamein swastha nahin rehna.

Mother-baat kya hain durdhara,tum chahti kya ho??

Dhuru-hamein Chandragupta ke paas jaana hain.

Mother-kintu wo Magadha ka shatru hain putrid.

Dhuru-wo Magadha ka shatru nahin maa,mitra hain,hamein jaane dijiye na.

Mother-tumhare pitashri bahut krodhit honge.

Dhuru-maa,to aap bhe hamare saath chaliye,Chandragupta se milne,aapko bahut accha lagega usse milkar.

Mother worried about dhuru's condition,she became too obsessed with Chandragupta.

Mother-putri hamein tumhare swastha ke bahut chinta hain,tum ye sab kya keh rahe ho,chandragupa tumhare pita ke hatya karna chahta hain.

Dhuru-wo pitashri ke nahin,ek nishkantak pranni ke hatya karna chahta hain jo kar ke naam par jan ka soshan karte hain.

Mother reminding her past''-nahin swami,muzhe mat bhejiye,chitra,putri'

Chitra-maa''..

Mother-chitra'''.(dhanu dragging her)

Mother came out of her thoughts'''..

Mother-durdhara,hum yahan bhojan rakhkar jaa rahe hain,kha lena and she left crying.

Dhanu and amatya

Dhanu-kya'to ab wo log Magadha pe aakraman ke taiyaari kar rahe hain.

Amatya-jee maharaja,maine hamare sabhi mitra rajyon ko bula liya hain,ab Magadha bhe apne har aane waale sankat ka dat kar saamna karega.

Dhanu-ccc..chanakyaaa''..chodenge nahin hum tumhe,gardan he katwa denge hum tumhaariii'huh'.dha dha tigra dha tigra dhe.

Amatya-maharaja,Magadha ke saath saath hamein apne antargat rajyon par bhe dhyan dena hoga,abhe to humne asaaka waapas jeet liya hain kintu aage chalkar aur bhe chunautiyan aa sakti hain.

Dhanu-amatya pramukh mudrarakshasa,jao aur jaakar hamare sabhe shatrapon ko saavdhan kar do aur bhadrashaal ke jagah kanku ko bhej do assaka.

Amatya-jee maharaja and he left.

Acharya reading akshay's sandesh.

Message'

Dhananda apne puri taiyaari ke saath khada hain sabhe chunautiyon ke liye.assaka ko phir se jeet liya hain usne(chanakya knew that vishal attacked assaka,akshay told him)aur ab wo muzhe assaka bhej raha hain kshatrap banakar.

Chanakya smiled reading the sandesh.

Chitra was walking in gallery singing-jalebi,jalebi,hum khayenge jalebi''

She saw in a room a thaal of jalebi was there,she entered and ate a jalebi-hmmm..waah,itne dino baad jalebi khaane ka ananda he aa gaya.

Suddenly someone came from behind,chitra turned and she got scared.

Chitra-nahin nahin,wo hum to sirf chakh rahe the,dekho krodh mat karna.

Chandu-are mein krodh kyun karunga(it was chandu's room),itne saari jalebiyan to mein khan bhe nahin sakta tha.

Chitra-tum,tum jalebi khaoge??

Chandu-agar aapko ye saari khani to kha lijiye,muzhe koi appati nahin hain.

Chitra-ye tum kaise'.then she reminded that chandu and vishal looked same.

Chitra-ah Chandragupta maurya???

Chandu-jee.

Chitra got shocked seeing the uncanny resemblance.

Chitra-hey prabhu.

Chandu-kya hua??

Chitra-nahin kuch nahin,aap khaiye hum chalte hain.she quickly left.

Chandu-bade vichitra stri hain.

In amatya's room..

Rashi came and hugged amatya from behind.

Rashi-daadu..

Amatya-ah'raashi,kahan gaye the tum.

Raashi-hamari chodiye,aap kaise hain.

Amatya-mein theek hun putri.

Chanakya was walking in the gallery wanting to meet vishal's amatya.

Chanakya-suniye

Lady-jee

Chanakya-amatya kahan milenge muzhe.

Lady-amatya,wo kaksha hain na,wahan milenge amatya.

Chanakya-dhanyawaad.he went to the room,he saw someone talking with rashi.

Rashi-are acharya,hamare dadu se miliye,her grandfather turned and VISHNU GOT SHOCKED SEEING HIM.GUESS GUYS WHO IS HE??????????????????????????????????????????????

Chandu in his room thinking-ye mihika aur shashanka kahan ho sakte hain.suddenly vishal entered,his face was covered.

Vishal-chandragupta.

Chandu-are aap.

Vishal-tum hamein tum keh sakte ho,hamare umra mein koi antar to hain nahin.

Chandu smiled

Vishal-chalo hum tumhe kahin le jaana chahte hain.

Chandu-kahan

Vishal-chalo to sahe.

Vishal and chandu went to a place.there were ladies everywhere sitting in sexy poses.

Chandu-ye..ye mera harem hain,tum yahan kuch shan bita sakte ho.

Chandu-shama kijiyega,mein aise jagah apna samay vyartha nahin karta.

Vishal-are thoda to ananda le lo.

Chandu angry-shama kijiyega,mein ye sweekar nahin kar sakta.

Vishal-are are krodhit kyun ho rahe ho,theek hain.

Chandu did pranaam to him and left in anger,vishal turned,the girls there got up and bowed in front of him,they all were actually his army soldiers.no one in them was a ganika,he actually had a harem but those ganikas were actually his spies.the harem he showed was a place where these girls did sword practice and other fighting practices.

Chandu walking-samazhta kya hain ye apne aapko,suddenly he realized mihika was not there.mihika,mihika to wahan the he nahin,wo gaye kahan,hey prabhu use aur shashanka ko kuch hua na ho,he passed by the door where shanky and mihika were.

Mihika in the room-hamein aur kitne din is chote se kaksha mein kaid rehna hoga.

Shashanka-pata nahin,chandu ko apne jay jay kaar karwane se fursat he nahin hain,ek baar bhe nahin socha ke hamara kya haal ho raha hoga.

Mihika started coughing.

Shashanka-mihika'.mihika..

Mihika quickly went to the bathroom and did some vomits.

Shashanka-kya hua mihika.

Mihika-pata nahin shashnka,muzhe itne vomits(sry don't know hindi of this word)kyun aa rahe hain.

Next chapter update-A CETAIN SOMEONE FROM HIS PAST,THE FATE AGAIN ENTWINED
Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
(In A Puppy Voice) Hmm...Pehle Pichchle Vaale Pe Comments, Phir Is Waale Par, Okay ???
Edited by Radhikerani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm updt! but i cudnt figure out who d person is...

Continue soon... haan vaise mihika ko vomiting kyu ho rhi hai?

n moni d hindi word fr vomit is ulti...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: frozen.devil

awsm updt! but i cudnt figure out who d person is...

Continue soon... haan vaise mihika ko vomiting kyu ho rhi hai?

n moni d hindi word fr vomit is ulti...


thanks frozy and try to guess yaar,i know thoda hard hoga but phir bhe do guess.

@radhi do comment soon.
Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
woho!! adjectives kam pad jate hain taarif krne k liye..awesome... n so so filled of suspense.. m vry poor at guessing, indeed.. so continue soon..will b waiting.. loved it..!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: RiniRocks

woho!! adjectives kam pad jate hain taarif krne k liye..awesome... n so so filled of suspense.. m vry poor at guessing, indeed.. so continue soon..will b waiting.. loved it..!


thank you so so much rinne,real objectives,intentions or actual story bhe ff ke end mein he pata lagege.its not a suspense story but a tragic one but ending can either be happy or tragic.my last ff was a damn tragic one so i am a bit bored of tragic ffs and my fav vampire knight became so so tragic that i abandoned that comic series...but who knows??oops only i know.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
she is going to play RASHI on covers,i used her as mihika in my previous ff but here she completely fits RASHI.so here is my official rashi to you guys.and there is one ques in my mind,do you guys like rashi and bhaddu together??😆this ques is not at all related with story,just asking.

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