RS: A Day To Remember-last part @pg 4

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Hi frnds,
wasn't active that much 4 last 3 weeks as exam pressure was on top. After long 2.5 months my exam got finished 2day. Now can give full time in here. 1st of all writing this rs(in few parts). Hope u will like it. . .
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now a days anant remains so busy 4 office work. All week long he has 2 work. That has made him feel down and tired of life. Navya realises it. Next day is sunday. She decides 2 give her all time 2 him 2morrow. . .

In d morning navya gets up 1st. Opening her eyes she sees anant is so closer 2 her. He is sleeping. His 1 hand is on her tummy. She smiles. Then moving his hand carefully she goes 2 take bath. . .

Coming back 4m bathroom she sees her hubby is still sleeping. She smiles cutely. Then she comes 2 him. Sees d 1st light of d sun falling on his face 4m window. That's making him look so cute and more adorable. She sweetly smiles. Then she sites closer 2 him. Kisses on his cheek. Takes her lips closer 2 his ear and softly whispers..'good morning'

anant opens his eye. Opening eye he sees his angel stting close him. So sweetly he smiles at her. Without saying anything he puts his head on her lap. Navya sweetly smiles. . .

Navya: anant! Jaldi utho aur naha lo. .
Anant: thora der baad uthta hoon. . .pls
Navya: subha ho gayi hai. .utho na!!
Anant: pehele mujhe mere good morning kiss do,uch k baad uthunga. .
Navya: thori der pehele toh di. .
Anant: tab mei nind mei tha. Aab doo. .
Navya: tum v na anant!

she kisses on his cheeks. .
Anant stands up nd kissing her 4head he goes 4 bath. Navya leaves 4 kitchen. .

Anant comes out 4m bathroom and sees navya isn't in d room. He goes 2 d balcony. He looks all around. It's a beautiful sunny morning. White clouds r floating in blue sky. Birds r sining. Golden sunlight falling all over. A bit cold air is blowing. His eyes goes on d garden. Sees d garden is full of colorful flowers. Seems like they r smilimg. Unknowingly 'wow' comes 4m his heart. . .

Navya comes 2 d balcony with 2 cups of coffe. Gives 1 cup 2 anant. Anant smilingly recives it. Then both standing close starts drinking. . .

Navya: kitna khubsurat subha hai na!!
Anant: hmmm. . .bahot din baad ace khubsurat subha dekh raha hoon. .
Navya: subha ros khubsurat hoti hai, tum hi ise nahi dekhte hoo. .
Anant: kiya karoon, kan ka itna stress rehta hai. .

both silently drinks coffe. Suddenly naughtyness comes in anant's mind. He holds navya's waist by 1 hand nd pulls her 2 him. .
Anant: subha khubsurat hai. .lekin mere jhalli se jada nahi. .
Navya: kiya anant, phir se romance suru. Ek bat batao, kiya tum pehele se hi itna romantic ho?
Anant: nahi. Jabse rab ne mere jindegi mei iss pari ko mere pyar banake bejha hai. .tabse itna romantic hoon.

navya blushes. They share a hot eyelock. Then they does some romantic talks nd enjoys d beautiful morning. . .

to b contineued. .
Edited by Sagar_Minhaz - 13 years ago

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-Divya.S- thumbnail
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lovely update sagar, plz continue soon..
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Really nice one pls pls do continue!!!!!!
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lovely update continue soon please
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contineuing. . .

after having coffe on d balcony navya wents 4 kitchen 2 help sugandha and rama...

After an hour she comes 2 room. She is about 2 enter d room, sees anant working on laptop. Navya remembers what she decided yestarday. She starts thinkhng how can she make anant spend time with her, how can she cheer up his mood. A idea crosses in her mind. She enters d room. Sits infront of him. . .

Navya: anant! Tum na buddhe ho gaye ho. . .
Anant: mein aur buddha? Acca joke tha. Actually navya, mein jitna hot aur handsome hoon na, mei kavi v buddha nahi ho sakta hoon. .
Navya: mei tumhe buddha iss liye keh rahi hoon keuke tum pehle jeca aur romantic nahi hoo. Aaj holiday hai, kaha tum thora romantic bate karoge meri sath, lekin tum laptop lekar behte hoo. .
Anant: kiya karoon, itna work pressure joh hai. .
Navya: anant, chalona hum shopping jate hai. Uch k baad koi acce resturant peh launch karenge. Pls anant. . .
Anant: arey wah!! Joh baat mujhe bolna chaiye tha woh mere jhalli bol rahi hai. Day after day u r becoming more romantic!!
Navya: kiya karoon, tumhara patni joh hoon. Tumhara romantic aada mujh mei ageyi hai. . .
Anant: that's good 4 me. Chalo shopping jate hai. .
Navya: ok. Ready ho jao. .


both r getting ready. Anant brings out his dress that he uses 2 wear 4 office. Navya sees that. She stops anant 4m wearing those. .
Anant: kiya hua?
Navya: anant! Hum office nahi shopping jarahi hoon. .
Anant: lekin mein toh aaj kal yehi kapde pehenta hoon. .
Navya: aaj tum tumhara favrouite kadpe pehnoge. .

navya brings out anant's blue jeans and black full arm body fit shirt. Anant becomes so happy. He is looking so dashing and macho in this dress. Navya wears a black suite. She is looking too cute, gorgeus that is out of description. Both were about 2 leave, navya stops anant and brings his gogles and asks him 2 wear that. .
Anant: pehnunga. Lekin ek shart peh. .
Navya: kiya?
Anant: tum v aaj gogles pehnoge. .
Navya: mein? Ghar mei sab kiya bolega?
Anant: mere liye pls. .
Navya: thik hai baba, pehn rahi hoon. .


all family members r in d garden. That moment anant 1st comes out 4m d main door. Everybody becomes stunt 2 c him. .
Rama: haiii. . .mere devarji kitna handsome lag raha hai. .
Bd: anant yeh keca kadpe pehna hai? Uch ka shadi ho gayi hai, aab kiya aca college wale kadpe pehnna thik hai? Hari om pravu ji ka. .
Rama: aap kiya jane bd? Aaj v jab mere devarji road se jata hai, tab hazaron ladkia ki muh khuli ki khuli reh jati hai. Itna dashing joh hai mere devarji. . .

than navya comes out with gogles on eye. .
BD: yeh kiya?
Rama: aur kiya? Hamari devraniji. Hai god! Kisi ki nazar na lage hamari devraniji ko. . .
Bd: ha ha agar mei aca chashme pehnu toh mein uch se v sundar lagungi. .
Rama: tab sad lok kahenge k dekho bandar ki akhon mei black chashma. .

bd gives a angry look 2 rama. Rama makes funny face at her. .

Than anya walks 2wards their car. Both r highly excited. .


to b contineu. . .
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I love buadadi wala sentence😆.Very nice writing.Plz continue #savenavya
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good update bd 🤣 hot anya.please continue
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lovely update sagar, superb, loved bd and rama's part. 🤣 anya part was cute, 😳 ❤️ thanq. plz continue soon..
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣🤣 superb wow gogles
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contineuing. . .

anya going 2wards their car. Suddenly navya asks anant 2 stop. . .
Anant: kiya hua?
Navya: anant, main soch rahi thi ki hum car se nahi jayenge. .
Anant: kiya? Toh phirr?
Navya: ummm. . .what about ur bike?
Anant: bike?
Navya: ha anant pls. Main kavi tumhare sath tumhare bike peh nahi chara hoon. .aaj pls bike se jate hain. .pls

anant smiles. .
Anant: itna pyar se kahoge toh manna toh padegahi. .just a minute. .
anant goes nd brings his bike. . .latest brand of yamaha. .
Anant starts his bike and asks navya 2 sit. Navya sits and puts 1 hand on his sholdier. .

Anant: navya, aab tum mere patni ho. . .
navya understands what anant want 2 mean. With a shying smile she holds anants waist. Anant smiles. .their day out begins.

Both reaches mall. Anant goes 2 park bike. Then both 2gather enters in. They starts their shoping. Both r highly enjoying it. Navya buys sarees 4 her,rama and other womens. Anant buys jeans,shirts. Navya buys some jwellerys..

Both r so hungry by this time. Goes 2 d resturant of d resturant. Anant orders food. Navya secretly orders noodles without saying anant nd asks waiter 2 present that as a surprise b4 anant. . .
All food reaches. But 1 dish is covered up. Navya asks anant 2 open it. Anant with confusion in face opens it. Sees noodles with so many colorful vegetables. The decoration is superb. A big 'wow' comes out 4m his voice. He thanx navya 4 this surprise. Then both enjoys their launch. After that they hav icecream. Then they goes in d lift 2 go d top floor. Fortunately there is nobody else accept anya. .

Suddenly lifts get stuck. .

Navya: kiya hua? Lift keu rukh geya?
Anant: lagta hai electricity chala geya. Don't worry thori der mei generator on ho jayega. .

both remains silent 4 a while. Than. .
Anant: dar lag rahi hai?
Navya: bilkul nahi. Tum ho na meri sath. .
Tumhe garmi lag raha hai?
Anant: bilkul nahi. Tum ho na mere sath. Mera AC. .
Navya: anant, tum v na. .

both reamin silent again 4 a while. .
Navya: anant, tum khush ho na! Aaj day out peh akar. .
Anant: bahot bahot bahot khush hoon. Itna dino k baad i am back in my favourite dress code, a day out by bike, noodles. . . Just awesome. .

navya gets angry. .
Navya: iss k matlab meri sath tumhare liye aaj ka din khas nahi banaya hai. . .woh bike,yeh kapde aur noodles tumhare liye khas hai. . . Jao tumse mein kavi baat nahi karungi.
navya turns back 4m anant. Anant smiles. Than he takes his lips near 2 her ear. .
Anant: tum woh ladki ho jisko mein khudse v jada pyaq karta hoon. Kitna pyar karta hoon mein khud v nahi soch sakta hoon. Bach yeh pata hai k agar tum mujhse dur jati ho toh mere dil rone lagta hai. Tum woh ladki, joh mujhe itna pyar karti hai k uch pyar k age mein sari duniya bhula sakta hoon. Aaj tum mere sath ho. .toh phir batao aaj ka din kace khas nahi hoga?
a big smile comes on navya's face. She turns around. Hugs anant so tightly with excitment. .
Navya: toh phirr pehele woh keu kaha?
Anant: tume gussa dilane k liye. .
Navya: keu?
Anant: keu k tum gussa karte ho aur jab tumko mein manati hoon aur tum maan jati hoo aur uchke baad mujhe kaske hug karti hoo. . . .mujhe bahot acca lagta hai. Uch hag k liye mein ek baar nahi, doo baar nahi . .hazaron bar tumhe gussa dila sakta hoon. .

navya blushes. Then she kisses on his cheek. Anant is about to kiss her but lift door gets open. There is many ppl standing outside. Navya laughs out. Jokingly says 2 anant. . . .'better luck next time'. Anant smiles. .

Both comes out 4m mall. .

Navya: aab kaha jayenge hum?
Anant: some where very special. And a big surprise is waiting 4 u. .


to b contieue. .

Edited by Sagar_Minhaz - 13 years ago

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