SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 53

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Posted: 13 years ago
woww...luvd dis ud !!
juda hokar unhe samajh aa gaya ki dey r in LOVE !!!! yay !! 🥳
im really very happy !!!!! 😃
FIINALLY Veer said LOVE not LUST !!!! 👍🏼
n Chandni 2 acknowledged her true felngs 2wrds him !!!
im super happy !!
he waitd 4 her evryday...aww...pyaar mein...😍
Chandni culd see only him !! 😳
Veer's regrtng all d ad deeds he's done !! pyaar kitna badal deta hai!!👍🏼
im luvng ds new Veer !! ❤️
both r soo...exctd n anxious 2 meet each othr !!!
but ye Misha kahan se aa gaye !! 😡
hope she doesnt spoil evrythng !!
was Veer imagng Chandni or ???? 😕
i thnk dey hav sum past life connectn ...
d lines were fabulus !!! really intense !!! ⭐️ 👏
i luvd dis ud !!! 👏 👏
do continue soon...
loads of luv...🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice Update Loved thouroughly
Chandni left for three months from Veer
but it perhaps helpful to veer to realize his feeling for her
kehte hai na ... " Durioyaan hai jaruri "
look It works He found n sure that He falling for Chandni
n that What named as " LOVE "
thank god he realized
n who is she... Mishaaa
she didn't allow Veer to meet his Chandni because of her so called shopping
poor chandni waited for him and left
n How could Veer meeet her
Update soon
do their confession
n what is about Ver family's truth
may be that Acharya ji help kaka to solve this mystery
n
you know in previous updates ... there u said that ...when chandni ( pure soul) enter in his life n her first touch to veer n that the black crown ...is that crown had effect ???
update soon Dhanvi di
want to know ...waiting
lov u
Edited by SonaliDhone - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..
so both fell in love finally..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update!!!
finally they both are in love with each other!!!
But why this Misha is coming in between!!!!😛😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

superb ud dear😊...so finally they both accepted their feelings for each other😳...

waiting to see their meeting now😍...but why this misha is here😡...plz plz update soon...

welcome back buddy😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
luved d update...
finally veer realisd dat he luv chandni...
n ye chudail misha kyun aa gyi beech mein ab...
alredy itni prblm hain n ye aur aa gyi... ye manohr ki toh... pagal gdhha khin ka faltu mein uss misha ko address de diya...
hope acharya ji kaka ki tension dur kr den...
kya yaar aaj k din hi veer to vahan late phunchna tha, bechari chandni kitna wait kiya... but dont worry darling he luvs u alot... hope veer jldi sudhr jaye... n ye drinking vrinking chod de... i 2 hate it...
thnx 4 d pm... update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally both accepted that they love each other...😛

''...He never missed a day when he didn't visited the valley...he looked at the snow clad mountains...somehow the distance between them increased but Veer's feelings changed for her...for now he was sure that he loves her...but he was scared of loosing her...''

o laagi tum se man ki lagan
lagan laagi tum se man ki lagan
gali gali ghume dil tujhe dhundhe,tere bin tarase nayan
lagan laagi tum se man ki lagan

''...Chandni knew for the first few moments she would only see Veer when she closes her eyes... she never knew when she started falling for him...''

o laagi tum se man ki lagan
lagan laagi tum se man ki lagan
gali gali ghume dil tujhe dhundhe,tere bin tarase nayan
lagan laagi tum se man ki lagan

"...Listen my fate, the line on my hands... I will never let you go away from me..." he said while sitting on the bench...''

aa ja o meri jaan, mere dil ka jahaan
maange teri khabar, dhundhe tera nishaan
laagi tum se man ki lagan
lagan laagi tum se man ki lagan
gali gali ghume dil tujhe dhundhe,tere bin tarase nayan
lagan laagi tum se man ki lagan

"...on my every breath '...on every wall of my heart...i have written your name...only your name Veer..." she plucked one flower and smiled...she closed her eyes and saw his smiling face "i forgot my God, I forgot the world...i forgot about myself..."

tera tujhako saunp de kya laagat hai mor
mera mujhamen kuchh naaheen jo hovat so tor

"...I will die the same time...i will loose my life...the moment you go away from my life..." he took a deep breath...he gazed at the mountains...and realized that his love for her was strong...from ages...he had been waiting for her...''

tere bin mera man, jaise ban me hiran
jaise pagali pawan, laagi tum se man ki lagan
lagan laagi tum se man ki lagan


After waiting for long time Chandni sadly walked away''she assumed Veer may not be waiting for her and she is one who is falling for him'.but even though he didn't come'her eyes desperately wanted to see him'..

He was quiet'.was it true'.he felt as if was loosing something precious...


aa aa...
pa da sa re ga re re sa, pa da sa re ga re re sa, ma ga re
pa da sa re ga re re sa
pa da sa re ga re sa, pa ma ga re sa, pa da sa re ga re re sa
sa re ga ma, ma ga dha pa
sa ni dha ni dha pa, dha pa ma pa ma ga, dha ma re ga pa...😍


n who was she...????...definataly not chandani...bloody witch...veer k peeche hi pad gae...chudail...😡
hope this acharya ji will help kaka to know the truth behind this mystry...
n misha...manhohar...u brainless idiot...he told her veer's address...n misha toh us witch se bhi badi witch hai...veer ko late kara dia...chandu uska valley pe wait kar rahi h n in maharani ko gift kharidana hai...ulloo...
n chand started to think that he doesn't love her...no chand don't go...he will come he will surely come...
god knows what is written for them...??????...😕
continue soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!!! Awesome update😊 Plz update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
ab jb m aa hi gai or
ud bhi pd liye to cmnt bhi kr du
ye judai bekarari haye ye majboriya
bt isi judai ne to ff me mangal (ma new version of jungle me mangal) kr diya 😳
di apke dilog to ufff...
Kha se late ho ap itne dhanshu dilog
hm to big wale fan ho gye ji apke
luv ur ff
luv ur dilogs
n luv u 🤗
ye chipakli kha se tapak gai 😡
iska to khoon pi jaungi 😡
bt m to pure veg hu 😕
to is magarmach (crocodile) k samne fake dungi
chipakli khi ki 😡
kitna acha chl rha tha sb
bt is chipkali ne beech me tapak kr sb popat kr diya 👎🏼 😭
Shoping iska jruri kaam tha 😡
poor chand 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

ab jb m aa hi gai or
ud bhi pd liye to cmnt bhi kr du
ye judai bekarari haye ye majboriya
bt isi judai ne to ff me mangal (ma new version of jungle me mangal) kr diya 😳
di apke dilog to ufff...
Kha se late ho ap itne dhanshu dilog
hm to big wale fan ho gye ji apke
luv ur ff
luv ur dilogs
n luv u 🤗
ye chipakli kha se tapak gai 😡
iska to khoon pi jaungi 😡
bt m to pure veg hu 😕
to is magarmach (crocodile) k samne fake dungi
chipakli khi ki 😡
kitna acha chl rha tha sb
bt is chipkali ne beech me tapak kr sb popat kr diya 👎🏼 😭
Shoping iska jruri kaam tha 😡
poor chand 😭

thank you so much sweetheart...loved reading your comments...popat...😆

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