Hello thank you so much for ur comments and reading my fanfic.if u have any suggestions always welcome. By the way my hindi is very bad, so I try my best to reduce using hindi, wherever I have used if there is any mistake pls forgive me.
First five parts
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five
Scene 16
In a bar
Prem is sitting in a bar and getting drunk.
Prem (talking to him self): How can Mukti just go on a date with some random guy? She can't just go like that. She told me she loves me and how can she just go like that? But she told me she loves me a lot, then how can she just stop loving me like that?
Suddenly Prem remembers Mukti saying that he is nobody to her and how she keeps saying that she has moved on.
Prem (thinking to him self): Why do I care so much whether she loves or marry someone else? Anyway I don't love her. She doesn't mean anything to me. So why do I still care. Why does it hurt me that she is with someone else? Why is it killing me that she is with someone else?
Scene 17
Next day morning, Bajaj residence
Prerna, Mr Bajaj, Sneha, Namritha and Tushar are having breakfast. Mukti comes in.
Prerna: Aavo beta. Nashtha khiya?
Mukti: Haan choti ma, I just came to give some papers to Prem to sign.
Sneha: He hasn't come down yet.
Mr Bajaj, Tushar and Prerna gets up to leave for office.
Sneha: Come sit Mukti.
Mukti sits down.
Namritha: By the way Mukti, how did it go yesterday?
Mukti: U were ri8 Namritha, Munna is such a sweet heart. He is so sweet and so cute.
Namritha: Didn't I tell u, that u will love him.
Mukti: Did he get back safely?
Namritha: Yeah, he called in the morning. He loved u.
Mukti: He told me he will meet me again. Next time he comes call me also.
Namritha: Sure.
Prem comes down and he sees Mukti and glares at her.
Prem (very rudely): What are you doing here early in the morning Basanti?
Mukti: I needed u to sign some papers very urgently. Yesterday I forgot to get it signed before I left. I need to drop it off at my office before going for practice.
Prem: Oh you forgot??? Where you so impatient to meet your Munna????
Mukti: How do you know about Munna?
Before Prem can answer Namritha answers: I told him about Munna. He knows everything about Munna. I even showed him his photo.
Mukti: Really? Sneha you should meet him. He is so nice, very funny and sweet.
Prem: You can't stop talking about him huh?
Mukti gives him a weird look.
Sneha: Who is Munna?
Namritha: He is my friend. Yesterday he was in town and Mukti met him 'coz I couldn't go. Mukti don't u think u shud thank Prem?
Mukti: Why?
Namritha: if it wasn't for Prem you would have never met Munna.
Mukti: Haha.
Prem: u liked him so much?
Mukti: Yeah I loved him. He is so cute.
Prem: Right!! Cute!!! I saw his photo. He is not all that cute.
Mukti: I think he is cute. I think he is better than you.
Prem feels bad when he hears this. He gets up and leaves.
Mukti: Whats wrong with him? Why is he acting so weird?
Namritha: Might be because you told him Munna is cuter than him.
Sneha and Namritha starts laughing.
Mukti: Yeah right. Tell me the truth Namritha, did you do anything now?
Namritha: No Mukti, no.
Sneha: So what does your friend do Namritha?
Mukti: Hey he is my friend too now.
Prem who was leaving hears this. He gets even more angry and slams the door and leave.
Namritha: Yeah. He is in school.
Sneha: What? Prem is jealous of a school boy?
Mukti: He is not jealous. He is angry about something else. Don't know what. Might be 'coz of the letter thing he is still angry with me.
Namritha (smiles): Might be. You never know with Prem.
Mukti (smiles sadly): yeah u never know with Prem.
Will continue soon.
Part 7: /forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/337292/my-first-fanfic-part-seven
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