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Posted: 13 years ago
GEET IS NOT USED TO ANGER AS SHE IS A PRINCESS IN HERHOUSE
AND MAAN HAS NO PATIENCE SO ANY CHANGE AND HE LOSES HIS COOL
BOTH NEED A LOT OF ADJUSTMENT
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Posted: 13 years ago

i ust Loved GEET in dis FF so much
she so cute..innocent...adorable
Geet all Dialogs ...Amazing..superb

"I am married now… you have to understand Rosy… please don't cry at night"😆
"Dusta… Nahi nahi pure Dusta Danav hai… he want to replace my soft toys with his cactus…. Dushta dana…" She ate her last word as he entered.

"Babaji… dil ke kitne acche hain na… mera khyal bhi rakhte hain… bass inka gussa… Babaji bas woo theek kerdo… aur haan babaji… mujhse pyar bhi kerwa do…" she stopped

"Aur haan…. Mere Teddys se bhi.. aur gift dena bhi yaad rahe" and her list was going on with the changes she wished on him when doctor left and she was still lost.🤣

wanna pull geet's cheeks...
Maan😡
I am doing all this because it was my mistake… samjhi tum "
really he is DhustDanav..hun!!
itni cute Geet pe Gussa hota hai😆
Awesome ..superb update...!!!!!
Loved it so much...

eagely waiting for next

(Precap 1: Geet takes promise from Maan

Precap 2:"Everyone goes to Switzerland for Honeymoon, why are we going to London " she thinks)

continue soon


thankx for pm


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome yaar... jst came across this...
sooo cute... bichari geet...
i hope geet maan ko real life ka meaning samajh de...
he should understand that life is not practical bt full of surprise..
n our happiness lies with our loved ones...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi All,
I want to just let you all know this is just a setup of the main story starting. The main story will start in London as all the main characters related to this FF are in London.
I will leave upto you all as who is bechara in this FF with Maan being not inetrested in this marraige and Geet no less then a "Afat ke puriya" herself in her own innocent ways... so be with the story.
This was just a fun heads up about the FF.
The faster my likes increase and more the comments I get, the faster the update you all will get. 😉
Thx
--Anu
Part 5
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"So did you hear what doctor said…. Take your medicines regularly and complete bed rest for two days…. I don't want anymore hassle now… and yes, I am doing all this because it was my mistake… samjhi tum "

"Ji" was only she could utter…. And he was about to sleep when she said

"You did not give me my gift" … Maan was like he will kill her… after so much hassle she remembers her gift…

"Before my anger shoots up go to sleep… we will talk in the morning"

In the morning when Maan wakes up he finds Geet sleeping all over her teddy…oops Rosy… a small smile crept at the corner of his lips seeing her like that..

"Crazy girl" and he shook his head and went to washroom to freshen himself.

When he came out of washroom she was seated on the bed with her Rosy still in drowsy state….

"Why did you remove all he curtains so early….you know I can't sleep in light… "

He forgot all the cuteness of hers after hearing her accusation…

"ohh really…. its already 6am and I am awake from 5:30.. Anyways I have already been half hour late because of you"

"matlab?? You wake up at 5 am…. Per kyun" "That's beyond your understanding…you can go back to your sleep"

she just ignored him and placed pillow on top of her head to stop light and went to sleep again.

Maan went for Gym and returned exactly after an hour… Geet had just woke up and was coming out from the washroom when she just stood still looking at her husband entering the room… He was in his black track pants and black vest… still sweaty and muscles still looked as if moving…

Ohh how much she wished to feel him, touch him and taste him looking so raw… he looked so strong…. she wished she was grabbed in his embrace all the time….

"Babaji…. Why does he stay away from me… I am his wife na… then where am I wrong to wish him…. Kyun mujhse dur rehte hain ye…." She gulped her saliva seeing him approach towards her… she started getting weak on her knees and started knotting her duppatta in anticipation.

But in mid way he turned to get his fresh clothes from wardrobe…

"I will be back in evening again today and I don't want any hassle today…got it…"

Frustrated Geet just kept looking at him….

"hmm yah to bolti jao ya phir bas chuppi… anyways complete bed rest OK, again as I said , No hassle today."

"Ji" she uttered somehow.

Geet just obeyed him and took out bundle of her M&B's to read and rest… Today was her first day in kitchen but her MIL Kavita came and informed her that they can wait for two days till she gets better… Geet took a relief as she had never entered kitchen for even boiling water… her beeji was too protective for her and so many servants would never let her in kitchen nor was she much interested.

In afternoon Vicky came to ask her for her passport and visa…

"So you are going to London Bhabhi"

"bhabhi nahi please… It feel so odd… you are elder to me right to mujhe Geet he pukaro na.."

Vicky laughed. He could not imagine how his brother could even get upset with such a cute person… every word she spoke was full of cuteness.

"Ok Geet, I need you Passport to get your tickets done to London."

"London?? But why?? " "Because Bro is going… you don't want to go with him?? "

"He is going to London and taking me with him…" "Offcourse" She gave him her passport and Vicky left. Vicky did not want to break her heart by telling the truth.

After he left Geet kept on thinking why they are going to London but then it striked her…

"Budhu shadi ke baad kahan jatehain… honeymoon" Her happiness has no bounds… Maan was thinking that way….

But then a question popped in her mind Everyone goes to Switzerland for Honeymoon, why are we going to London" she thinks…

Maan came in the evening and today everything was fine as Geet was busy with her honeymoon thought.

He checked everywhere and things looked good… "hmmm.. so howz your foot.. did you take medicine…"

"Ji" and she smiled looking down with shy. lost in her thought about their HM.. Maan got confused, gave weird look and went down.

Maan came to room directly at night after dinner and some family talk and then some walk in the garden at night. Geet was restless to see him but she could not go out with that leg, She wanted to be better for her HM.

"ji woo I have a question, puchun"

"If I say no, will you stop, nahi na tou pucho" She did not know how to ask… he was so cool about HM

"woo woo I wanted to ask"

"now when did you started to hesitate… hmm… anyways I know what you are going to ask has neither beginning nor end, so just ask"

"Woo I wanted to ask, why London and not swizerland.. I mean movies me to wahin jate hain na…"

"What?? I knew… your talks has no meaning… this is real life not Movie that we go to swizerland"

Geet shut up for a while… then when it was sleeping time, Maan closed the light to sleep and was about to drift in sleep… Geet could not hold her curiousity.

"Maan" "Geet please sleep… no more useless question at night please"

"Kab puchun babaji… he leaves in the morning and comes to room at night aur phir sona hai… Rajji had said, jiju did not leave her for second and here he doesn't stay with me for a second"

She was hurt but consoled her self with the idea of HM.. not able to hold herself she again said when he was almost asleep

She waked him "Maan… maan" "Geet please" he had decided to control his anger but she was determined to test him he thought.

"Maan you don't watch hindi movies" Maan really got so angry… waking him from his sleep she has to ask this question… but only if he would have given her some time in evening she would have not been so restless to talk with him… he ignored his fault.

He switched on the light and looked at her angrily

"Do you even have a mind… manners to chodo dur ke baat hai… just go to sleep, don't test my patience."

He just talked to her not at all considering he was talking to his wife.

Geet then quielty held her Rosy and with small tears turned to other side. He doesn't even talk to her. But then she had a resolution

"he doesn't come near you but you can go near him Geet… You are his wife" and suddenly she smiled being proud at the thought that she was his wife.

Next morning knowing her Maan did not pull the curtain…. So she was all asleep till he returned from Gym… wow she was so lucky she felt that opening her eyes she got sexy view of her husband.

Remembering last nights resolution she got up and went near him on one leg, got on her tippy toes and placed a soft kiss on his cheeks "good morning".

Maan was all shocked, never expected this "Geet, how dare you" he scolded her…

Geet got scared and went little back… she got tears in her eyes…kissing her husband and getting scolded… she felt humiliated for the first time…

Maan had wanted to keep patience but her sudden act has made him do this.. seeing tears in her eyes and sadness on that innocent face he felt guilty…he must not shout like that.

He composed himself….

"Now stop crying. You don't need to cry for everything… I don't like scolding you per tumharee galtiyan khatm hi nahi hotee"

He did not realize that he was able to show this authority on her as somewhere his heart knew that she was only his but his personality was not ready to accept or recognize it.

She turned to him wiping her tears from her palm… Maan got a slight smile within himself seeing her childish look….

"jab se shadi huee hai dant hee rahe ho mujhe" he did not like that accusation.

"Shaukh nahi hai mujhe…. The truth is hard to bear but this marriage is all wrong… the way you are the way I am is totally different… "

He got serious and sat down "neither of us are going to benefit with this… family pressure… emotional balckmail all this lead to this marriage…. You are made for some different kind of boy not me…"

Geet's heart felt like sinking with his talk "Please don't say like this, apse pyar ho gaya hai mujhe phir shadi kyun theek nahi hai"

He signaled her space near him "Come sit down" after she settled herself

"This is not love… it's a teenager infatuation… but you won't understand… the problem is here, you will not able to understand my talks my lifestyle" he paused and shied

"Ok… just leave it… jo hogaya so hogaya… you don't pressurize your brain…"

He then left downstairs for breakfast

Geet was lost in thought "I know I am not as smart as you but I am sure, this marriage is not wrong… we are made for each other…. I don't need to be intellectual like you to feel this… it's a heart thing ek din app jaroor manege"

Maan was on breakfast table, he was not feeling good about all he said to her… he thought she was too young to understand what he wanted to explain….and he had somewhere hurt her

They were having breakfast when a female maid came with a plate

"Geet madam don't want to have breakfast alone"

Raj, Maan's dad looked at him "Will you help Geet come down" Maan who was lost in his thought got up without saying a word.

When he reached their room, without any expression he asked… "you want to come down for breakfast?? "

"Ji… per" she said in low voice showing her injured foot, not knowing his mood.

He quietly, without a word went near her and scooped her in his arm to take her down. Geet was now on cloud 9… she immediately forgot what hurting things he had said…. All she was feeling was being in his arms… she could feel is muscles on her while he was taking her down… she could smell his fragnance… urge to kiss him on his chest was strong but she held herself not wanting to loose this moment. With every step he took, she could feel their body in contact… she felt so content.

Vicky and Annie whistled at the scene but Maan without giving any expression to anyone place Geet on the chair near him….

Hayyeee…. Geet was not in this world by now… everyone was eating per Geet kya khatee… she was busy feeling butterflies in her belly…

But Maan was still not feeling Good… this girl made him say all rough words to her… never was he so rough to anyone but he could not understand what was with her that she was able to bring his anger out… why he always reacted to her that way…. If anyone else would have done whatever she had done, he would have sincerely explain but never had been so hard… but the unknown right on her which made him just bust all his frustration of this marriage on her…. and then he felt guilty…

Same cycle has been gone on and on since she has entered his life. How he has become so informal to her in just two days when he was not even accepting this marriage whole heatedly… this was beyond his logical understanding.

Geet was sitting on the sofa in hall while Maan was about to leave to one of the university… Maan somehow felt he should talk to her… he came and sat beside her….

"Geet" "Ji" she turned towards him immediately

"Woo… whatever I said in room… dil pe mat lagana… it just came out. You know there are many other things worrying me to sab tumpe nikal diya maine… I am sorry"

Geet who was already in different world has totally forgotten whatever he had said in the room… But some idea struck her naughty mind….

"You don't need to be sorry to me…. But I want you to give me a promise" "Promise?? " he knew she will definitely ask something childish.

"Ok Bolo" "Not now… once I am fine with this leg then…." "Ok" and he left.

Next to be continued:

Precap:" Please I will request you all, shadi ker li maine Geet se that doesn't mean you can compare composed and sensible Sameera with this sample"
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update 😊
Geet is so cute
Maan did not accepts the marriage
But I hope soon He will accept Geet as his Wife
Edited by PariNain - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 5 is awesome.
Edited by SONU_29 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update dear..loved it a lot...👏👏
geet confessed her feelings so cutely..😃
loved it very much..😊
thank u for this long update
precap..😡
waiting for next part
😍
Edited by maaneetmaahi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ouch precap sounds too rough...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome too good hope to get next soon cant wait

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