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girl_rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

yaar u r superb

u write so well

virat...feeling bad for him no worries lil mannu is there for him

continue soon

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BadtameezDil.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Good going dear

Thanks fr the pm

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khusam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Hmm vry nice dear
u r superb n u wrote too gud
cntinue sun

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Leena Pattni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Chapter 12:

Jeevika and Viren goes to Maanu school to pick her up, Maanu surprise see them and she say's "Kya mummy and daddy I thought partner coming to pick me up, where is he. He was suppose spend the whole day with me as it my birthday." Then Viren winks at Jeevika but Maanu does not see it, then he say's "Wow kiya hai that chachu been busy with preparing for his concert." Then Maanu say's "These days partner lie to much to me, he does not care about me. Daddy I won't talk to partner now, I am telling very upset with him." Viren try console her but Maanu does not in the mood hear any thing.

Then the finally get home, Maanu notice it so dark. When Maanu say's "Mummy why is so quite and dark in the house. It never like that." Then Jeevika say's "It must be the fuse." Then Viren say's "Any way enough talking let go in and I have look at it later." Soon as they walk in the house the light come on, everyone say's to Maanu "Surprise." She notice a big banner saying "Happy Birthday Maanu." Every where was decorated with balloons, then Viren say's "Beta you know your chachu had did this surprise for you." Then Maanu say's "Kya Partner mera liya kiya, but where is partner." Then Virat come's with his guitar and sing's:

original link to the song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0gNI31mMaL4

Meri Duniya Tu Hi Re from Heyy Babyy

o o o o o o o...
(meri duniya, meri duniya, meri duniya tu hi ve

my life, my life, you are my life

meri khushiya,meri khushiya,meri khushiya tu hi ve) - 2

my happiness, my happiness, you are my happiness

raat din tere liye sajde karu, duyaien maangu re

i am bowing down day and nights, i am praying for you

mein yahan apane liye rab se teri balaayein mangu re

i am asking to god to give me your problems

o o o o o o o...

tune hi jeena sikhaaya, hum logo ko accha inshan banaya

you taaught us to live, you made good person

zindagi hai tera saaya, anjanao ko seedha rasta deekhaya

our life is your shadow, you have shown a right path to us (unknown/strangers)

tu nai ek roshni le aai hai jeevan ki raahon mein

you have brought a new light in the path of life

har ghadi guzre teri, saari umar abb apne baahon mein

now let you life spend in our arms

o o o o o o o...

humne ki jo bhi khataaien, hum jhelenge unki saari saaaja bhi

whatever mistakes we have done, we will bear its results

humne ki jitni jafayen, hum unse bhi abb karenge wafa bhi

however injustice we have done, we will be faithful to them as well

hooo..hum naye mausam naya, aalam naya, badle hain armaan bhi

we are new, the season is new, the atmosphere is new, the desires are also changed

keh rahi eshaas ki gehraiyan tehra hai tofaan bhi

the depths of feeeling are saying that the storm is stopped

o o o o o o o...
meri duniya ,meri duniya ,meri duniya tu hi ve

my life, my life, you are my life

meri khushiya,meri khushiya,meri khushiya tu hi ve) - 2

my happiness, my happiness, you are my happiness

raat din tere liye sajde karu, duyaien maangu re

i am bowing down day and nights, i am praying for you

mein yahan apane liye rab se teri balaayein mangu re

i am asking to god to give me your problems

o o o o o o o...

Then Maanu just come and hugs Virat then say's "Partner did you do this for me." Then Viren say's "You know Maanu, your chachu had been busy planning you surprise birthday party." Then Maanu say's "Aw partner that really sweet I love you, your the best." Then Virat put his collars up and say's "After all who partner am I" Then he winks at Maanu and say's "Any way partner I have more surprise for you." He wheel a cake up and say's "You know Maanu I have baked this cake just for you, your massi had thought me how to baked." Then cut the cake, the Virat gift her big teddy, PSP and big photo of Maanu & Virat. Then Viren say's "Kiya Virat that to much." Then Virat say's "Kiya bhai that nothing, I will do any thing for Maanu." Then Viren say's "You really love Maanu." All enjoy the cake, when Virat walk in his room and pick up Maanvi diary and read a page of her diary:

Life is very short so you need live for those who love you most.

Virat loss in Maanvi thought when, Maanu walk in and say's "Partner you missing Massi aren't you." Virat wipes his tears and smile "No partner, any way beta we have go out side as the party out side." Then Maanu thinks "Partner I know what you trying to hide, but when Maanu here not to worry I will always bring a smile on your face." Viren and Jeevika notice Virat come out his room with sad face, then Viren say's "Jeevika if it was not was for our Maanu then Virat would lost in life." Jeevika say's "I know it like the bond is unbreakable, Maanu can not see tears in Virat eyes that much he love him."

Edited by indian10 - 13 years ago

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BadtameezDil.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Nice one

Pl pm me when u update

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girl_rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

this is just awsm

luvd it

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Jesmin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

wow loved it...👏👍🏼

plz do continue and pm me...😊

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Chapter 13:

The Chaudery family had stayed with Jeevika for a few day's so they can spend time with Viren, Jeevika and Maanu. It was the time for them to go when Maanu come running to Dabbu "Mamu don't go I'll miss you." Then Dabbu say's "I know Maanu I feel like staying but I have help you Chachu Nana at the shop." Then Manan Chacha say's "Dabu beta you can stay for a few days long if you won't, as it is we quiet at the shop." Then Maanu say's "Great Mamu that final your staying, me, you and Partner will do a lot masti." Then Maanu grabs Dabuu bags and take to the guest room quickly "But Maanu wait." Then Virat say's "come Dabu stay for a few days, see my concert then leave, it be fun." Then Dabu say "Okay bhai I stay." Then Virat and Dabu take Biji, Babi biji, Madan Chachu and Picky Chachu to the train station.

When the get to the train station Virat help them unload the car and take the bags to the train. Virat take blessing from elders and hugs everyone say "Bye, have safe trip will really miss you". Then Virat see the Chadury family of, when he walking back to the car, he is crossing the road. Where the big lorry coming from the side but Virat does not see, Dabu shout out "Virat bhai watch out." Virat turn around but by that time the lorry hits Virat. Dabbu just ran's to him, Virat is very badly injured on his head, and whole of his body a lot blood come out his head. "Virat bhai are you okay" Shout Dabu, Virat slowly closes his eyes.

Maanvi soul appears "Partner." Then Virat say's "Hi Partner have you come to get me." Then Maanvi "I wish I could but it not up to me, any way it not sure your time yet, you have live for your family." Virat say's "No Partner I can not live with out any more please let me come to you." Then Maanvi say's "What about Maanu." Then Virat was speechless.

In the mean time Dabu shouting "Help some one please help." No one willing to help, when some uncle come from the back and say's "Beta I'll help you." Then Dabu and the uncle manage get Virat in the car get him to the hospital. At home Jeevika say's Swamin Bua "Bua ji Virat take a long time." Then Bua ji say's "Jeevika don't worry they will be here soon, they must traffic."

Dabu get to the hospital and the Doctor rush Virat in operation room to treat him. Dabu call's Jeevika and say's "Jeevika Di." Jeevika hear Dabu cry, she very worried and say's "Dabu why you crying so much." Then Dabu say's "Virat bhai had got run over by lorry." Jeevika is in shock does not say any thing drops her phone. When Viren comes and say's "Kya hua Jeevika, who on the phone." Then Viren pick the phone say's "Who this?" Then Dabu say's "It me Jiju." Viren say's "Dabu what happend why you crying so much." Then Dabu say's "Jiju Virat got run over and he badly injured" Then Viren say's "What Virat had accident which hospital are you at." Maanu had heard everything "No Partner." Then Dabu tell Viren which hospital he is in. Viren and Jeevika about to leave when Maanu comes and say's "Daddy please let me come." Then Viren "Beta children don't come in hospital" Then Maanu say's "But daddy my partner need me please let me come." Then finally agree to take Maanu to the hospital.

Edited by indian10 - 13 years ago