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PART 2
geet : how is mannu?
to advoid her question he picked up the plate took a small piece of aloo ka paratha and justure her to eat , she turned her face while trying to hold salty water in eye, " nahi , maan mujhe bhook nahi hai" he cupped her face n with his thump gently wipe her tears ,'' geetu, mannu bilkul theek hai , u don't worry"
geet: "no maan its just, meri aakho mein kuch chala gaya tha", at her lame excuse he thought, is she stil think she can lie to me, he was just about to say his heart out, then there was knock on door , which break his tranceand forward his step to door, it was manan , after whole night spending in hospital tiredness could be clearly visible on his face but when he heard about geets not well being he was here to see ,and seeing his bro tensed he worriedly asked, "bro bhabhi, theek to hai na"
maan : haan mannan bas mannu ko leke thoda tense hai
mannan : bro , she is fine now
maan :ok , mannan u take rest, must b tired
taking leave mannan went to daadi and maan to see his misty but she is was is wash room , he wrote a note for her& went to office.
Geet was leaving the room when she notice his note
dear misty,
mannu is fine now, bhala baba ji meri misty ki koi baat na maane yaisa kabhi ho sakta , there appointment at 2pm to dr ,i'll b there to pick u
dont need to come office today, take rest
take care
love maam
geet smiled weakly only slight thin become crept on her face ,she then head toward hospital through out way she just kept her head seat rest and went back to her memory lane...
Geetu, geetu... uth ja beta, dekh 10 baj gaye hai , but here geet was in her dreamland , n there was no effect of Ranjana(geet's mums)'s continuous chanting n her daughter didn't even budge, and ranjana started her pet daulogue," itni baar purane pe sakschhat bhagvan mujhe darshan de dete"(wel , its my mums favorite daulogue)
" toh kya hamari geetu , tumhe isnan laggati hai, rano" mahendra entered holding his another princes"
ranjana:toh aapko kya laggi hai, n mannu is still sleeping apne toh kaha mujhese jaldi utha lage ?
mahendra: madam ji , dekhiye to mene uthaya hi hua, lisensing to him , she felt like bang her head, but mahendra love to tease his wiffy n smirked ,singal her to b quite put adjacent ti geet mentioned loudly , "yeh , dono toh mujhe billiya lagti"
knowing the reaction he took step back &both his girl said in unison "HUM BILLIYAA NAHI HUM TO PARI HAI NA PAPA"
mahendra: but pari toh jaldi jagjati
geetu & mannu : but aaj to sunday hai na papa, r funday
ranjana: funday toh hai lekin aap dono uthogi tabhi toh fun day start hoga. aur fun day k bad aapke school bhi khul jayege so beta , try to b puntual.
mahendra while trying to hold his paries said , "aaj hum aap dono pari banata hoon"
sudden break bring her back to realily and she was in front of hospital...
PLz comment how it going, my exam r over now so i'll give daily update if comment or likes keep on increasing

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Posted: 13 years ago
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like your work but post in one thread dont make every part with new one ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mannu is maan and geet child??
i think so...
but what happend to him/her??

do comtinue..good work..👍🏼

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