you must br the reason i am alive A SWARON OS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heya guys this is my first os on swaron
so jute chappals tomatoes and eggs are welcome

Warm sunreays broke her peaceful sleep and when she opened her eyes the sight was even more mesmerising than the most beautiful dream.she couldnt help but smile slowly she got up and went to pull the cutains away allowing the sun reays to enter the room and brighten it . then she looked back to see her angel sleeping like a baby his face so calm and peaceful just like a lake slowly she went and sat beside him and was so engrossed by his innocence that she lost track of evrything but then a cool breeze brought her back to earth and she ruffled her fingers through his soft velvety hair and then slowly and carefully she leaned down to place the most tender kiss on hos cheek as if his cheek was a bubble and would burst the moment she will touch it then she moved towards his ears and whisperez gud morning.

Her gentle kiss.and hot breath near his cheek woke him up
he needed nothing else it felt as if he was in paradise . the reason for his existence.was.sitting right in front of him smiling
he slowly opened his eyes to see his love his life and his beautiful newly wedded wife
he couldnt believe his luxk neither could she and in that moment while gazing into each others eyes reluctant to tear apart both of them thought
U MUST BE THE REASON I'M ALIVE


ok so this is it do comment and let me know how horrible was it

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was a cute one.

Nice try.





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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey, it was nice.

Keep writing & make bigger OS's next time. : )
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice os n next time write a long one n do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really Grt Os !!
Pm Me Ur Nxt update 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good trail but short1
next try to increase the length of os
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u for the comnents
it was my dirst so i get it
it was horrible will write something better next time

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