maaneet ff 'love u always' part15 pg 23 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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gud start...
can u please pm me when u update???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice cs and good start dear
hmmm u r in my pm list? i never saw that...did u change ur username by chance or its my brain that is getting drier by day
make it longer dear next time 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3

Agli subha mahinder uth ta hai tu use ladki ke bare main yaad ata hai wo bahir ja kar ramji se ladki ke bare main puchta hai ramji kehta hai nashta bana rahi hai rasoi main bechari pari kitna kuch saha hai bechari ne

Mahinder: kyun kya hua

Ramji kaka: bechari apni ma or mama ke saath rehti thi ma ki mot par mama ne use bech diya wo log ise kahin le kar ja rahe the yeh baag kar tumse takrai

Pari:suniye nashta baan gaya hai chaliye kar li jiye

Mahinder use dekhta hi reh jata hai itni masum ladki koi kese ho sakti hai

Pari:apke ghar main koi nahi hai kya

Mahinder:are nai main to shimls ka rehne wala hun simla main meri family hai main yahan parhne aya hun ap ko kapron ki zarurat hai main le kar ata hun mahinder chala jata hai 2 gante bad bohat sari sariyan le kar ata hai

After 3 month mahinder pari ko pasand karne lag jata hai to shaadi ke liye porpose karta hai aur pari han kar deti hai mahinder apne maa baap ko khat likhta hai apne aur pari ke bare main btata hai aur pari ke atet ke bare main btata hai aur jawab ka intzar karta hai maa baap a kar pari ko kehte hain tum jesi ladkiyon ko main bohat ache se janti hun amir ladkon ko apne jal main pasa kai saadi kar ke paise le kar baag jati ho

Mahinder ma papa yeh ap kya keh rahe hain pari wesi nahi hai

Ma: agar tumhe yeh ladki chahiye tu hum se sare rishte torne hon ge jaydat main koi hisa nahi mile ga or yeh ghar bhi khali karna hoga

Mahinder:manzor hai main pari se aaj i shaadi kar lun ga

After4years

In hoshiyarpur
ek car ek barhi si haweli ke samne rukti hai aur is main se high curt k jaaj mahinder handa bahir ate hain mahinder jis ne ghar chorne k bad sirf jaga hi nahi apna sur name bhi change kar liya baag kar andar jate hain baag kar 4 saal ka brij ata hai papa humare ghar guriya ayi hai mama lai hai dekho mahinder baag kar room main jata hai aur apni biwi pari ko dekhta hai aur kehta hai kesi ho kiss karta hai aur kehta hai meri princess kaan hai

Pari: wo rahi wahan mahinder apno beti ko dekh kar kehta hai meri geet kitni pyari hai belkul tumhari tarhan


Precap: kya hua pari

Pari:pani pani aur wahin dam torh deti hai
nanhi geet maa ke bejan haath se keh rahi hoti hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yes dear me change my user nsme and thsnx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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when will u update next???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 3
that was touching...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4After 4 years:Har ghar main sunday k din pura parivar ek saath hota hai usi tarhan mahinder handa apne parivar k saath hota hai subha k chaye pi rahe hote hain tabi pari brij ko kehti hai beta pani le ao brij ma ka hukam man kar pani lene jata hai
madinder:pari kya hua chaye k saath pani pari kya hua tumhara chehra pila kyun ho raha hai pari pari Pari:pani pani pani aur wo dam tor deti hai nanhi geet apni ma ke bejaan hath k saath khel rahi hoti hai aur brij pani le kar ma k pine k intzaar kar raha hota hai aur pari sab kuch chor kar is dunya se chali jati hai

After some daysNanhi geet bohat ro rahi hoti hai mama meli mama tahan hain papa meli mama Mahinder: mama kal a jaye gi chachi(SACHI)PAPA
M:haan beta next day geet so rahi hoti hai toh mahinder court chale jate hai aur geet roni lagti hai

PAST END

mahinder geet k room main jate hain geet so rahi hoti hai phir mahinder apne room main chale jate hai
next day

geet ko sota dekh kar mahinder court chale jate hain or ramji aur brij ko us khayal rakhne ko kehte hain 9 saal ka brij school k liye tayar ho raha hota hai tabhi geet ke rone ki awaz su kar us k room main ata hai aur dekhta hai wo papa mama keh kar ro rahi hai tu brij geet k pass jata hai aur use chup karwata hai geet ke na chup hone parr brij use kehta hai mere saath school chalo gi gEET:wahan mama papa hon de(gaye)BRIJ:haan chal
ramji brij aur geet ko school le kar jate hain brij k haath main beg dekh kar nahi geet road par beth kar rone lag jati hai k use bhi beg chahiye warna wo nahi jaye gi
brij use chup karwane k liye apna beg deta hai aur kehta hai yeh tumhara hai geet beg kande par dal leti hai beg k boj se geet se chalna mushkil hojata hai par wo bohat khusi se chalti hai school main ja kar brij k dost nanhi se beautifull pink pink se gudya ko dekh kar us k pas ate hain aur brij se kehte hain yeh kon hai
brij: humari bahan geet
bache: kitni sundar hai yeh eg kis ka hai

Geet: mela (mera)
bache herat se kya

Brij:nahi yeh to humara hai
nanhi geet yeh sun kar beg phenk deti hai aur kehti hai mele ko bhi bej chaliye mela abhi (mere ko mera beg chahiye abhi)

bACHE:geet ko rota dekh kar yeh choclate kha lo ' yeh meri tasviron wali book hai le lo ' yeh ball le lo sab kuch na kuch de kar geet ko chup karwane ki koshish karte hai

REALLY SORRY MAIN LATE HO GAI OR PM LATE HO JAYEIN GAYE KYUN K MERA COMPUTER KHARAB HO GAYA HAI MAIN UPDATE BHI CELL SE KAR RAHI HUN REALLY SORRY

Note:Story main ek baat main add karna bol gai thi geet k janam k waqt pari aur mahinder ne ek aaya rakhi thi mena naam hai us ka
Edited by sstylishdoll - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
nice part...

but sooo emotional...feeling bad fr geet n brij...mainly geet asking fr mother...



loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Note:


Sorry for not sending pms my lapy is broken can't send pms from cell sorry really
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part5 in classroom class main jate hi sab bache zid karne lage geet kis k saath bathe gi koi bacha kehta maine book di maine ball di mere saath bathe gi sab bachon k ladne main brij ne dekha geet rone wali hai toh us ne sab se kaha geet se poch liya jaye k wo kis k saath bathe gi geet se pucha gaya toh us ne kaha bari bari sab ke saath yeh sun kar sab bache apni gagha par bath gaye aur geet par chor diya wo kis k saaath bathe gi (munsif baap ki munsif beti) techer class main ayi aur naye bache ko dekh kar baatein ki us se aur parhane lag gayi sare din main geet bacho ko parte dekh kar mama aur papa ko bul gai jab ks bache ko mar ya dant parti us ka nanha dil ro uthta aur jab shabash milti wo khush ho jati sab kuch naya aur ajib tha geet ke lye aur use acha laga chuti hone par ramji bachon ko lene aye aur brij se kaha k papa bohat parechan hain jaldi ghar chalo sab bachon se mil kar geet phir ane ka wada kar ke pedal ghar ki taraf barhi raste main jis bache ka ghar ata wo geet ko pyar karta aur gift deta aur chala jata geet ko sab acha laga ghar par mahinder bohat parechan the aur maria se kaha geet ko school bejne ki kiya zarorat thi ro ro kar parechan ho jaye gi kuch khaya bhi hoga yah nahi geet ghar ayi papa ko dekh kar un ki taraf baghi aur zor se boli papa mahinder ne geet ko dekh kar apni bahein phela li geet mahinder ki ghod main ja kar apne school k bare main btane lagi geet:papa aaj maine parlha wa ek techel bhi thi us ne muje palhaya main kal phil scahool(school) jaun dimahinder bohat khush huye jo kaam barhe nahi kar paye wo bachon ne kar diya precap: leap for 10 years 14 saal ki geet note: guys tell me should i continue this story or not please tell me

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