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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

wonderful update. After reading about kishore i really hate him even if pia forgives him in future.i sympathasise vid brendon bt dat doesn't justify his actions.i hope sum1 cums & save pri 4m him.pia really need to stand up 4 herself & shouldn't keep on tolerating. Brilliantly wrtn koel ur writing is beautiful. Thanx 4 pm

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
wonderful update. After reading about kishore i really hate him even if pia forgives him in future.i sympathasise vid brendon bt dat doesn't justify his actions.i hope sum1 cums & save pri 4m him.pia really need to stand up 4 herself & shouldn't keep on tolerating. Brilliantly wrtn koel ur writing is beautiful. Thanx 4 pm

Kishor is just...too many men in one body...he gives her everything..but his anger overshadows everything good about him...Pri will be saved , don't worry.

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#323

The first two stanza left me speechless. Please let not any harm come to pri. Awesome update koyel

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
The first two stanza left me speechless. Please let not any harm come to pri. Awesome update koyel

gald you liked it , Snigs 😳

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

Brilliantly written as usual Koyel.

Sigh...Pia is so drawn to the dark heroes. cant really blame her. for some unknown reason I myself find my fav heroes rather dark/grey or self-destructive then the usual chirpy ones 😆

Poor Pia, the way she said she is used to with it made me even more sad. but Alvi is right, its not good to simply accept her life as it is.

and shoot..Pri..

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
Brilliantly written as usual Koyel.
Sigh...Pia is so drawn to the dark heroes. cant really blame her. for some unknown reason I myself find my fav heroes rather dark/grey or self-destructive then the usual chirpy ones 😆
Poor Pia, the way she said she is used to with it made me even more sad. but Alvi is right, its not good to simply accept her life as it is.
and shoot..Pri..

yes , Piya is drawn to dark heroes 😆..yeah she accidentally said that...but she always felt that.yeah Alvi is a tough cookie.Don't worry...Pri will be saved.😳

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
amazing update👏

glad you liked it . 😳

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#328

awsome update yar
loved the way u naarate the whole story
poor piya yar
ohh yar pri
shit what will happened to her now
cont soon

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#329

omg this update!!the best in this story till nw...!!!u have turned me literally speechless with this update koyel!!the way u describd abhay reminded me of the lines.."people who r too cruel once cared too much"and piya's part was painful too..omg..her father used to beat her??????she understands abhay soo well.,and the last bit was a shocker...brendn..omg he really???oh dear..pri..omg..

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: bellaaa
awsome update yar
loved the way u naarate the whole story
poor piya yar
ohh yar pri
shit what will happened to her now
cont soon

don't worry Pri will be fine..yaa Piya goes through a lot.