ArHi FF ll Broken Melody ll Update page 40

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ello ha everybody! Kaise ho tum sab?! Firstly, I just cannot believe that I'm writing another fan fic - especially since I have so many pending!!!!😆 But seriously speaking, it's TOTALLY not my fault!!! I blame ArHi for making me ever so crazy over them!😳 So here I am, ignoring the major hand cramps I have, writing the updates for this FF as if my life depends on it!😆 The inspiration for this fic comes from all over the place I guess, especially from my own paagal dimaag!
Anyways, moving on, I don't normally like to give character sketches for my FFs, but I'll say this much: the characters in this FF are very different from the show! I'm not going to give away too much though! You can read for yourself!😉 I've already gotten three chapters updated! However, I'll post only if I get comments!
Arhi FF Broken Melody
Prologue
Her fingers danced along the white keys with desperation. A cold wind billowed her black tresses, tossing them onto her pale face mercilessly. The haunting melody echoed around the bare room leaving their traces through neverending echoes. The room was adorned with strings of cobwebs in every visible corner and surrounded by enormous brick walls. There were no doors...no windows...no sign of escape. She was trapped.

She closed her eyes tightly as her fingers continued to play havoc on the keys. The melody was heart-breaking. But she could not stop playing. Her fingers would not obey. It was as if they had a mind of their own. A burst of pain raced through her veins. She had been playing for 19 days now, without hesitance. Hot tears rushed down her cheeks at her helplessness. It hurt... it hurt so much! And all she could do, was gaze upon herself, wishing... only wishing that she could do something to heal it.

Suddenly, she felt red, hot, liquid trickle down her fingers. Blood. Her eyes flickered immediately to her hand gasping at the sting. Her palm was buried with deep gashes and scars. But her fingers ignored the desperate pleas of her heart. They continued, growing increasingly violent with each chord they struck.

And as the night slowly wrapped itself in the arms of dawn, the haunting melodies of the piano were muffled by the agonizing cries of the young prisoner.
So how was it? Worth continuing?
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jenshad thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting Prologue 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank You Sanju. For Updating. I Really Love It. Waiting To See How Khushi Ended Up Iike This.
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loved it sanju! seems interesting!! 😃
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Thanks friends! 2 more pages of comments and I'll post up the 1st part! :) otherwise I'll stop the story right here!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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No more comments...? Should I stop it here then...? :( oh well, it's ok friends!
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Originally posted by: mollycoddle

u have my interest😉

THanks so much sweetheart! Will continue if I get more comments... as of now, it doesn't seem to be the case...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's really good :) Please continue soon :)
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Originally posted by: Potatoefreak

It's really good :) Please continue soon :)

thanks so much! Will continue if I get more comments! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow this sounds soo interseting and may i say very confusing 😆
loved it and do continue soon 😊

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