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PeachBellini

@PeachBellini

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#141

thanks for the update. i'm really curious as to how this is going to shape up. please update again soon!

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Atiras

@Atiras

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Arrgggh...I cannot bear to even imagine Arnav loving someone else but Khushi, no matter how much like Khushi this girl is.

I had such a hard time reading this! Jeez! I'm hoping Khushi is NOT dead -- though you've stated exactly that! Bring her back, Munchy! and not as Aanchal.

--WordStalker

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

awww, so she is dead :'( i was just keeping my hopes high. and arnav plays with the little kid?! nice nice. i loved how he was all angry at first and den warmed up seeing it was his niece that was sweet.

rakhi-prem scene was adorable! it was like rakhi was anjali and prem a bratty arnav. lol

Edited by insanelycrazy - 13 years ago

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

amazing update dear... so khushi is really dead 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

anjali daughter name is rakhi... she and prem are so cute kids...

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incandescent

@incandescent

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Wow. Interesting twist. Khushi is dead and Aanchal is pretty much like her shadow. I am guessing there are more similarities between the two as well as a few striking dissimilarities.

Arnav is in his personal hell and it is probably going to get a lot worse before it starts getting better.

Hopefully I'll be able to follow this one from start to finish.

Loved both parts. Looking forward to the next update.

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Interesting.. Aanchal is quite a character. Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

ermmm..munchyy..listen i've got one step out of the door n i've got a ruler in my hand so don't come closer ok..!!!!😕

ummm ...the style was different when i read chapter 1 n yep i cd see the typical family drama when u threw in all relatives in that 1st chapter..so much so that i actu missed the fact that khushi was dead...koz i was skimming thru the 1st chapter after having read ur intro note..

then i got it in chapter 2.👏

n now m looking at this story with more interest..☺️

i think u're trying to breathe life back into ASR from the show ?? n more than that m warming up to Anchal

n i like that name Rakhi ..uhhh..*thinking again*.. she's an innocent child called rakhi..so yep i like her

knowing u any dabba u decide to tackle will actu turn out to be a treasure box full of rarities..let's see..

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prpk525

@prpk525

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Nice update...

So Khushi is dead.. Cant wait to read more..

Could you PM me the link of your Blog?? Please..

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Roshni

@rashika

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Nice chapter. So her goes Arnav and Anchal fights just like when Khushi and Arnav use to fight. Cute moment between Arnav and Rakhi. Wonderfully written.

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#150

I am sad at khushi's death,I was hoping against hope that she might be alive somewhere but now u have made it perfectly clear that she bled to death in his arms but still I am really looking forward to the story...i don't if I am weird or what but I am in love with your ghunda mawali Arnav Singh raizada of BTLSS and I cried my eyes out at his death while my husband officially declared me mental...u r simply an amazing writer and plz do let us k ow when your book comes out as I would love to read it.