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Posted: 13 years ago
poppy kya yar kitna wait karvaegi...???😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poppyyy!!!!! Oh god! Kab aayegi tu!! And thankyou mujhe bolne ke liye pagal and all.. Mujhe ab aadat ho chuki he! Nick name he meta crazy girl ab don't worry and Nick names se yaad aaya mene tujhe Abhi tak nahi dia!! Come back I'll give you sabse acha wala Nick name!! Specially for you!! :D and scrap to... Wo mwra record he sabko late bhejne ka! Par tere liye I'll try best ki jaldi bheju! :P I LOVE YOU! jaldi aao, update karo and mujhse baat karo!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
too good itna saara horror suspence romance dance sab kuck ek saath
im loving it pls tell me who to add as buddy to get the pms pks
waiting for next update desperately
I guess the girl is same frm tht resturant who scares sharon before
update soon and pls pls pls pls pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey poppy...
read all the parts of your ff...
it was awesome ff dear...👏
all the parts were so good and scary...
i was literrally having goosebumps after reading your SAATH(7) wala update...
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey everyone sab ko thnkq so much for your likes and comments sry sab ko reply nahi kar pa rahi h u but believe me mai sab ke cmnts padh rahi hu all of u are so sweet thnkq thnkq so much nd ab maanti hu firse late ho gayi but at least ab post kar rahi hu na so plz maafi again hope u ll enjoy this n ya yaha se horror n suspense will be back aaj zyada baate nahi start kardo reading……

Sw : Sharon... Sharon kya hua?

Sharon looked at him maintaining the same expression.

Sh : Swayam vo... vo ladki.

Sw : kon Sharon pehle relax calm down.

Sharon looks at her the girl was coming towards them Sharon's fear had no bounds now she clutched Swayam's hand as tight as she could and closed her eyes the girl came even closer.

Sw : Hey Natasha rite?

Natasha : ya n ur Swayam na?

Sw : Hm ya nice meeting u again.

Sharon was dumbstruck her grip loosen she looked at Swayam eyes popped out and jaw dropped down with utter disbelief.

Sharon : *thinking* he knows her but'.. but kaise?

While Sharon was in her thinking process Natasha and Swayam share a small chat before going Natasha looks at Sharon who was continuously staring at Swayam.

Na : *to Sharon* uhm hi.

Sharon was still staring but as Swayam looked at her this time. she was out of her trances and raises her eyebrows as if asking him What??

Swaron ishara wala convo start haa plz imagine ki swaron ankhon se baat kar rahe hai no lip moment ok shuru karo'.

Sh : What ??

Sw : vo tumhe hi bol rahi hai'.

Sh : *shocked* Mujhe.

Sw : *nodding* haa.

Sh : nahi mujhe nahi baat karna.

Sw : At least hi bolo we will leave from her.

Sh : Uhm should i???

Sw : *nods*

(Yaha se unka ishaara talking khatam)

Sh : *to Natasha with strn smile* Hiii

Na : Hi uhm may i know ur name??

Sharon stood there with a big question mark on her face

Sh *thinking* WTH ise mera naam nahi pata but isne mujhe itna daraya tha uss din iski to mai...

Sw : She is Sharon *to Sharon* and Sharon this is natasha

Na : Nice meeting u Sharon ok have to go now bye.

Sharon was about to speak something before that Natasha bid gud bye and left from there leaving Sharon totally confused.

Sw : Sharon… *no response* *shaking her* Sharon…..

Sh : Haa Swayam bolo mai sun rahi hu.

Sw : Hua kya hai tumhe??

Sh : Kuch nahi…. chalo ghar chalte hai.

Sw : *thinking* Ajeeb hai abhi tak shocked, surprised, confused sab thi ab ise ghar jana hai.

Sh : *thinking* Kya Swayam ko batadu ki ye wahi ladki hai?? but Swayam ise kaise jaanta ha ii need to talk to him.

Their thinking process was interrupted by RDX sir

RDX : Swayam can u just come here once (guys yaad hai na Swaron RDX cabin ke baahar khade hai)

Sw : Sharon ek kaam karo tum car ke paas raho mai sir ko milke aajata hu.

Sharon aggress and starts walking but she feels someone following her she looks back to check but there was no one she kept walking and finally reaches d car she keeps looking around waiting for him she hears some footsteps from her behind but before she could turn someone caught her right hand and pinned it to her back and with their other hand caught her neck and pinned her to the car Sharon kept struggling to free her hand but she could not….

Sh : Who are u??

Sm1 : U dnt have to know that but do carry on a msg from me to Kriya.

The voice sounded somewhat similar to Sharon but she could not identify it correctly.

Sm1 : Kriya is going to die for sure and if u all want to be alive stop dancing and tell your so called trainer to leave Mumbai and go back.

Sh : Who the hell are u and what did Kriya do to u leave me now so that i too can show what i can do.

Sm1 : Oh i am scared stop all this Sharon coz u guys dnt have time for all this.

Saying this 'someone' pushed Sharon such that she fell down Sharon turned back to see who it was but there was no one present there except her she straightened herself thinking Swayam could come any moment she was lucky enough coz as she stood up Swayam entered.

Sw : Chale??

Sh : Haa chalo.

They got in the car and reached home in 20 mins during the ride Sharon was only able to think of the words which were told to her by that 'someone'.

Kriyaansh and Ornella were already waiting for them to have lunch Sharon acted normal they had their lunch Swayam was waiting when Sharon will ask him about how he knows Natasha but was left confused coz Sharon neither spoke to anyone about it nor asked him he tried signaling her to ask whether everything is fine with her but she never looked at him finally he msged her to meet him at rehearsal hall Sharon too wanted to talk to him so she gave some excuse and reached rehearsal hall Swayam was already waiting for her there.

Sw : Hi.

Sh : *wih a stern smile* hi.

Sw : So??

Sh : Mujhe laga tumne mujhe msg kia to meet u here.

Sw : Haa mujhe laga tumhe kuch poochna hoga.

Sh : Mujhe to poochna tha par tumhe kaise pata??

Sw : Bus aise hi guess kia tha ab bolo kya poochna hai??

Sh : Swayam vo Natasha tum… tum use kaise jaante ho??

Sw : Vo…..

Kya ans. expect kar rahe ho 😛 guys tum logo ko to pata hai ki mai jaldi disclose nahi karti so plz huh next update tak wait karo 😆 nd haa plz guess bhi karte rehna Swayam Natasha ko kaise jaanta hai n vo someone kon tha jisne Sharon se vaise baat kia n kya Sharon uske bare mai Swayam ko bataegi ki nahi all left to ur imagination if u liked this update zarror like button press karna and feel free to leave any type of comment

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update
Woz missing ur updates
Thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Iiitne dino baad tumhara update padhkar achcha laga Poppy 😊 lekin chota tha is liye agla wala update karnne mein kanjoosi mat karna...am clueless who that sumbody was & Natasha kya Swayam ki koi purani family friend hai aurSwayam pe uski nazar hai is liye Sharon ko usse dur rakhna chahti hai 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update 😊

Luvd it very much 😊

Waiting eagerly for d next part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
love swaron's "ishara talking"...
update by update story become more interesting...
now who is natasha and who is someone..🤪
waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing dear...
I really loved it...

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