Angel in my life (chapter 1) - KaSh FF

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi everyone!

It me again - Tanisha... Remember the lame writer? 😉
Anyways... As some of know already that I have written some (lame) one shots before... I didn't expect any response on those fic at all... But guess what? i got enough comments and likes to inspire me to write more.. So I decided to start writing chapetered fic.
I won't lie... I actually got the idea of this fic from another fan fic (based on my fav Korean couple)... It won't be similar... But still I wanted to mention it... And also I haven't decided how the whole story yet... so I don't know whether youll get a happy ending or a sad one. I'll decide that later? I don't even know whether its worth reading or not. 🥱 Hope you'll like it? 😕
previous works :
(PLEASE IGNORE MY BAD ENGLISH AS YOU ALWAYS DO 😳)
Angel in My Life
genre : Fantasy, fluff, romance, angst (may be?!)
Pairings : Karan-Shilpa, Karan-Drashti, Mayank-Drashti
chatpter 1

"What??!! NO WAY!"
"You lost the bet Karan. Now you must do what I am telling you to do."
"Drashti?"
"Karan?"
"Drashti' NO.. Please' why? Give me another option ok? Pleaseee'"
"Ok then' But this is your last option."
"FINE."
"Marry me."
"WHAT???"
"You heard me. You have to marry me Karan. That's your 2nd option."
"And why would I marry you?"
"So that I can make your life miserable."
"It already is miserable because of you Drashti."
"I know' But I want to make your life hell."
Karan frowned and Drashti pinched her cheek.
"Ouch"
"You look soo cute when you are drunk you know that?"
"Don't call me cute."
"Cute' cute cute cute cute"
Drashti started pulling Karan's both cheeks tightly and he frowned.
"So?"
"So' what?"
"What did you decide?"
"I'll go and kiss her."
"What?"
"Yeah' It's better to kiss that weird girl and get slapped than to get trapped with you for the rest of my life."
"Why do you hate me so much?"
"I just do Drashti. I don't need a reason for that."
Drashti rolled her eyes and pushed Karan to stand up.
"Now go already."

Karan stood up and started going towards the middle of the bar - Where that weird girl was standing. Weird' Yes weird.. Karan couldn't see her face. Her back was facing Karan. She was standing there in the middle of the dance floor' People around her was getting annoyed because they kept bumping into her while dancing but she didn't care. She didn't move from her place. Just kept shaking her head to the music beat. Karan's vision was getting blurry. He realized that he'd pass out anytime now. But even with his blur vision he was able to notice the girl's outfit. She was wearing a frock. Just like the ones baby wear. A SIMPLE WHITE FROCK. Her hair was long but messy as they weren't combed for ages yet she put a flower in her hair. As he got closer to the girl Karan was blinded by the brightness of her white frock. Is it really that bright or his drunk mind is playing games with him? He put a hand on the girl's shoulder and she immediately looked at the hand 1st and then turned to face Karan and then something happened. He couldn't move. He felt as if there's a goddess standing right in front of him with a questionable look in her eyes. The surprised boy couldn't remember if he has seen such gorgeous eyes in his life before.

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Karan was so stunned that for a while he forgot why he was there – got his sense back when someone bumped into him. Then he remembered the bet… the kiss.. Yes… He has to kiss her. And he will… He would have kissed this girl even if he hadn't lost his bet with his best friend Drashti. He doesn't care that he'd get humiliated by the girl slapping him in front of so many people after the kiss because he knows it's worth it. He won't get the chance to kiss Goddess everyday in his life. Will he?
Without any hesitation, he grabbed the girl's wrist pulled her closer and kissed her on the lips closing his eyes. He was shocked when he realized the girl has opened her mouth to give his tongue access to meet hers. Strange! That was not supposed to happen… He was expecting a slap. He opened his eyes to see the expression on the girl's eyes but they were closed… Then he closed his eyes… Her long and curvy eye lashes are the last thing Karan can remember before losing his consciousness.………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

Karan opened his eyes slowly… The bright sunlight coming from the window is making it hard for him. It seemed like a Dj vu to him… Did something similar happen to him last night? He tried to pull his head out of the pillow but then he realized he has a bad headache because of last night's hangover… So instead of leaving the bed right away he decided to stay there for a while. The sunlight was making his headache worse. He turned to the other side. He saw that pretty with big eyes from last night staring at him before closing his eyes.

Big eyes… Sweet smile… Sweet dreams… "Wow! Now I am even hallucinating that Goddess." A smile curved on his face automatically. Karan wondered did he actually go to a club and kiss that girl last night or all of it was a sweet dream like this one?

"Good morning!" – A girl's voice greeted Karan.

"Good morn …" – Wait a minute. Karan lives alone in his studio apartment. Only Drashti has the keys but the voice was NOT drashti's. Then who is it? Karan's eyes snapped open. He was not hallucinating. The girl was there. Sitting on his bed… Smiling and blinking at him with cute puppy dog eyes…

Karan fell off his bed. He kept staring at the girl in disbelief. Did something happen last night. Did he by any chance… He looked at his body… No, nothing happened. He was wearing clothes and so was the girl. He felt relieved a little. Karan looked at the girl again. How did she get here?

"Who a.. are you? And what are you… do-doing here?" – he stuttered.

The girl looked around. No one else in the room. That mean he was talking to her.

"Me? I belong here. I mean I belong to you."

"Wh-what?! What are you ta-talking about?" – He couldn't think properly. She belonged here?

"I am Shilpa… And I am supposed to protect you." – the smile never left her face.

Karan sat there stunned. He didn't know what to say or do anymore.

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Ok so yeah.. That was part 1. Let me know whether I should continue this or give up on writing.😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting plz plz i beg u to continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting start :)
shilpa to protect karan :/
do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting start!!!!
loved it!!!!
waiting for next part!!!!
please do continue soon and pm me when you do.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice concept! Liked the 1st part very much :) do cont.soon and PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dont be jealous of my title 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
YOU WRITING ON KASH?😳
CAN YOU PINCH ME?😳
WHERE THE HELL IS TANI DI?😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Heart-Hacker-

Dont be jealous of my title 🤣

YOU WRITING ON KASH?😳
CAN YOU PINCH ME?😳
WHERE THE HELL IS TANI DI?😳

What ?? You dnt want me to write on KaSh? Should I change the couple? All I have to do is replace KaSh with another couple...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: TaniLovesDB5K

What ?? You dnt want me to write on KaSh? Should I change the couple? All I have to do is replace KaSh with another couple...😉

You writing on KASH😳
LET ME TAKE IN THE SHOCK😳
write on me&Kim☺️ Me and Dean☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey!!
Interesting beginning :)
Continue soon and do add me to your pm list
Luv
Nandi

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