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Chapter 3
The thought to be shackled in matrimony and to forever lose his freedom were just enough to get rid off whatever little guilt Maan felt, after seeing his Dadi so morose.
He knew he still had a long way to go, but he slept… content with the knowledge that he had already taken first step towards his freedoom.
Aditi Handa was on cloud nine. The anxiety of the last two nights was long forgotten.
She had been scared when G left. She had been expecting her family to grill her about what had transpired between Maan and her, but a fuming Tej bhai had left immediately, followed by her bhabhi. Dad too left for his study all but dejected. Di and jiju thought it best to leave and her mom started to prepare for the same. Relieved she too left for her room, when after almost 2 hrs her mom appeared with her dinner.
Amidst tears she told her all about Aditya and that having no other option she had asked Maan to reject her. Her mom though initially upset at being kept in dark had promised her that she will get Aditya and her married and also warned her not to do anything stupid again.
She slept off dreaming about Aditya and their new life together.
Geet Handa did not think much about the day and dozed off the minute she landed on her bed blissfully unaware that her life was about to change forever.
If tonight was much needed breather for the younger folks of the Handa's and Khurana's, the senior members were a disturbed and unsettled lot.
Mohinder Handa had a lot to worry about but his immediate concern was figuring out a way to decline a proposal from a man like Maan Singh Khurana, that too when he himself had asked for his wayward daughter's hand.
Mrinalini Handa was deep in thought; the man who had come today and asked for the hand of her feisty youngest daughter had her perplexed. She had heard him to be very arrogant but he had not displayed any tendencies of a typical haughty Indian male; he had not ratted out on Aditi nor insulted them because of Aditi's immature act. Out of all the possible options, he chose to ask for Geet's hand, WHY was beyond her comprehension.
At the other end of the city was Savitri Singh Khurana, the matriarch of the Khurana clan who had not only single handedly managed the Khurana empire for a decade but had also kept together all the members of her extended family.
Her eldest grandson, her Maan, her pride had always made her proud by his achievements- both personally and professionally. Though he was very stubborn and always did his own thing he had never given her a chance to question his decisions. He was a rebel – never the one to conform or give in to societal norms but the one to pave his own path and that is what made him more special but today he had truly disappointed her.
All she asked of him was to marry and settle down with a girl who would keep up with the traditions of her family, but what does he do -------goes and proposes to a girl who ………….. she will never let this happen.
He could not possibly like Geet, she was confident . She knew he did not want to marry - so all this is just a ploy to not marry. But then she is his Dadi – if he thinks she is going to back down, he is so mistaken. She is going to keep on with her search for a perfect girl for him.
For now she is going to agree to his marriage to Geet, and she was sure he would go to any lengths to call off the wedding and when that happens she will get him married to the girl she had choosen – if needed than on her death bed.
Next morning, Khurana mansion
When Maan came down for breakfast, his Dadi did not acknowledge his good morning, all throughout the breakfast she refused to even look at him.
' Alright so his Dadi has decided to give him a silent treatment', he mused. 'If she is hell bent on acting like a grumpy teenager then so be it, a sensible adult that he is, will not give in to her tantrums' and thus did not attempt to speak to her.
After the breakfast when he was about leave for office she stopped him.
"Maan, I want to talk to you" she said in a clipped tone and left for her room. He followed her with a knowing smirk. He knew her well; she will initially try to threaten him, than persuade him, next will be emotional blackmail and so on and so forth, but this time he is not going to relent. He waited for her to start with her theatrics.
After keeping quiet for several moments she finally dropped the bomb, at least it seemed like that to him,
"Hum aaj hi Handa's se aapke aur Geet ke rishte ki baat karne ja rahein hain."
She observed him for his reaction and was happy with what she saw : he was shocked.
"Aaj hi" was all he managed to squeak.
"Haan, why wait when u have already made up ur mind?"she asked.
She knew she had him cornered. Not waiting for a reply she questioned him further, "Or is it that u r having second thoughts."
He pulled himself together; he will have to be careful, he had messed with savitri Khurana, she was definitely not going to make things easy for him.
"Dadi, I have never been surer about anything else… It's just that I did not expect you to change ur decision SO SOON - until yesterday you were dead against her." He said trying not to raise his voice.
"How does it matter?" she retorted but composed her self quickly,
"And anyways I don't have any problems with Geet". She continued.
"So you have no problem with the way Geet is?" He asked not believing her.
"Well, u like her and that is what matters most, and I'm sure with some grooming she will be just fine." She said
"What grooming?" he was sceptical
"Nothing much …just change her dressing a bit and of course hair… they can always be grown and spending some time at a finishing school will help ………"
"For the first and the last time, Dadi I like Geet just the way she is, I wouldn't want to change a thing about her." He lashed out.
"Thik hain Maan agar aap yahi chahte hain to, I just want you to be happy." She sighed
Not wanting to give her the satisfaction of having the last word, he gave her a dazzling smile, and said, "Thanks Dadi, ur the best.".
After Maan left Savitriji called Mohinder Handa and apologized profusely for the way her grandson had treated Aditi. she requested to meet them again to set things straight as she did not want things to be unresolved between them
Evening, Handa Residence
After the initial awkwardness and hesitation died down, Savitri devi appologised again on behalf of Maan and told Mr and Mrs Handa to consider what she is trying to put forward.
"I know u might think it is not right to ask for the hand of a daughter for the same man who has rejected her sister, such things though weird are not uncommon, so I'll come straight to point and ask for Geet's hand for Maan"
Mohinder had not anticipated Savitriji's consent – she had not mentioned anything about Geet on the phone, and was truly bowled over by her proposal.
"Woh kya hain we have not thought about Geet's marriage, besides she is the youngest - until Aditi is not married we cannot think about her marriage."
"I understand, lekin Aditi jaisi pyari bacchi ke liye rishtein ki koi kami ho hi nahin sakti, aur hamei koi jaldi nahin hain shadi ki we'll just fix the alliance and marriage may happen at a later date."(I'm sure there won't be dearth of good proposals for Aditi, we will wait till that happens.)
Mrinalini grabbed the opportunity and said "ek rishta already aaya hain , par aapke yaahan se achanak ….. to humne unhe koi jawab nahin diya."
"Aapne to Geet ko dekha hain woh shayad aapke parivaar ke liye thik nahin." He advised
"Humare Maan ko wohi pasand hain." She replied.
"She is very stubborn and headstrong." He said not giving up.
"Humare Maan bhi kuch kam ziddi nahin."
"Woh… usne apni padhayi bhi complete nahin ki……" he faltered.
For a second she really wanted to back out, but she knew she could not.
"Hume kisi bhi baat se koi problem nahi hain ." she affirmed.
"Thank you, but shayad aap nahin jaanti ki Geet………." He hesitated.
She interrupted, "hum jaante hai".
"Geet shayad is rishte ke liye kabhi nahin maanegi." He said.
"Hum itna jaante hain ki bachho ki zidd se badi unki bhalayi hoti hain aur agar unki khusi ke liye hamein sakhti baratni padein to usme kuch galat nahin. Aap uske parents hain, koi na koi rashta doondh hi lenge unhe maanane ka ………aur hume koi jaldi nahin hain."[if we have to choose than we should opt for our childs happiness and not give in to their obstinacy, there is nothing wrong in being strict if it is for their own good. You are her parents – take your time to persuade her.]
Even after she left, her words rang in his ears; she was right it was his duty as a father to think of her future. he can no longer let his guilt come in the way of his daughter's happiness, he will make this wedding happen.
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Precap: Sunday morning
It was a long standing tradition in the Khurana household to spend the Sunday morning together. It was a usual lazy Sunday morning brunch for the Khuranas when they were hit by a tornado called G.

Edited by spicefactory - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Lovely update...can't wait for tornado G to strike1
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Awesome

Waiting for G to strike at KM

Poor maan 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
like it...
wtng for the nxt updt
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
nice part
loved it
can't wait for the next update
do continue soon
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Loved the update..
Daadi s too intelligent...
So the tornado s going to hit khurrana family..
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Awesome Update!!!
So Maan's heart-break wala idea didn't work!! 😆
Precap is damn interesting!
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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he thought he got his dadi out but instead she just agreed to it all
why does maan keep forgetting she is his dadi
i am sure geet or g aint gonna be happy about this at all

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 4a
It was a long standing tradition in the Khurana household to spend the Sunday mornings together. It was another usual lazy Sunday afternoon, with most men discussing business and politics; women chatting about latest trends and of course gossiping about parties they have attended and the youngsters who were getting bored to death - until they were hit by a tornado called G.
Maan was sitting with some of his uncles and cousins, contemplating why he had not planned an outdoor trip this weekend too; when he saw her walk in. He watched her stride upto him - her eyes flashing, cheeks a flaming red and he involuntarily got up. He nodded his head slightly when she came up to him and asked "Maan Khurana?", and before anyone knew a blow landed square on his face.
Everyone was stunned !
Pointing her finger she lashed out at him, "Is thapad se tumhari saari aakal thikane aagayi hongi. Don't you mess with me, jaante nahin ho tum mujhe, aisi band bajaungi ki nani yaad aa jaayegi. I hope Shadi ka bhoot to utar chukka honga, ya abhi bhi shadi karna chahte ho mujhse"
She turned to leave and stopped - she could not move….she looked down to see …. he had linked his index finger with hers and pushed her hand down ….when??? she in her angry outburst had not realized.
"Leave my hand you as***le. " She tried jerking her hand from his vice-like grip but he would not let go. She tried every self defense move she did learnt – twisting, turning, kicking, pushing but he did not budge even an inch, obviously he was lot more well-trained.
"Listen you moron, just leave ……" she started to curse again
"Shut up" he cut her, his voice menacingly low, "Stop making a scene and come with me." he commanded.
"No ways" she scowled and tried freeing her self again . He stood there unruffled. All drained out, she stopped struggling knowing it would be futile .
"Al right" she said defiantly… down but definitely not out.
"This way" he gestured and followed her into another room.
No sooner had he closed the door, she started showering all known profanities on him.
He pulled her and put a finger on her lips, "Chup bilkul chup", he glared, "Not a word now.", he warned again and moved back and turned giving her his back.
'She was going to pierce his eardrums with all her cursing. FOOL that is what he is. Damn! His brain had surely gone for a ride that day…how could he involve this crazy little twit in his already f**ked up mess. Was his Dadi not enough that he now had to deal with this 100/min cussing motormouth.'
In an attempt to calm his flaring nerves, he closed his eyes and running his hands in his hair, he let out a long breadth.
Finally convinced that he wouldn't strangle her he turned back and was amused at her sight – she looked all stoned, her eyes wide open , mouth agape, her face white, devoid of any color – surely the wild cat had turned into a lost kitten .
He walked up to her with a knowing smirk – it was payback time; she sure had to pay for the slap among other things.
"So what were you saying 'I don't know you?'. Well honey! We have all our lives to know one another. For starters I'll tell you something about myself," he said playfully. "I detest all kinds of 'tamasha.' In future think twice before pulling such a stunt in public." He barely managed to not make the last bit sound like a threat.
He watched as color rose up her face, her lips pursed and her eyes starting to fire up again and he raised a finger to stop her.
" Yes" he said "for the second one" and elaborated "I want to marry you"
"Are you out of your mind, why on earth do you want to marry me?" she asked clearly infuriated.
"Because I like you." He said with a poker face.
"Bul***it"
They glared at one another.
"You know what, give this crap to some *** chick who will go all crazy for you and SPARE ME."
"You know why I like you?" he asked ignoring her uproar.
"You are nothing like any random girl, I like your attitude, your confidence," he spoke as he walked towards her "your face flushed with anger" ,his voice now an octave lower , "your eyes bright and gleaming " he kept coming closer to her "your hair ……… " he whispered as he raised his hand to touch her hair.
She pushed him.
"Don't act smart, you fat head. Open your damned ears and get this straight ' I'.m . not . marrying .you'"
'This is pure entertainment.' He thought 'so much fun in getting her riled up'
"Tum kuch bhi karlo hamari shadi hogi, jaroor hogi." He stated and started towards the door.
"Whatever " she muttered and rushed out before him.
She walked back to the main hall -all seething and simmering determined to get back at him – 'he does not like tamasha,… hmm ', she blew her hair, 'just wait and watch'.
She came and stood in the middle of the hall and clapped her hands to gain everybody's attention, "All of you, may I have your attention please "
A fuming Maan followed her. She turned to him and said, "You want to marry me? hmm …. let me tell you something about myself, Infact all of you must know this."
She looked in to his eyes and said with cold fury, "You know who I am,hmm… Geet Handa, Mr Mohinder Handa's daughter …. But do you know I was not born to his legally wedded wife. I am an unwanted byproduct of his clandestine affair with his gold-digger of a secretary. I am a bl***y illegitimate, that is what I am." , she said her voice devoid of all emotions but her eyes – overcome with such vulnerability for a moment that even after she replaced it with insouciance Maan could not look away.
He could not look away even when she had turned to his Dadi and asked, "You would not want some one like me to be a part of your family, would you?"
And before Dadi could reply she walked back to him and arching one of her eyebrows and asked " So, 'Mr. I-am-oh- so-smitten' still wants to marry me, eh?" She looked at him , he definitely looked like a deer caught in the headlights. "Seems like cat got your tongue." she smirked looked around and turned to leave.
She had barely moved a few steps when he stopped her.
"Geet " his deep voice reverberated, "Maan Singh Khurana never changes his decisions – never"
She whipped around ready to explode– a stubborn bullheaded jerk that he was she is going to show him what it is to mess with G.
"How or to whom you are born does not change a thing about how I feel for you" he stated, his expression so serious, so intense, all playfulness having left his demeanor.
She just gaped at him in disbelief
Dadi came upto her and putting a hand on her shoulder said "hum sab jaante hain aur humne saab jaanke aapka haath Maanga hain. Aap abhi ghar jaiye aur shanti se sochiye. Aapne pariwar se bhi baat kariye. Humne apna faisla le liya hain aur hum chahte hain ki aap thande dimag se sochkar aapne liye sahi faisla le."
She gave him a 'this is not over yet and you're so dead' look.
She left fuming from there but not before doing some damage she punctured the tires of all the 3 cars parked in the front porch.
When the security personnel came to inform Dadi about the punctured tires, she looked at Maan to see his reactions. Everyone waited with bated breath to see, how will he react.
For a second he was looking all ready to erupt but the next moment he laughed shocking everyone especially Dadi.
He just brushed it off and instructed the security to get all the tyres changed and to arrange cars for the guests if they are not replaced by the time they left.
He left taking no notice of his family, who were gawking at him…
11.15 am Monday, Head Office – Khurana Group of Industries
The usually hustling bustling office was unusually quiet today, thanks to the astronomically rising temper of the M.D and the one to be worst affected was none other than his personal assistant , his right-hand man Aditya Talwar.
Adi as he was more popularly known, was really in a fix today. He had been working with 'Maan sir' for last two years and never has he seen him so out of character, agreed he is strict, a perfectionist and does not tolerate mistakes but he has never shouted on his staff or snapped at them for inconsequential issues, infact he held immense pride in the fact that he never had to bear his boss's moodswings………. But today his ever composed Sir had fired people left right and centre ... moreover he had cancelled all his appointments so he needed to reschedule a lot of things - but this was not a reason for his predicament - surely he could accommodate his sir's 'once in two years' bad mood. The apparent cause of his dilemma was the phone call he had received just an hour back,
"Adi, hum Savitri devi baat kar rahe hain, humari ek guest Mrs. Mrinalini Handa , Maan se milne ane wali hain. Make sure that she is directly taken to his cabin as soon as she comes and don't make her wait."
And for the past hour he has been deciding what is worse - Maan sir's wrath or his Dadimaa's ire, because sir has explicitly asked not to be disturbed no matter what. He was still nowhere near making a choice when Mrs. Handa appeared relieving him of his musings and he led her to sir's cabin-pronto
Maan had been in a foul mood since morning and his staff had to bear its brunt and so he thought it best to confine himself to his cabin. He was trying his best to concentrate on the sales figure when he heard a knock. He was annoyed, clearly his staff did not understand what 'do not disturb' meant. He was readying to fire irrespective of the person when the sudden appearance of Mrinalini Handa startled him
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Simply awesome SS 👍🏼...thank u for this unique Maaneet story...really enjoyed all 4 parts...waiting to see what happens next...plz continue 😊

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