RS: A Day To Remember-last part @pg 4

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divya

@-Divya.S-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Wow ths is so beautiful.. loved it. ❤️ specialy lift wala, anant's words, awww 😳 Hey plz next want a looong update..

Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago

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Ganga Venkatesh

@ganganavya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

hey please next time long update with more anya scenes.

its really awesome update lift struck was sooo cute

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Sagar Minhaz

@-sagar-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ganganavya
hey please next time long update with more anya scenes.

its really awesome update lift struck was sooo cute

ok di. I will try😊

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Ganga Venkatesh

@ganganavya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Sagar_Minhaz

ok di. I will try😊

thank you

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Neha Kashyap

@-ParamHolic-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Wow Bhai..Its really awsome...Loved every bit of it...

Plzz keep on wrting...:)))

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vanshu90

@vanshu90

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

plzz update d nxt part...

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Sagar Minhaz

@-sagar-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Contineuing. .last part.

navya is excited nd confused as anant is going to give her surprise. Anant takes navya 2 d place where he want 2 surprise her. .

Anant stops bike. Navya cs it's that place where they came 2 spend a quality time 2gather after anant's marrige with saghun broke. A big smile comes on navya's face. .
Navya: wow anant! Kitna dino k baad eha ayi. Yeh pahar, nadi!!! Jante ho mein iss jagah ko bahot miss karti hoon. .
Anant: keu? Aca kya hai eha?
Navya smiles. Gets closer 2 anant. Puts her hands on his shoilders. .
Navya: yaad hai! Yeh woh jagah hai jaha tum. . tum pehele bar mujhe. . .pagal ladki kahe the. .
anant remembers that moment. He smiles. .
Anant: mein kuch galat nahi kaha tha. .tum sach mei pagal ho. .
Navya: galat. Mein pagal nahi thi. .tumhara pyar mujhe pagal bana diya. Iss liye tumhe punishment milegi. .
Anant: punishment? Keca punishment. .
Navya: mujhe ros pagal ladki bulana padega, mujhe ros kuch na kuch surprise dena padega, mujhe ros bahot. . .bahot pyar karna padega. .
Anant: baap re!! Itna sare punishment?
Navya: hummm. . .koi problem?
anant holds her tightly in his arms. .
Anant: agar tum na deti. .phir v mein khud hi yeh punishment mang leta. .
navya smiles. Both hugs each other tightly. Smile on boths face. .

After a while. .
Navya: anant! Tum na mujhe eha surprise dene le aye the!
Anant: ha. Lekin surprise k liye tumhe kuch condition pura karni padegi. .
Navya: kiya. .
Anant: pehele bench peh behto, uch k baad apni yeh doo pyari akhein band karo. .uch k baad surprise milegi.
navya sits nd closes her eyes. Anant smiles. He goes back of navya. Then . .brings out a beautiful diamond necklece 4m pocket. Puts that on navya's neck. She feels that anant has put something on her neck. She opens her eyes. Cs d necklece. .
Navya: wow! Anant! Kitna khubsurat necklece hai. Yeh mere liye hai !!
Anant: nahi. Mere aur ek patni hai. .uch k liye.
Navya: kiya anant! Tum v na. .
Anant: yeh mere dream princess. .mere navya k liye. .
Navya: sach mein bahot sundar hai.
anant comes infront of navya. Sits b4 her on his knees. .
Anant: jante ho. .jab mein gift kharid raha tha, tab soch raha tha. .kuch aca gift doon joh mere navya k liye sabse khubsurat gift hoga. .
Navya: phir toh. .yeh gift har geya. .
Anant: keu gift pachand nahi ayi?
navya smiles. Holds anant's face in her hand. .
Navya: mere liye sabse khubsurat aur mehengi gift mujhe pehlehi mil geyi. .
Anant: kiya hai woh? Navya: tum. Ha anant. .Tum mere sabse khubsurat aur pyara gift ho. Joh mujhe uch rab ne diya hai. . .aur mein tumhe kabhi khona nahi chati hoon.
anant's eyes fills with tears. Hugs her tightly. .
Anant: tum v rab k diya hua mera sabse khubsurat taufa ho. Mere jindegi ho tum. Tumhari bina mein kuch v nahi hoon. Mere pyar, har shasho ka doa ho tum. Ji nahi paungi mein tum bina. I love u so much. . .
by this time navya's eyes also fills. Both hugs each other for a while. .

It's about 2 sunset. Sun is red now. Both starts 4 home. .

On d way. .road isn't crowded at all. Only 2/3 vehicles on d road. Anant driving d bike on a medium speed. Sky is a bit cloudy. Cold air is blowing. Birds r reaturning home. Navya's open hair flowing in air. So touchy atmosphere. . .

Navya cs a group of bride procession far. All r dancing singing. Navya remembers her marraige. The moment when anant put sindur on her head, put mangal sutra on her neck nd made her own 4ever. The moments of their 1st suhag raat at their #420 flat flashes in her eyes. Unknowingly smiles comes on her face nd tears on eye corner. She holds anant more tightly. Puts her head on his back. Anant didn't know about what navya was remembering. But he felt good 2 c navya's smiling face on d side mirror. He smiles. His heart starts 2 say. .' yeh muskurahat. .issi k liye toh mein jita hoon. Mein hamesha chatatha k mere navya sari duniya bhula k mere karib rahe. .bahot karib. Itna karib k khud rab v humhe juda nahi kar sakte hai. . .'
both enjoys every single bit of this moment.

After reaching home. .navya siting b4 mirror seeing d necklec. A sweet smile on her face. Anant comes nd hugs her 4m behind. .
Anant: thanx. .aaj pura din mera sath dene k liye. Aaj ka din itna khas banane k liye. .
Navya: lekin aaj ka din toh tum mere liye khas banaye ho. Itna khubsurat taufa dekar. .
Anant: mere liye tumhari khusi aur muskurahat khas hai. Aaj mein tumhari akhon mein muskurahat aur chehere peh khusi dekha. . .iss se jada mein aur kuch nahi chata hoon. .

both hugs each other. Both has sweet smile on face. Both r so happy.

Thus a sweet day comes 2 an end

Edited by Sagar_Minhaz - 13 years ago

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divya

@-Divya.S-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

very beautiful update dea. i lov d way u express anya's feelngs in dialogues, so touchy and one can feel whike reading.. continue to write more hanh..

Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago