Story: The Drunken Truck Driver - Page 4

Thanks for reading, everyone...😊

Completed the story last night.

I tharowly enjoyed it. Very well written..

What I liked most about it was the plot and its flow. The flow continuity was maintained throughout..

The Shamsher scene was very very well exolained and the way it was handled was very nice

The way you showed the duo work was a treet to read

Keep it up👏

Originally posted by: visrom

1. The reply to Twinkle's question above.

The car was parked outside Jai's house...a few yards away. ---- wanted to know that ... your style of narration always enable me to visualize what you write , but that bit was little unclear to me in the before... there after story is pretty clear to understand why did Daya opt to put ACP Sir's call on hold and attend Vivek's call ... 😛 thanks for the ' car parking clarification 😃

Daya first got call from ACP...ACP was asking about Abhijeet, but Daya thought it was about the case...he didn't know that Abhijeet was transferred.

While speaking he got a call from Vivek. Since vivek was at the hospital Daya decided to cut the call in order to know Nik's status.

Then after this he again spoke to ACP.

Originally posted by: visrom

Thanks to everyone who read it and commented.

Thanks to those who asked doubts...and more thanks to those who pointed out loopholes and flaws in it. Will try to do better next time. 😊 generally never before any of your writings had loopholes to point out , this time it just happened as you said before , you did in a short period of time without proof reading your work before posting ... still you did a fabulous job and delivered us a good story to read quite after a long time ⭐️