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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Hey
It was really good
Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry for the late comment but OMG virat gt hit by a lorry
It made me cry when virat thought his time was up and he wants to go by manvi awww
Continue soon and please pm me when u do
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 14:
Virat in ICU room, when Jeevika, Viren and Maanu walk though corridor. Viren goes to Dabu and say's "Dabu how this happen?". Then Dabu crying away and say's "Well Virat bhai was crossing the road all of sudden a lorry come ran him over. I did try call out him before the lorry hit but he did not hear."

Then Maanu say's to Jeevika "Mummy Partner will be okay?" as she crying away, Jeevika console her and say's "Beta don't worry nothing will happen to Cachu I promise you." Then Jeevika hugs Maanu as she really sad. Then the doctor come out and then Viren goes up to him "Doctor how is Virat." Then the doctor say's "Sorry are you patient relative?" Then Viren say's "He is my brother." Then doctor "Oh well we done the operation, however the a lot internal injures to the brain. It very critical at the moment we won't able to say until the next 48 hours."

Maanu hears this and goes to the temple in the hospital and say's to god "Hai Bhawanji please save my partner, I know my massi very lonely up there but I need my partner as I can not live with out him." Then Maanvi soul appears but Maanu can't see her, she say's to Maanu "Don't worry beta I won't let any thing happen to your partner I promise he always be there for you." Then Maanvi disappears from there.

Then Jeevika and Viren come to temple , Viren say's "Beta look Chachu is resting, you need go home and rest to." Then Maanu say's "Please daddy I want to see Partner and I won't go until I see him" Then Viren say's "Okay beta I'll take you see your chachu."

Then Viren takes Maanu into Virat room, Maanu hold his hands and say's "Look Partner you need get better, you can not leave me and go." Then Virat move his finger a little bit, then Maanu say's "Look daddy partner move his finger." Then Viren say's "I know." Then Viren about say to the doctor, when the doctors "That very common, the patient can hear & feel you but won't able to respond due medication. However after 48 hours if the patient does not respond then it high chance he may get brain damage until then we can not say any thing." Then Viren say's "I don't understand doctor what does that mean." Then the doctor say's "That the patient may go into comma, he will able to see you, hear you but won't able to talk or respond."
Edited by indian10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG!! COMMA!!!
This is going really Gud
Pl pm me wen u update
Thanks fr the PMs

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