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Leena Pattni

@indian10

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Posted: 13 years ago

My pervious ff was FF The moments thing falling apart and here the link for it URL Not Available

Concept of the story:

This story is based Virat Vadhera life, who is a famous singer but is very lonely in life. As the love of his life, his lovely wife Maanvi Vadhera who had died of cancer the day after there marriage. Virat never showed he was lonely as always shared all his love and spread happiness in life to his family and made his singing a success. As Virat promise his Maanvi that he will always smile and start to sing, so he had fulfill his promise to his loving wife.

I had used a video from Youtube for my story as inspiration : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UcqSrAF0IxU&feature=endscreen&NR=1.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KZJnuVq2QD8

Thanks to the person who made that video.

Chapter 1 on page 1 - URL Not Available

Chapter 2 on page 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56524950�

Chapter 3 on page 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2955202/ff-a-memory-of-my-love

Chapter 4 on page 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2955202/ff-a-memory-of-my-love?pn=2�

Chapter 5 on page 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56577559�

Chapter 6 on page 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56579873�

Chapter 7 on page 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2955202/ff-a-memory-of-my-love?pn=4�

Chapter 8 on page 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2955202/ff-a-memory-of-my-love?pn=4�

Chapter 9 on page 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2955202/ff-a-memory-of-my-love?pn=5�

Chapter 10 on page 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2955202/ff-a-memory-of-my-love?pn=7�

Chapter 11 on page 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2955202/ff-a-memory-of-my-love?pn=7�

Chapter 12 on page 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56735814�

Chapter 13 on page 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2955202/ff-a-memory-of-my-love�

Chapter 14 on page 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2955202/ff-a-memory-of-my-love�

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 1:

The big day has come for Virat first concert, Virat was in the dressing room. Virat had open a page of Maanvi diary and it has wrote:

"Life is to short you never now what gone happen tom more so live the life to the fullest so you don't have any regrets later."

Flashback -

Virat had closed his eyes and Maanvi had come to him and say's "Kya hua Partner you nerves about you first show." Virat smiles and say's "Yes boss as you know I get shy sing in front big audios." Maanvi say's "What happen to my partner who always so confident. Come on partner you can do it, dont not let me down you can do it as you rock. Just remember I am here with you every step of the way."

The flash back ended when Viren had tap Virat on the shoulder "Virat you ready mera bhai." Virat smile and say's "Of course ready to rock and roll, as I have to fulfill my Maanvi dream." Viren smiles and say's "That the spirit, if Maanvi was hear she would been very proud of you." Jeevika come's and say's "Virat, Viren ji is right, any way best of luck." Virat smiles and say's "Thank you bhabhi but your heavily pregnant you should not be here, you should be resting" Jeevika smiles and strokes Virat face and say's "I have to be here to support you and don't worry nothing will happen to me as I have got Viren ji with me." Then Virat smile and say "Okay bhabhi any way I have to start my performances"

Then Virat walk's on stage and say's "Hello friends", everyone starts clapping and screaming. Then Virat say's "Thank you all for coming, the first song I will sing will be from new album which dedicated to my loving wife hope you enjoy it." Then he start singing:

Original song link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ljeybQYNURM -

Abhi Mujh Mein Kahin Lyrics - Agneepath

Abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi
Jaagi dhadkan nayi
Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi
Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai

Ye lamha kahaan the mera
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo'n zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa

Ho o.. abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi

Ho.. dhoop mein jalte huey tann ko chhaya perh ki mill gayee
Roothe bachche ki hansi jaise phuslaane se phir khil gayee
Roothe bachche ki hansi jaise phuslaane se phir khil gayee
Kuchh aisa hi mehsoos dil ko ho raha hai
Barso'n ke puraane zakhmo pe marham laga sa hai
Kuch ehsaan hai, iss lamhe mein hai

Ye lamha kahaan the mera
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo'n zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa

Dor se patang jaisi thi ye zindagani meri
Aaj hoon kal ho mera na ho
Har din thi kahani meri
Ek bandhan naya peeche se mujhko bulaye
Ik aise chubhan iss lamhe me hai

Ye lamha kahaan tha mera
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zara
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zara
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo'n zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa

Then Virat had image Maanvi come to him and he feel a kiss as he closed his eye. Virat could sense Maanvi laugh, smile and can feel maanvi's hand on face and hear Maanvi says to "I will always love you partner and will always be there for you every step of the way." Then Virat open his eyes, and tear rolled down his eyes as everyone round of appaloosa.

Edited by indian10 - 13 years ago

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

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Posted: 13 years ago

Please can you leave your comment after read my piece of work, as I will take your feed back on broad to improve my story thank you, and enjoy

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Hooria

@hooriaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

Fabulous i loved the concept and chapter 1
Beautifully written,
Aww poor virat cant see him all broken hate to see him like
That
I loved the song it fitted in perfectly
This seems as if its carrying on from ur previous FF
I really enjoyed it
Pm me wen u update

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 2:

The concert was just about to ended really well and it was a hit. Virat thought himself "Partner I fulfilled my promise, I hope where ever you are, you are happy because I love you." Then Virat closed his eyes again and had image Maanvi in flash back:

"Wow partner you rocked that was brilliant, now partner you have do a last performance for me. Please sing my favourite song that you sang at di wedding." Virat smiled and said "Kya hua, that one." Then Maanvi gave million dollar smile and said "Yes that one" . Then Virat smiled and said "Any thing for you partner, here goes."

Flash back ended.

Maanvi had despaired and Virat open his eyes, then Virat said to the adieus "Now this my last performance and I will be sing my famous track Kya hua hope you all enjoy it."

Kya hua original song link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fi62_lPfO5Q

Virat:

yeh ladki to lagti hai mujhko badi sarphiri
par khud ko Samajhti hai yeh aasmaan ki pari
areu hai yeh chawaani par phirti hai yeh dollar bani
hai zero yun nowledge par rehti scollar bani
kaanton ki tokri , ego se hai bhari dekho
sidhi lagti hai , terri hai bari yeh dekho

Virat:
Hua Kya Hua , Kya hua re bol deewani
Hua Kya hua Kya Hua ??

Flash back of Maanvi:
jhooti baate banaaye , ab woh baaye phehlaaye
nakli reporter haai gobaron ka

Virat:
Koi karna na bhool , isse samjho na phool
yeh to jhatka hai , bijli ki taaron ka

Maanvi:
areey jaa jaa re , hawa aane de , tun mujhko dikhaana at ti tude
arey ek baat pe ,

Virat

khaane ko yeh pare , Dekho

Maanvi

maine handle kiye , sske jaise badhe , Dekho

Hua , Kuch Hua ,

Virat

Kya Hua re bol Deewane
Hua , Kuch Hua , Kya Hua * 2
Hua Kya hua Kya Hua ??
chorus

The performance ended Jeevika said to Viren "That was my Maanu favourite it was the first song her and Virat sang together." Viren was sad and said "I know Jeevika this two years has been so difficult for Virat, I can not get out Maanvi memories. He has been living in the past instead of the present, he showing everyone he so strong. But every since Maanvi death he has been the same, I am sacred that he might go into depression." Jeevika get emotional and say's "Viren ji it has not been the same since Maanvi death no one can replace her."

Jeevika has a flashback:

"Kya di you know started the emotional drama, I thought my di was strong what happen to my teach di." Maanvi said to Jeevika, then Jeevika smiles "Chup kar, you become so big Maanu you gone lecture your di." Maanu held ears and say's "Sorry di, what I mean to say that you and jiu need be strong especially for my Virat. You need think positive that my partner will not become depress you need be his strength. Like I am, I have given him inspiration to sing."

Flashback ended.

Jeevika thinks this how Maanu think and she right. Then Jeevika say's to Viren "Viren ji please don't worry about Virat. Virat has used Maanvi memories as inspiration which a good thing, he is using his emotions in singing which a good thing." Viren smiles and say's "Jeevu maybe your right." Jeevika hugs Viren, and think herself "I miss Maanu, I wish I could express my feeling like Virat."

Edited by indian10 - 13 years ago

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hs7071
Fabulous i loved the concept and chapter 1
Beautifully written,
Aww poor virat cant see him all broken hate to see him like
That
I loved the song it fitted in perfectly
This seems as if its carrying on from ur previous FF
I really enjoyed it
Pm me wen u update

Thank you for lovely comments. This continuation of the previous FF because I wanted based the story on Maanvi diary and how inspired Virat to continue sing with her memories and how deal with Life with out Maanvi. He thinks how would Maanvi deal with things if she was still around, more to come in my story keep enjoying it.

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517072

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice start.❤️ Continue soon plz.😃

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 3:

The concert ended Virat was thinking of Maanvi again, he had open another page of Maanvi diary and read:

Life has it's up and down, but never give up a fight until the end, as you will received a bigger achievement.

Virat thought himself "Maanvi your so right, you have been my strength. If was not from your wisdom of words in your diary I would died by now. Your my heart beat, my strength and inspiration I can not live without you." Virat had closed his eyes and had another flashback of Maanvi:

Flashback-

"Hey partner you fulfill my dream, now I will do something special for you." Virat look confused "And what that Partner."Virat said to Maanvi, Maanvi smiled and said"Let's sing together and have soul performance, just me and you." Virat said "I'm of for it like old time's, let do it partner."

Original link to the song teri meri from bodyguard: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GAdUYCfC5IA

Virat -

Aa ..

Maanvi -

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik ladka, ik ladki ki yeh kahani hai nayi
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Virat -
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik dooje se hue judaa, jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Aa ..

Virat -
Tumse dil jo lagaya, toh jahaan maine paaya
Kabhi socha na tha yun, meelon door hoga saaya
Kyun khuda tune mujhe aisa khwaab dikhaya
Jab haqeeqat mein usse todna tha
Aa ..

Maanvi-
Ik dooje se hue judaa, jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Virat -
Teri meri baaton ka har lamha sab se rangjaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Har ehsaas mein tu hai, har ik yaad mein tera afsaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Virat -
Aa ..

Virat-
Saara din bit jaaye, saari raat jagaaye
Bas khayal tumhara, lamha lamha tadpaaye
Yeh tadap keh rahi hai mit jaaye faasle
Yeh tere mere darmeyaan hai jo saare

Maanvi-
Ik dooje se hue judaa jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Teri meri baaton ka har lamha sab se anjaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Har ehsaas mein tu hai har ik yaad mein tera afsaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Virat-
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Flashback ended when Virat felt a tap on his shoulder and it was his mum "Mum ap, what a surprise what you doing here, I thought you went to Bombay." Then Virat mum smile and said "Beta how can miss my son performance. I am so proud of you." Virat then gave a tight hug to his mum, Virat mum notice that his son was sad and she said "Kya hua beta." Then Virat was trying control his emotions "Nothing mum". Then his mum strokes his face and say "Beta don't hide your feeling from me, you missing Maanvi aren't you." Then Virat smiled and say "Enough talking mum let go home everyone waiting." Then Virat mum thought to herself "Beta no matter how much you try hide your feeling from me, I am your mum I can read your heart. Maanvi not left from your heart, please son let her go I can not see you like this. Living so much pain and torturing yourself every moment."

Then Viren and Jeevika came from behind "Virat you surprise with mum being her." Viren said, Virat smile "Over the moon, any way bhai I am very hungry please can we go home now. Beside it nearly 8pm, if we do not reach on time then dadji won't let eat. And that not good for bhabhi." Then Viren laugh and said "Come then guys lets go."

Edited by indian10 - 13 years ago