Chup Chup Ke 2!! Page 36, last part - 37

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi Honeys!!!šŸ¤—

I know i was meant to post this earlier....but i was away for three days cause of my cousins wedding (What!!.....you didn't notice?!!šŸ˜²šŸ˜†)....anyways...."Chup Chup Ke 2" carries on from my first Fan Fic (Due to public demand....thanks for liking it guys!!šŸ˜›)....but it's a whole new story.....There are no Cobras in my story (not yet anyway!!)...and Anu is not married yet...i'll be introducing Rashi as a whole new character later on!!....

For those of you who haven't read my first Fan Fic...here it is:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=309016&T PN=1&#5039175

Now...prepared to be bored!!😈😈😈

Bani held him in a tight embrace…afraid to let him go, to open her eyes in case this was a dream…her head rested on his chest and the soft thump, thump of his heart soothed her…she could feel his hands...one caressing her back while the other gently stroked her hair…just knowing that he was with her brought a smile too her lips…

B: Mr. Walia…

Her voice cut through the silence, which had been engulfing them for the past few hours….

J: Hmm…

B: I feel cold…

Jai gently took her by the arm and looked at her…she was shivering slightly…her wet sari clung to her body, outlining her waist while her hair framed her face….the innocence in her eyes, the dark tresses, the trembling lips….Jai fought the urge to touch her lips and feel them against his own…instead he took of his jacket and draped it around Bani's shoulders, not once taking his eyes off her…

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Jai steered towards the right, his eyes firmly fixed on the road but his mind elsewhere…since they had sat in the car 15 minutes ago neither had spoken a word…Jai hated the silence unless she was in his arms where he could keep her safe…as he pulled up in front of the house Jai glanced at her, but was surprised to see her asleep…

Bathed in moonlight and with a small smile on her lips she looked beautiful…he bent forward to brush away a strand of hair which had found its way across her face but as his finger tips tickled her cheek her eyes flew open…

Bani held her breath as she looked at Mr. Walia….she had awoken to find him just inches away from her with his hand on her cheek…her first instinct was to pull away but she melted as he ran his fingers through her hair…she felt his warm breath on her neck as he pulled her forward until there was barely an inch of space between them…her heart beat faster and a shiver swept through her body as Mr. Walias lips brushed against her neck, jaw, cheeks….and slowly made their way towards her lips…

M: Bahu?!!

Bani and Jai pulled apart as they noticed an anxious mausi standing at the front of the house…hoping her cheeks weren't as hot as they felt, Bani opened the car door and rushed up the steps to meet mausi as a wistful Jai sat watching her…what timing mausi had!!!…couldn't she even be a second late?!!

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He entered the house a minute later to see Rano and Mausi talking to Bani….didn't they have anything better to do?!!…Jai sulked as he watched Rano giving a tight hug to Bani…what he wouldn't give to be in her place!!…to hold her body against his own…to feel her breath on his cheeks…to kiss her all over…to hold her safe…his thoughts were suddenly interrupted by what Rano said…

R: di please stay in my room tonight…I really feel lonely!!

Bani hesitated as she watched Mr. Walia furiously mouthing no behind Rano and Mausi's back…

R: di please!!

As Rano pleaded Bani reluctantly nodded…she allowed herself to be led away by a much happier Rano as Jai watched her stunned…

Updated on Pages 3, 5, 7, 9, 11, 13, 15, 18, 20, 23, 25, 29, 32, 36, 37...

Edited by nibbles - 18 years ago

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Niroo thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was great.. plz continue soon..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice part!!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
pls cont soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow nibble luv ur ff pleez do continue soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aaawww...poor Jai...i hope bani sneaks into his room at night... šŸ˜‰
awsome part dear
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Nibbles..... excellent part.. loved it soo much;;

Mausi.. why do u come at the wrong time.. when did u get the same problem
as pia!!

do continue di!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwww...poor jai i feel so sowwie for him hahahaha but tht was funny ur truly n amazing writer plz continue soon!!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwww.. how sweet.. poor jai šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜† that's so cute 😳 .. plz cont soon.. that was gr8888.. im soooooooooooo glad u decided to continue.. i luved the first part of chup chup ke šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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šŸ‘ !!
awesome part
i am so glad u continued!!
i luved it... šŸ˜† šŸ˜† look look guys we have a ver-jelouse mr.walia...aw couldn't have massi come a second later.. šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

cont soon!! awesome first part
luv sweetu 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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šŸ‘ šŸ‘ awsome
thank you so much for continueing 😳
poor jai šŸ˜†

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