Anchahey Risthey MGSS~Pt9-Pg52/Pt10-Pg54 Uptd 3/08

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craziekudi

@craziekudi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey friends...

I have thought of writing an OS...after a long time...

beware with me...

PROLOUGE...

Geet gasped, 'OMG what did he just mean... he wants me?..' what the hell yaar.. i blushed... omg ..Maan... what are u doing...No Maan dont come near...

Why Geet why cant I.. i know u like me... I know u desire me.. then why ...Maan comes near.. near.. Geet closes her eyes... and leans... towards her ears and ...gives her a bite.. geet turns beetroot red...

Geet moves away.. looks at him with tearful eyes...

Why Geet why do u always run from me... when u know.. our chemistry can burn aanything.....

because.. Geet moves back... and because i am noone.I dont deserve you.. ...and runs away

Please let me know if u want me to continue...

Its a small one... which i had in my mind...😃

...INDEX...

~Prolouge - Pg 1~

~PART - 1 - Pg 1~

~PART - 2 - Pg 5~

~PART - 3 - Pg 8~

~PART - 4 - Pg 17~

~PART - 5 - Pg 26~

~PART - 6 - Pg 33~

~PART - 7 - Pg 40~

~PART - 8 - Pg 46~

~PART - 9 - Pg 52~

~PART - 10 - Pg 54~

Please give me lots of comments and likes... this will motivate me and i would be happy...

Looking forward to your replies and likes...

Please add Craziekudi_PM to ur buddy...

so that i can send the list to only those who really love to read my works...

thanks a bunch

deepu😳

Edited by craziekudi - 13 years ago

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reni

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Posted: 13 years ago

i will kill u if u stop it midway like the last one...😡😡😡😡

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Faiza Ghafoor

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey U love urself???????
hain na
then dont even think to stop writing it

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craziekudi

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 1

She is a great cook.. she keeps telling herself... she knows to make all kinds of indian food..she loved Indian food.. she is now a restaurateur.. of her small.restaurent..'Khana.. apne desh ka..'...she is alone and had been since she was 10 years old.. she lived with her relatives who didnt loe her and thought her to be a burden... she had this passion for making food from young age.. which has become her haven and life...

She still remembers the day... when she first met him... It was a beautiful winter sunday morning.6 am.. ... geet was arranging the plates in her restaurent and there is atleast 1.5 hrs before customers come inand half an hour before her staff come in... while she was arrang flowers...she saw a guy standing with his back turned towards her below her restaurent steps... she just ignored him and continued her process of cleaning... After some time.. she saw him standing there... She moved towards him. and called out...

'Suniyeee'..

'That was the first time i heard that sweet voice.. that melodoius voice... I turned and saw 2 hazel eyes staring at me.. ' She was standing with broom on her one hand and other hand on her hip... She was a sight in this cold weather...

Geet stared at him.. 'He was so handsome. and in suits'.. waht was he doing this moring...'abhi nahi.. baad main ayega... by 8.30.. tabhi khulegi dhaaba...'.. He kept staring at her...

He moved forward and said..' I am here to meet Ms Geet Handa..'... I kept looking at him.' looks up and why me.. ab maine kya kiya'.. hey babaji...'

Geet... aur aap?

'I am Maan Singh Khurana, legal attorney to Khurana Empire. Iwould like to meet Ms Handa, can u call her...

Geet: kyun? Kya kaam hai aapko Geet se..?

'Oh so u are not Geet.. please can u call her.. this is regarding an important personal and legal issue...'

'kyun... nahi bulati Geet ko kya karoge aap..waise I am her sister..

'Sorry Ms... I know that Ms Handa has only one sister... Parineeta Khurana... and I have come to let her know that...

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Please give me lots of comments and likes... this will motivate me and i would be happy...

Looking forward to your replies and likes...

thanks a bunch

deepu😳

Edited by craziekudi - 13 years ago

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Purpleparadise

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow!adipoli start..
continue soon..can't wait for next part..

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

Di mai aapse bot bot naraaz hu ... Aapne subah inni saari baatein ki bt u dint tell me ki u r writing OS...
Ab cntinue karna warna mai double naraaz...
Superb and i am eager to know what is gonna happen next...
Bt naraaz to mai hu apni di se...