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hey guys i'm back once again with new concept ... with new ss this is combine work of mine and my lovely sis neeti ... hope u all like this ss ... like others ...
so here the first chapter enjoy ...
*Canteen*
Sw: finally we got d sixth dancr 4 team weaklings as my own sis Taani..
taani smiles & all othr also
but vish stil unable to accept d fact dat Taani is replacing kria..
Vish(to hrslf): chahe koi bhi ajaye par humari kria ko koi replace nahi kar sakta , & i my heart says kria wil b soon back wid a bang!!
A guy entrd ... d canteen..
walkd straight 4ward & got seatd on seprate table.. wid a gang following him..
Louins noticed dem , dey stud up & now both d gang amne-samne!!
rey:how dare u enter our canteen??
green hornet:how dare u talk 2 my freind like dis!!
Sw: O hello Mr.Watevr dis is our clg so behave proprly..othrwise..
GH: Othrwise kya haan !!
cuming near 2 Sw wid full on fight mood..
GH:kya bolna dar gaya kya...
viky:Darna toh tum logo padega us baar tumhe chod diya tha bacche samajh ke par ab nahi..
ne:Babu , dont fyt plzz calming down babu..
GH:ha ha babu ja ja apne gal freind ke piche chup ja ... bichare chote chote bachhe..
shiv:Stop it guys ye tum sabne kya laga rakha hai mai yahan inse mafi magne aya hun aur tum log fir se ladai kar rahe ho!!
Shr:Maafi aur tumhe... u bettr remebr shivam u r such e cheap cheat dat if u fold ur hand & ask 4 pardon na den 2 i wont give..
shiv:(making a baby face): i know sharon i cheatd u all , i ditchd u , betrayd ur trust, ur friandship was pure & true (hitting d table hardly )& i foolish man killed it...
But sharon sum day cums in ur life wen u realize ur mistake & dere r few ppl who get oppourtunity 2 correct it.. & i blong 2 dat luky grup of ppl.. i have got a chance 2 amend my mistakes so i m here infront of u all to ask pardon 4m d bottom of my heart..
i surrender myslf b4 u all, u can curse me , beat me or do watevr u want to punish me coz i desrve d worst 4 d cheating i did.
he makes such a deadly face as if he rili is guilty of wat he has done.
(Great acting shivam no1 can beat u in cheating !! )
Rey:wats say guys??
viky:wats say ka kya matlab rey u shud ask what r v waiting 4?? d cheatr is infront us begging us 4 punishment himslf (folding his sleeves)so lets start!!!
nil:yaa dude aaj toh hum iski..
Bh:haan agar dhulayi karni hai toh mai peeche kyun rahun..
nil,viky, amar& bhart surround shivam wid an expression 2 jst do his strong :dhulayi" 2day!!
Dey r jst abt to.. bt Sw interrupts in between.
Sw:guys relax!! agar shivam ko savhme apne galti ka ehsaas hai so lets 4 give him..
viky:tu toh chup hi rahe sw , wat do u mean by lets 4give him?? isse to mai..(ready 2 give shiavm a punch)
Rey:hey viky stop!! i think sw is ryt now if shivam is rili repenting 4 his cheting den letzz (luking 2 sharon).
Shr:No rey i cant ..
Sw:kehte hai d biggest good deed of d world is 2 4give sum1.kisko maaf karke hum sabse bada "punya" ka kaam karte hai.
(Sw bhai tu kyu itna achha hai.. i agree maaf karna punya ka kaam hai par ye bhi toh sonch kya shivam maaf krne layak hai)
Shr: ok den as u all wish, but remebr if u evn try cheat again, u r killed!!
she leave followed by all Louins.
now shivam & his grup in canteen.
shiv's friend: shivam tu theek toh hai na?? tumne un logo se maafi mangi..
Shiv:(evil smile): kabhi kabhi koi bade plan ke liye aise chota maota game khelna padta hai..
other hand tanni and vish
vish : j taani samajti hey ki j kriya k place le li gi to galat scohti hey ...( ha bilkul thik samjti kya hey apne aap ko kuj khaash nahi giri hui ...🤣)...iska kuj karna parega ... idea ( ab kya idea hey ... muje to bta do ...)
taani rey ko pane k liye kriya k bare main pta lagan chati hey to wo vish se pooshti hey ...
taani : vish j kriya koon hey ...( phas gyi ... earth lover ...)...
vish : tu to gyi kaam se ...
taani " kya kha ...( kam sunayi deta hey kya ... kya kha idiot ...)..
vish : kuj b to nahi ... asha to tuje kriya k bare main jana hry ...
taani : ha ...( ushal to ase rahi hey jase bandar par pe ushlte hey ...)...
vish : firstly tum kriya ki tra dress up to kro ...
taani : par kese ...( phas gyi idiot earth lover ...ab ayega mja ...)
vish : ruk main lati ho ...
taani : thanks ...
vish : its ok ...( thanks k baat door hey ab to live comedy show hone wala hey) ...tum rey k paas jao na use asha lage ga ...
taani like always bohat khush hey jese agra mental hospital se bhaagi go ... but wait j bandar ki trha khuja kyu rahi hry ...
taani : mje itni iching kyu ho rhi hey ...
vish : j to abi suruaat hey agey agey dekho hota hey kya miss earth lover ...
everyone laughing on taani ...
rey : taani j kya kar rahi ho tum pagal ho gyi ho kya ...(lagta esa hi hey ...)...
taani : rey pta nahi ...( har pagal jahi bolta hey ...)...
ab taani rey ki taraf bar rahi hey or rey pishe pishe ...at last rey leave
rey : thank god ( jaan bachi ... )
taani back in girls locar room all most crying ...
taani : vish j muje kya ho rha hey ...
vish : taani i think kriya k clothes tume like nahi karte ...( what j kya hey .. what ever ... baat to thk kahi vish ne ..)...
taani : really ..( are j to maan b gyi ...>)...to ab ...
vish : scohne do tum fresh ho jao tab tak ...
taani ; thik hey ...
vish bathroom ka door bahar se lock kar deti hey
vish : jha band rho gi to thori der sabse door rahi gi or main agla step scoh sakti hoo ... or ha tume rey se kese door rakhna hey muje wo b scohna hey ... kyu ki kriya and rey kriyaansh ashe lagte hey ... na ki tarey ...ewww tarey ...(kitna ghatiya hey ... like earth lover ...)...
vish leave ...
taani in bathroom : please open the door ... j lock kese ho gya ... khi bhoot to nahi ...( j bhoot word not again ... vese tum jesi earth lover hogi wha bhoot ki kya jroorat hey .. bhoot b dar k mare bhaag jayega ...)...
ok guys this is first part hope u like
jutaas and chapples ka most wel come ...but comment and like please ... waitng for u'r comment ...
neeti and aroma
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