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@hARSHA_Neeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

plzz b4 reading update read dis post!!

So dis update is dedicatd to OWL's club..

well wanna inform u all abt dis club..

In dis club all d membrs r included who get online till nyt 1:00 to 2:00 am hiding 4m dere mom & dad.

i & kinjal r itzz membrs 4m a long tym ago..

& we c many of u also doing d same so jst wanna know who r in dis club.. already but yet uregistrd!! plzz along wid ur sweet comentzz also tel do u blong to dis club den give ideas dat can we make a membr list of dis OWL club..

wud love to know who r d membrs..

& to those who r not d membrs we wud like to inform dat u can join it.. itzz a sweet + risky club..

sweetness & fun

@ we enjoy keeping eyez open at late nyt like owls..

@ its fun to interact wid frienzz 4m outside india as dey have day tym dere so dey r mostly online..

@ entire home & ur colony/society is sunk in deep sleep & u r awake so u feel proud 2 do sumthing different!!

risks

@ As did work is done by hiding 4m parents so u have a gud risk of ur mom holding broom/rod to cum & bang u 4 being awake late nyt!!

@ now wen u ll wake up vry late in mrng(oh bettr to sat noon tym) den u have gud risk of listening long lecture combind wid scoldings by dad 4 waking up late!!

@ u can also get dark circles as ur woke up l;ate nyt!!(jst kiddng aisa kuch nahi hota, mere aur kinjal ke faces abhi bhi clear hai😆 ).

So 3 risk + 3 fun..

but wat is life widout risk..

So we invite u all 2 join our OWL club.

& yaa dis update truly dedicatd 2 owl club membrs.

posting time: 2:10 am.

p.s. Need ur suggestions guys can we launch dis club in d3 forum, wil mods permit agar topic close kar diya toh(nahi alraedy mere Taani wala poll close ho chuka ha), plzz share ur views & if yes den also give sum ideas 4 organizing dis club.

Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago

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Neeti

@hARSHA_Neeti

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

part-2

lets begin ...

everyone finding taani as u knoe wo to bathroom main band hey ...

to inhe kha se milegi ...

vish silently siting in canteen and enjoying her coffee ...neha come ...

neha : vish tum what doing ...?...jha tanni don't know kha and u coffee enjoying ...

vish : o please neha stopid jab dekho us naani ka nam japte rehte ho tum log ...( abi gussa dilayegi to esa hi hoga ... bathroom main band hey phir b pisha nahi shoota ...)...

neha : tum kese talking ... she is hmari friend ...( friend my foot use to main apna dusman b na manoo ... chipkli khi ki ...)..

vish : stopid dude ...she is not our friend ha ...wo shirf swayam ki friend hey ...(right vish ...wo nanni or friend no ways ...)

neha : but ...

vish : kya but tum khud ko kriya ki best friend bolti thi na vish ... to ab kya hua ... kitni jaldi bhool gyi tum use ...or aj is naani ko apni best friend bna liya tumne ...i don;t believe this . i know sab kriya se naraj hey kyu ki wo bina btaye chali gyi but i know koi reason hoga tabi wo gyi ...( right vish u r a true friend ...neha maan ja please please .,...)...

neha : after some silence ... hmm tum thik speaking ...but what hum doing is main ...

vish ; bohat kuuj bas tum mera saath do ...

neha : ok main with u ...tu what doing hum ab ...

vish : hame us taani ko rey se door rakhna hey or ase show karna hey like hum uske friend hey ...

neha : u speaking sahi ...( ab ayega mja ...)

taani kisi girl ki help se bahar nikal ati hey bathroom se ...but use kya pta bahar uski wait ho rhi hey ...swagat by vish and neha ...gonna fun ...

taani : hey krishan g je kya ho rha hey ...( krishan g b kya kre ...are idea aya muje abhi ...)

neha : kya kre ...

vish : krishan g ...

neha : what tumhara meaning ...

vish : dude j naani jab dekho krishan g ko pareshan karti rehti hey ...to aaj hum ise pareshan karte hey ...( what an idea sir g ...)

vish as krishan g ...voice : bolo balike ...

taani : kaun hey ...samne ao...

vish : abhi abhi aumne hma jaad kiya tha na ...krishan g ...

taani : krishan g aap ...( phas gyi yaaa...)

vish : to btao kya cahti ho ...

taani : rey ko ...

neha like iski to main kriya k rey ko scheene gi ha ...😡

vish : lekin uske liye tume tapasya karni hogi ...( rey chahiye maharani ko .. ab dekh main kya karti hoo ...)

tanni : muje kya karna hoga ...( kuj nahi bas khud mental hospital chali jao ...)...

vish : teen cheeje ...pehli ...tume har raj teen ghante ek pair pey khde hona padega ...doosra agle ek hafte tak tum bilkul chup rahogi ...teesra tum rey se door rahogi...ek mahine tak warna wo tume kabi nahi milega ...

taani *selftalk * itna sab karna parega main to mar jaugo phir rey ki kya jroorat ...but itna kuj main kese ...

vish : ab tume karna parega warna tumhari awaaj chali jaye gi ...

taani : nahi main karugi na ...( hahaaa chalo ek mahine k liye pisha schoota ...)

taani like😭

vish neha like 🤣

Louins 4gave shivam , he joind their team' only shivam took admission St.Loius not his gang last update mein wo sirf usko St.Loius chodne aye the..

Now though shivam joind Louins but nil,viky & Sharon stil not abl to 4give him dey jst give him fake smile wen he 's infront of dem..

Days passed (not many jst 1 weak) shivam got mixed up wid Louins..

In dis entire weak taani kept quite she didn't talk as she thot it was Krishna ji's order so dat she cud get rey.

Now 1 morning'

*canteen*

Evry1 sitting

Viky:kyaa yaar aaj kal life kitni boring ho gayi hai?? Na koi fest na koi cpmpettition , footloose bhi hume kisi stupid(luking at shivam) ki wajah se..

Rey(pressing viky's arms) :viky!!

Shr:but y is taani silent 4m last 1 weak..

Vish(self talk): All thanx to me.. sab kitne relaxd the aur khush bhi aftr all koi pareshaan karne wala jo nahi tha..par ye ache din itni jaldi kyun khatam ho jate haiii.

Rey:yaa taani y u remaind silnt 4 an entire waek??

Taani to Bubble Taani: kya bolu , Krishna gi ke bare mein batao??

Bubble Taani:nahi stupid, agar tune inhe sach bataya toh tujhe ye log pagal samjhenge..

Ta: toh kya bolu??

BT:kuch bhi bol dena..

Ta: wo rey bas aise hi.. gale me thodi prblm thi isliye bol nahi payii..

Rey:ok..

Nil:waise guys tumhari prepration toh ho gayi hogi na footloose ke liye?? Kaisa chal raha hai sabkuch..

Sw:yaa nil almost done jst hope ki sab theek ho(his eyezz getting wet a bit)

Vish: Missing kria!!

Sw nods..

Amr:ham yaal klia ko toh mai bhi miss kal laha hun taani ne usko replace kal toh diya hai pal jo klia kalti thi wo koi nahi kal sakta..

Vish:yaa dude krai humare routines ko last touch up deti thi humare steps correct karti thi uske bina humne practice toh kar li par performance!!!

Real gud freinzz of kria bcum sad remebring hr..

All of a sudden a big gang entr d canteen wid a big bang!!

Evry1's eyzz turnd 2wards dem..

3 boys & 2 gals constitute d gang..

All d 3 boys vry smart & handsome.. (luking quite stunning) enter 1^st.

Gals drooling them!!

Viky:yaar ye log kaun hai..

Nil:wo chod tu ye dekh ki clg ki saari gals unhe aise drool kyu kar rahi hai??

Bhr:ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai obviously kyunki wo log bahut handsume hunk hai..

Nil:1 minute bharat tune English word bola..handsum hunk!!

Viky:Abe wo chod ye dekh ki ye log toh humare rey ko bhi cpmpettion de denge..

Rey:tum log bhi na kuch bhi..

Now 2 gals entry..

Both vry pretty & cute a lil hot .

Now boyzz turn 2 drool ovr dem..

Amr:Ale yaal un ladko ko chodo aur unke peeche un ladkiyon ko dekho..

Rinny giving angry luk 2 Amar..

Amar lowrd down his eyes keeping quite.

Nil:haan yaar ye ladkiyaan toh savh me kamala ki hai..

Simmy plzz don't burn ur heart again humara nil toh hai hi aisa..

Sw:tum log bhi na jahan ladki dekhi matalab bus.. stop all dis & letzz go & ask dem who dey r??

Now both gang amne-samne'

Rey:hello guys but who u r?? we r seeing u in d clg 4 1^st tym ..

D gang ignored rey's word.. & moved 4ward to shivam (who was sitting on 1 of dazzler seat )

Now d 3 boys of new gang r b1,b2,b3 & gals r g1 & g2.

B1:bahut shauk hai na tumhe dusron ke mattrs mein entry marne ka??

Shiv:what r u saying?? I don't get it.

B2: Oh so Mr.Saint u don't get it??

G1:ise aise kaise samajh me ayega, aftrall iske jaise gire hue insaan ne itni galtiya ki hai life mein ki unki counts hi yaad nahi ise.

G2:u r ryt bichara ye sonch raha hoga ki akhir mere kaun se fraud ki baat kar rahe hai ye log??

Rey: I know guys ki shivam ne past mein galtiyan ki hai but now he's changed, so like us u all also 4give him.

B3:4give aur wo bhi ise NEVR jo isne kiya hai uske liye koi maafi nahi hai, shayad aap logo ka dil bahut bada hai jo iske itni giri hui cheating ke baad bhi apne ise maaf kar diya..

Rey:wait a sec tumhe kaise pata dat he cheatd us.

G2:wo aise Mr.Gs ki jab koi humse panga leta hai na toh hum uski puri biograophy pata kar lete hai, hume acchi tarah se pata hai ki is kamine(sorry I Neeti nvr use abusing words itz jst to reflect dis gang's anger 4 shivam) ne kiske sath kya kiya hai..

G1:boyzz what r u waitng 4 ?? jst start??

The 3 boyzz r jst abt to beat shivam badly.. but b4 dey cud start.

Rey:Guys plzz , control urslf, I don't know what has shivam done to u bt dis is clg plzz don't fyt here.. & even I wud reqst u all dat 4give shivam..

D gang is not ready to agree rey bt den g1 recives a sms 4m sum1, she tells abt d msg to all.

B1: Ok den we leave dis guy but not 4give him.. kyunki wo hum kabhi nahi kara sakte..

Dey startd leaving..now dey turnd back again.

B2: remember dis tym we left u but if u try to take panga again den c what wil we do!!

dey finally leave.

shiv(self talk):Akhir ye log the kaun aur inhe maine kab aur kaise cheat kiya??

so end wid 2day's part hope u all likd it..

All sorts of coment heartly welcum but plzz do coment we r waiting 4 ur precious comentzz

wid love.

aroma & Neeti.

Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago

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Asha

@Zehnaseeb.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

res

unres..

Yay, 1st one to comment *dhinka chika*

wow Vishaka, Taani, 1month ke liye chup... i wish it could happen in reality.*sigh*

i hope that those people somehow realte to Kriya...😳

now update ASAP🤗

Edited by Asha_ArSha - 13 years ago

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Yamna

@..-Chabhilal-..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Great update
Loved Shivam gettin beat up
Thnx 4 da pm

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Himani

@Himu_arsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Thanks for the pm neetzz It was really good

Goodnite

Love u

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Asha

@Zehnaseeb.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: hARSHA_Neeti
plzz b4 reading update read dis post!!

So dis update is dedicatd to OWL's club..

well wanna inform u all abt dis club..
In dis club all d membrs r included who get online till nyt 1:00 to 2:00 am hiding 4m dere mom & dad.
i & kinjal r itzz membrs 4m a long tym ago..
& we c many of u also doing d same so jst wanna know who r in dis club.. already but yet uregistrd!! plzz along wid ur sweet comentzz also tel do u blong to dis club den give ideas dat can we make a membr list of dis OWL club..
wud love to know who r d membrs..

& to those who r not d membrs we wud like to inform dat u can join it.. itzz a sweet + risky club..

sweetness & fun
@ we enjoy keeping eyez open at late nyt like owls..
@ its fun to interact wid frienzz 4m outside india as dey have day tym dere so dey r mostly online..
@ entire home & ur colony/society is sunk in deep sleep & u r awake so u feel proud 2 do sumthing different!!

risks
@ As did work is done by hiding 4m parents so u have a gud risk of ur mom holding broom/rod to cum & bang u 4 being awake late nyt!!
@ now wen u ll wake up vry late in mrng(oh bettr to sat noon tym) den u have gud risk of listening long lecture combind wid scoldings by dad 4 waking up late!!
@ u can also get dark circles as ur woke up l;ate nyt!!(jst kiddng aisa kuch nahi hota, mere aur kinjal ke faces abhi bhi clear hai😆 ).

So 3 risk + 3 fun..
but wat is life widout risk..

So we invite u all 2 join our OWL club.

& yaa dis update truly dedicatd 2 owl club membrs.

posting time: 2:10 am.

Hey Neeti, according to the club rules, its for those people who stay awake until late night.. but as i stay in USA, can i join.. coz late night in India, means afternoon in USA.. can i?? i would love to join?😳

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Anki

@KR_anki_ArSha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Awesome update..thanx for the pm neeti..
I can't post the smilies as i am online from mobile..but really rofl..rofl..
Last part was also nice..wondering who the gang was..
Update soon..