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naveena

@naveena_arhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

good start plz do pm me

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naveena

@naveena_arhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

good job and start and plz pm me

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

RES

*edited*
hmm anchal and khushi look alike...something seems fishy
let see wat happen in future...
aww small babies r too cute.
continue soon

Edited by srahs - 13 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Not like Khushi? Hmmm I am not completely convinced but I know I will be soon :)

Anjali's daughter is called Rakhi - Apt! Small detail but I like!

As always, great update!

PS: Thank you! You know why :)

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johnangad

@johnangad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

so khushi really is dead!!!!!!!!!!!!aanchal is like khushi reincarnated!!

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Kushi has really died! 😔

Runs off to make myself some hot chocolate

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

munchy u're awful!!!

i get to know u have a new story when ur 2nd chapisode is up!!!!

but anyway..i cdnt have torn myself away from BTLSS even if i tried..so that's ok..

right.. Star P?okay...

buahahahahhahahaaa..starting now..

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zarmina asad

@zarmyna

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Fluffy, we need it after BTLSS
just finished reading the last 6 updates of it and let me say it again that that the gunda mawali Arnav was the best that I have read so far

Do treat us with a lot of star plus type encounters ;)

Edited by zarmyna - 13 years ago

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Jyo.

@Jyo.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

so Khushi really is dead! Why :'( Oh well, I am still looking forward to this :) Loving Aanchal but it's just sad to read how everyone is so much in pain. And I am guessing Shyam has applied for an appeal?

Also, good luck with the book that you're writing :) Keep us updated on it :)

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

Munchy, only you can evoke the strong reaction that you do for fictional characters.Kushi's death makes me really sad. I was in denial, I was hoping against hopes that she was safe somewhere. But I also knew that you aren't the one to tread the usual path.

Arnav is in his personal hell- where all he wants to feel is numb. He realises the mistakes he has done and in process letting go of the one woman who truly loved him.

Will Anchal be the one to show him the mirror, will she be able to break into his soul and offer him the chance at redemption he so craves for?

The title now makes sense and the tagline is very interesting.

Reminds me of Rumi's very famous lines-

"Patha hai, yahan se bahut door, galat aur sahi ke paar, ek maidan hai.

Main wahan milunga tujhe."

Edited by Naach_Basanti - 13 years ago