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hello everyone... i was thinking of writing a os on my most fav couple armaan shilpa!! so decided to write one..hope u all will like it...so here it goes...


a girl was standing at the corner of the terrace staring at the moon.. the moon was shining brightly..we could hear a lot of noise around her... the noises were because a wedding was going to take place in the house... and it was the girl whose wedding was gonna happen. yes she was none other than shilpa..standing in the terrace in a red golden bridal dress and lost in her own thoughts...
r(to herself)= aj meri shadi ha..har koi ladki apni life me isi din ka sabse zyada intezar karti ha.. mere lie bhi ajka din meri life ka sabse important din ha..phir kyu mere chehrepar woh dulhan wali khushi kyu nahi ha??? kyu ma baki dulhanoki jaise nervous nahi hu??? kyu esa lagraha ha ke life me pehli bar mane kuch galat decision lia ha?? kyu esa lagraha ha ke aj yeh shadi nahi honi chahiye jabki sab meri marzise horaha ha?? kyu ?? kyu?? itne sare sawal..par jawab ek bhi nahi ha mere sath..meri shadi... jis din ka intezar har ladkiki tarah manebhi kia tha..aj woh din agaya ha to kyu ma esi behave karrahihu?? kuch hi derme meri shadi hone wali ha..barat anehi wali ha..aur ma??? ma kyu ese khari hu?? mujhe abhi apne ane wali zindagikeliye duay mangne chahiye...khush hona chahiye.. ke sab wasehi horaha ha jaisa mane humesha chaha tha.. meri perfect si life me sabkuch perfect horaha ha...mere papa khush ha.. meri mom khush ha..meri dee ... sare dost.. phir kyu ma khush nahi hu?? kyu????
just then her elder sister anjali comes there...and calls her. riddhima comes out of her thoughts and turns around.
an=ridzi..tu yaha ha aur ma tujhe niche dhund rahithi.. pagal hogayi ho kya ridz???? tumhari shadi ha.. tumhara dulha kabhibi doli sajake ajayega.. aur uski dulhan yaha chadpar???
r=dee... woh ma...
an=hmm samaj gayi... apne dulhe ko dekhnekeliye yahapar agayi ha?? agar esa tha to apne room se dekh leti..yaha kyu chali ayi?? mom kabse tujhe dhund rahiha aur mujhe bheja ha tujhe leke anekeliye...chalo ab...
anjali holded her hand and was taking her from there
r=dee.. ma usse ek bar baat karna chahti hu.
anjali stopped and turned around looking at her sister..she was looking so confused.
an=ridz.. what do u mean??? kisse milna chahti ha???
r=usse dee. armaan se
an=armaan se?? par armaan se kya milna ha??? aur aj teri shadi ha... tujhe apne hone wale pati ka intezar karna chahiye..tu armaan ki bate kyu karrahiha??
r=dee.. tum sab janti hona.. phir kyu ese react karrahiho??
an=ma sab janti hu..aur yeh bhi janti hu ke tera decision kya ha kya tha..tune mere samne decision liya tha na..aur terehi decision se aj yeh sab horahiha..teri shadi tey hui ha.. sid se... ur getting married to siddhant malik.. armaan ka bhai. aur tu apne shadi ke din apne patise nahi.. balki uske bhai se milna chahti ha..
r=dee try to understand..mujhpar kya beet rahiha, mere andar kya feeling ha, yeh sab sirf ma janti hu.. dee ma humesha sochti thi ke ma jo sab decision leti hu wahi perfect ha... meri life ekdam perfect ha koi confusion nahi ha mere life me. mujhe humesha wahi milta ha jo mujhe chahiye.. ma apni papa ki princess, mummy ki ladli apni behen ki ridz hu..aur frendz ki riddhima,..par aj life me pehli bar dee yeh feeling itna zyada horaha ha ke ma kya kahu.. dee mujhe usse baat karni ha..
an=ridzz...tu sirf ghabra rahiha..aur kuch nahi. dont worry yeh sab shadise pehle hota ha.. aur tera faisla sahi ha dont worry.
r=dee... ma acchese janti hu ke mere sath jo horaha ha woh kis wajase horaha ha..aur mere dilme jo sare sawal ha unke jawab sirf mujhe armaan se milsakta ha..plzz dee...mujhe armaan se mila do.
an=ridz tu pagal hogayi ha kya?? niche sare mehman ha... barat ane wali ha.. phir phere..
r=dee pherose pehle mera armaan se milna bohot zaruri ha plzz deee... plzz mere khatir.. apni ridz ke khatir... dee armaan se mile begar ma mandap par nahi bethungi...
an=what?? riddhima yeh kya bachpana ha????
r=dee yeh bachpana nahi ha...nahi ha yeh bachpana..plzz de...plzzz
an=theek ha theek ha..jaisehi barat ati ha.. ma armaan se kehkar..
r=nahi dee.. ap plzz usse bulao..usse jaldi aneko kaho..plzz dee... plzz
an=accha theek ha. tu shant hoja..ma usse bat karti hu theek ha?
anjali dials armaans number.. the line was on speaker
ar=hello..ha anjali.
an=hey armaan..woh darasal
ar=barat nikal chuki ha dont worry.
an=aur tum?? tum barat ke sath nahi araheho???
ar=ab..woh..actually nahi... i mean ke ma thorider baad aunga.. yaha gharme kuch kaam ha. to yeh sab sort out karke then ajaunga.. but rahul atul yuvi sab barat ke sath ha so u dont worry...
riddhima knew why was he coming late instead of coming with others..
an=armaan woh sab theek ha but mujhe tumse kuch kaam ha.
ar=whats wrong?? anjali tum kuch tensed sound karrahiho..sab theek ha na?? riddhima theek hana???
an=nahi..ridz theek nahi ha..
armaan was now worried.
ar=what do u mean ke riddhima theek nahi ha??? kya hua ha usse???
an=relax armaan ridz theek ha matlab..woh... ek minute khudhi bat karlo woh tumse bat karna chahti ha...
anjali gives the phone to riddhima...
r=he...hello...
ar=riddhima..tum..kya hua?? sab theek hana?? tum itna pareshan kyu sound karrahiho???
r=armaan mujhe tumse milna ha...abhi isi waqt...
ar=abhi?? par riddhima kuch derme barat waha pohoch jayegi...phir tumhari shadi..
r=i dont care..mane dee se kaha ha aur tumse bhi kehrahihu..ke jabtak tum mujhse nahi miloge ma tabtak phere nahi lungii.
ar=whatt?? riddhima yeh kya bachpana ha?? whats wrong with u??
riddhima cuts the line..and gives the phone to anjali and goes to her room from the terrace.
SO GUYS HOW WAS IT?? SHOULD I CONTINUE??? PLZZ DO COMMENT. :D

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start! The story is really interesting! Can't wait to read more :) do cont.soon and thanxx for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi dear
awesome start
plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It Was Awesome<33 Do Cont Soon! Thanks For The PM :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome starting

loved it very interesting

continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wao wao it was awesome to much suspence and i am curious to know what happen nxt so do cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start dear
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Nice OS, Maisha. Thanks for the PM.
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interesting..
conti soon
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nice storyline ..please continue soon

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