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Posted: 13 years ago



Part 20



"There aren't any assumptions Manohar...it is the bitter truth that we must accept...you think I am fool who goes from place to place to find out about some solution to this problem" Kaka shouted back at Manohar...



Manohar wasn't ready to accept what Kaka had been saying "I don't believe..."



Kaka was ready to debate "fine then what about that crown.???"



Manohar couldn't control his laughter "oh...that...that crown..." he laughed out... "i must say it was made by the ancestor's to scare their coming generations..." his laughter didn't stop... "crown..."



Kaka was furious...he didn't wanted to listen to any other nonsense from Manohar's mouth... "you stay here...i will go myself"



Manohar laughed again "well who told you that I am going with you???.." he folded his hands in front of Kaka "you and and your imaginations...no one can win you"



Kaka annoyingly walked away... Manohar thought about Veer... "old man is worried about Veer...and here Veer is enjoying his life...one girl leaves another enters his life..."

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"Chandni you aren't eating anything...what happened??" Meenakshi asked her...



Chandni was all lost in her thoughts...she continuously thought about Veer...she kept on looking at the table...



she thought about him as if she was waiting for an answer from him since ages...as if she wanted to hear something from him...



"Chandni" she heard her Mother's voice and quickly smiled at her "yes mom...i was thinking where to begin with...you have made so many things..."



Meenakshi smiled back "eat what you want to"



After dinner she went towards her room...this was the first time that she didn't see her Mother and Grandmother before sleeping...



he made a huge impact on her life...the reasons were unclear as if something had been covered with a white cloth...she didn't wanted to call him, when he was not even bothered to come and see her...



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Misha wasn't happy to stay in a hotel...but that's what Veer had asked her...his Kaka would never like his girlfriend staying with him under one roof and this was the last thing he would do...this was what he explained to her...

but he knew Kaka cannot question him...Veer was clear that he didn't like Misha nor he ever liked her before...but it was only a matter of courtesy that he can't shook her away if she had come to see him... after dropping her at a nearest hotel...he went back home...



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Chandni was sweating, as if she was seeing a bad dream, she turned from one side of the bed to another...

she held the sheet of the bed in her fist tightly as if she was trying to fight something...after few minutes all of a sudden she screamed "Veer" that was loud enough to wake up her Mother...


without thinking anything else Chandni rushed downstairs and quickly went out of the house... her Mother followed her...to her surprise Chandni was running towards the main road... Meenakshi quickly started her car and followed her...



Chandni didn't stop...she didn't realize that she wasn't wearing any slippers...it was cold night and she was in her night dress... without even looking behind while her Mother was following her she kept on running...



Chandni couldn't think of anything else...she reached Kurseong... Meenakshi stopped the car on the main road and saw Chandni taking right turn towards a steep path that leads to a house...



Chandni banged the door "Veer ...Veer" '.. Veer wasn't sleeping...the moment he heard her voice...he rushed downstairs...without any second he opened the door...



Chandni looked at him...and hugged him tightly... he was surprised...

she cried... "Veer...nothing can happen to you...nothing..." she said and closed her eyes... he realized she had fainted... he lifted her in his arms and took her inside and lay her on the couch...



"Chandni" he sprinkled some water to wake her up... "Chandni...are you ok??"



Chandni looked around... with tears in her eyes "Veer...i...i..."



soon they heard the knock at the door... it was Meenakshi...



Chandni looked at her Mother who was surprised to see the whole incident...



"Mom" Chandni was about to say when Meenakshi interrupted her "no Chandni...don't say anything...lets go home..."



Meenakshi looked at Veer "hello Veer..."



Veer nodded and wished her... "i think Chandni..."



Meenakshi smiled "well I know Veer...and I would talk to you tomorrow in my office at 10:00am...good night"



Veer didn't say anything...Chandni looked a him and left with Meenakshi...

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Veer stood at the door for long time thinking why Chandni came to see him...and the way she looked...she was sweating and looked so nervous...



his thoughts weren't leading him anywhere...finally after standing for a long time he closed the door and headed off to his room...



thinking about meeting Chandni's mom...he had never imagined that he would be facing this...but honestly he didn't wanted to spoil her life...



he wasn't good for her...and she knew nothing about him...he decided that he will tell her everything '.after that she would never even look at him...





but he was still confused about what Chandni had said

"Veer...nothing can happen to you...nothing..."...

he could hardly sleep without drinking...finally he opened another bottle...

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Meenakshi reached home...before Chandni could explain her reason "Please go to your room Chandni...its too late...you must sleep now..."



that's all she said and walked towards her room...

Chandni went back to her room...it wasn't easy...she didn't even thought once before doing this...how could she just run towards his house after dreaming...but she thought over '..

she had forgotten the dream...she knew it was something bad about him but what was it...she couldn't remember...

she rolled over from one side to another but couldn't sleep...she was scared of what would her Mother say when she meets Veer...

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Next Morning...



"yes Mrs Verma...don't worry, Chandni will look after it..." Meenakshi said clearly...



Mrs Verma was happy that Chandni was back... Chandni overheard her Mother... "Mom...i...last night...hmmm"



Meenakshi didn't look at her... "Chandni, you have to go the estate today...don't you remember Mrs Verma is waiting for you...and yes take that red file with you..." Chandni nodded her head...



she knew she won't be able to explain the reason to her Mother, when she herself doesn't know why she went running to Kurseong in the middle of the night...



It wasn't easy for her...but still she wanted to meet him once...at least the last time... "Mom...i...i have to go to college"



Meenakshi while checking her laptop glanced at her "then go after giving this file to Mrs Verma..." Chandni was nervous, she knew for the first time in her life she lied to her Mother...

she looked at the clock...it was 8:30am...

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For the first time in her life she was so nervous that she forgot what she was wearing...she randomly took out a short skirt and a top, that she used to wear for her tennis practice...



she quickly marched out of the house and went to see Mrs Verma...

she wanted to give the the file and check the work quickly...

she checked the time...it was 9:30am... she thought over...should she remind Veer to get up and get ready '..she knew he was lazy and always woke up late... but then why will she tell him...



she doesn't have any relationship with him...he's not even her friend... "here Aunty..." she saw Mrs Verma waving at her...



Mrs Verma was glad to see Chandni after many days "so good to see you Chandni...everybody missed you...oh you look different... oh may be you were playing tennis..."



Chandni looked at her clothes... "oh no..." she glanced at Mrs Verma and some other workers who were looking at her "oh yes yes...i was playing '..well Aunty...i will quickly do the tour..." and she walked around...



she was so much furious at herself for not even thinking what she was wearing...she looked at her boots... "oh no...boots with tennis skirt...Chandni you have gone insane" '.



suddenly her eyes turned towards the valley where she was expecting Veer... she remembered when he had come before and the way he teased her...the way she she got angry...all thoughts stopped at her watch...



"i think my pulse will stop soon" she said nervously...



she looked at the time it was 10:00am...

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Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wah ek k bad ek ud

res ji
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...a regular one...i always wanted it...thank u...🤗
superb...👏
manhohar is not believeing what kaka is saying...manohar kaka is right veer's life is in danger...n you are laughing...ullo...😡
n chand is lost only in his thought...yes chand he has effected you very badly...try a lot but you are not able to get rid of him...😉
n thank god misha is not staying at veer's place...but i really hate her...couz of her veer didn't go to that place where he is waiting for her since last three months...😡
n chand saw a nightmare...something is happening to veer...what was that...???????...😕
n she ran from her house in her night dress,n that too without slippers n in middle of the night...just to see him...i think it's a sign for something going to happen in future...or may veer's birthday is coming...n it's a sign that his death is very near to him...
n why did chand's mom asked him to come to their house...???????...😕
n chand is so lost in his thoughts...that she is not aware of what she is wearing...😆
n she is waiting for him...wow...finally something is happening good...😍
n he has decided to tell everything to her...god how she will react...?????...he lied to her at every point of his life...
hope kaka will find some way...n veer's meeting with meenakshi will go well...n chand n veer's relationship...wo toh bhagwan bharose hi hai...🤔
continue soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

di,you are most welcome...n no need to say thanx...apki story hai hi itni achi...that it deserves to be love...
a big hug from my side...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update

Loved it
Chandni had nightmare about Veer
n She Rushed to his house
" nothing will happened ...nothing ""
there may be some reason behind her dream
Chandni's mom called veer ...ohhh
don't what will happened
update soon
lov u
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Posted: 13 years ago
woow !!! dat was amazng !! ⭐️
1st of all di...aapko yhnx bolne ki zaroorat nahin !!!
infact i shuld b thnkng u !! 4 wrtng dese beautiful ffs !!! 🤗
it felt niice 2 noe my commnt mens sumthng 2 u !!!

abt d ud -
luvd it !!!! ⭐️
thank God Misha is NOT livng in d same house as Veer !!! 😡
Veer is SUCH a changd man !!!
its gud dat he's goin 2 tell her evrythng !! 😃 it takes a lot of courage 2 do dat !!
but chandni luvs DIS Veer ...n Veer has changd ...hopefully permantly...so Chandni shuldnt hav 2 much probs wid his past !!!
coz its d present dat mattrs !!
d way she ran all d way 2 his house aftr seeing a bad dream...in d middle of d night ...shows so much luv...care...passion...longing...beautiful !! 😍
she's surrendered her all 2 HIM !!! 😍
i hope Veer meets her mom on time...n evrythng goes well...
u r fabulus writer di !!!! evrythng was xplnd beautifully by u !! 👏
her nervousnes...his impatience n anxiousness...their longing...just superb !!!! 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏
d suspense is 2 much 2 take...plz ud soon...
loads of luv...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for updates n pms
sorry for late comment
liked all the parts i left
separation was needed to realise their feeling to both of them!!
and liked both of them realised it!!
thanks to kaka to find acharyaji! hope he will suggest some solution
but manohar din't believed kaka n curse n crown!! veer also will not believe the same!!
loved u gave description of both feelings turn by turn!!
both waited at valley for eachother but couldn't met!!
but y this stupid manohar called misha!!
poor chandani saw bad dream abt veer n ran to him!!
minakshi came to know abt them!!
liked veer decision to tell chandani everything abt him!!
wht will be chandani's reaction then?
hope meeting of veer n minakshi not result in worst
already misha had entered!! 😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
di nice story as always loved it
nightmare scene was superb...she forgot everything n rushed towards him lovely n cute scene

i think her nightmare somewhere linked to veer's life...i mean that she saw that his life in danger

koi ni wo to pta chal hi jayega
i liked manohar n kaka scene vry much

she was so cute,...she loved him n he too
bt veer kuch jyada hi sudhar gya h sb kuch sach btana chahta h omg kahin baat na bigad jaye

or meenakshi ne veer ko kyun bulaya?koi serious matter to nhi h na

accha h veer ne misha ko hotel me rakha ...i hate her chudail kahin ki

update soon di
thanks 4 pm
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
reso jii

~~EDITED~~

di i noe, aaj kal main 1st commet nhi karti ho...
but main subah aj kal cahe se padai karti ho di...

after all mujhe bhi apke jaisa kabil n good citizen ban na h...
then i will help india n earn money n come new zealland, to hav dinner at ur place...

n di, agar aapne mujhe pachanse mana kr diya tho????????

mera tho popat hi jayega...
aap mujhe bhool tho nhi jaoge na!

chalo ab ud ki baari

bhot sooperbo ud tha.
lovd it really so too good
acha kiya iss miss tahelka ko hotel main bhaga diya,
verna, entire day, or may b nite she wud hav sticked to veer,
veer ws late , i cud not meet her.

she missed him so much

she sw a a bad dream, but she dinn remembr...

god she, straightly ran to veer's house, and hugged him tightly...
so romentic,
she ran widout slippers.

dats s much lovely...

why the hell her mother called him to her ofice,
veer shud go to her, verna chand ki mom k samne impression kharab ho jayega...

veer hs a sense of care, dats why he made misha comfirtable, though away,

chand is waiting for him, but its 10:00am, he has to meet her mom na???

then...

ud soon di,
i wanna read hw veer will react to her mom...wat will her mom ask?
will he stand to his decision to leave chandini...foreva...??

ud soon di lov u
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey,

Interesting update, cant wait to see what will happen next...😊

Plz update soon😊

Love
Tc😊

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