OS: Cold Coffee - Mayur

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Hey all i am writing an OS on mayur...

hope you people will like it 😊

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Nupur walking along with Samrat in shopping mall. She is looking dull, Samrat is trying his best to cheer up Nupur. But she is not listening to Samrat. Her eyes are wandering in the mall came to a stop when she sees a couple infront of her. The girl is looking as if just came out from fashion show, dressed in a tight jeans and T-shirt displaying her perfect figure with red color lipstick on her lips which are really attracting the crowd around, she is laughing on something drinking her cold coffee. But what caught Nupur's attention is the girl's hand on the guy's shoulder who is laughing along with the girl drinking his cold coffee.
Nupur started walking towards the couple with a serious expression, Samrat is shouting "Nupur, wait where are you going" and stops to see the couple infront of them, Samrat puts his hand on his eyes saying "oh no" Nupur goes and stands infront of the guy before the guy can react, she takes the cold coffee from his hand and pours the whole coffee on his head.
The girl beside the guy shouts "what the h*ll".
The guy is too shocked to react. Nupur is standing folding her hands glaring at the guy. Before the guy can react, Nupur turned and left from there. The guy shouts with an angry expression "hey you-" but Nupur didnot turned back. Samrat couldnot stop his laugh, he takes the tissues and went to the guy "i think you need this" then follows Nupur still laughing.

Nupur in her bedroom getting ready to attend a party, she is selecting her dress. She is still in her bath rope when someone knocks at her door. She knows who it is, without thining twice that she is still in bathrope goes and opens the room. The same guy from shopping mall standing infront of her, he glares at her and comes indside slamming the room behind him "what h*ll do you think, without checking who came you opened the door that to without proper dress"
Nupur gives him a i-donot-care-what-ever-you-say look and turns to check her dress saying "Mayank Sharma ka alava mere room ma aane ka himmat kisi ko nahin hain" Mayank smiles to himself, actaully he came to trash her for throwing coffee on his face in the mall but god how can he be angry his cute little Nupur and more over she is looking adorably sexy in the bath rope. He tries to hug her from back, suddenly Nupur turns her pushes him, as Mayank is not anticipating the move of Nupur he falls flat on his buttocks.
Mayank "ouch, kadoos kahin ki" Nupur folds her hands and bursts out "go to that stupid girl with whom you are romancing in the mall, you came after 3 years to India and instead of meeting us you are enjoying with that stupid idiot girl" Mayank gets up dusting his jeans. Nupur turns to other side hiding her angry and hurt looking at the dresses. Mayank puts his hand on her cheek tries to turn her, Nupur pushes his hand. Mayank tries twice to turn her to be pushed away by Nupur. Mayank sighs and turns her with force to face him and slams his lips to her. Nupur took record time to respond to his kiss, puts her hands around his neck pulling him close. After breaking the kiss Mayank joined his forehead saying "Will you marry me, Nupur"

Nupur goes back and looks into his eyes with a shocked expression.
Nupur, Mayank and Samrat are best friend in collage. Samrat and Mayank are always flirt with the girls where Nupur does all the assignments of both. When Samrat and Mayank gets caught in their mischeif it is Nupur who saves them. She secretly loves Mayank but never told him as she know Mayank is never serious about marriage and love. But he is behaves very possessive about Nupur. Samrat knows Nupur loves Mayank and use to tease her with his name, though Mayank knows he ignored everything. They completed their graduation, Mayank got Visa for his higher studies. Nupur and Samrat wished him all the best. Next day they go to airport. Samrat goes to bring coffee for the friends, Nupur turns otherside to hide her tears. Mayank "Nupur, oh main" he donot know what to say, he simply pulls Nupur into his arms and hugs her tight. Nupur hugs him for her dear life. Samrat comes back but stays at a distance donot want to interfere in their emotional scene. They break the hug when final announcement is made for Mayank Sharma. Mayank says "wait for me". Thats all their no promise, no confession, but Nupur waited for him trusting his three words 'wait for me'

Today he is standing infront of Nupur after 3 years asking her to marry him. Nupur "S-Mayank I-" Mayank puts his finger on her lips "i know i am fool who never said how much I love you. i felt i donot deserve you but i cannot run away any more. The day i left you in the airport i want to confess my love but words didnot came out and i just said 'wait for me'. My stupid girl is really waiting for me." Nupur smiled, Mayank takes her face kissing on her forehead says "will you marry me Nupur" Nupur nods her head as yes and stops "that girl-" Mayank cuts Nupur "oh meri cousin hain, who came from US to see India" showing little fake angry continues "aur tum na pooora cold coffee gira di mujhe paa" Nupur started laughing seeing Mayank angry face, he pulls her into a tight hug laughing to himself.

After three weeks Nupur and Mayank got married... Living happily Ever After...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os
it was really cute and simple story
do keep writing more :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os.Damn beautiful.Want more os on mayur
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Originally posted by: -Faria-

awesome os.Damn beautiful.Want more os on mayur


hey Faria i PMed you about SaRa version but forgot to send the about Mayur 😳

you find out yourself, thanks you so much for your comments 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Rabia.

awesome os

it was really cute and simple story
do keep writing more :)


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very cute os
😊
do write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awe
it was cute,simple n beautiful os
well written...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww this one was a really cute os! keep writing :)

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