dil se rey:kriyaansh ff thread 2 part 34:pg 146

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Snigdha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Ok poppy come on deetha ko pareshan karte hain..

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guys u ppl r awesome

srsly!!i dnt believe it..update z almost ready..just givng final editing n adding more scenes!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
Ok poppy come on deetha ko pareshan karte hain..

chalo chalte hai 😆 😆

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Ok shonu..v'll b waiting but pls updt before 10.

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3 more for dis page.

Let us complete dis pg n let shonu updt be d first comment on d next pg.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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2 more n poppy stop spamming if d pg completes 8 comments n i wil do d same.

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Originally posted by: tinatartari
guys u ppl r awesome
srsly!!i dnt believe it..update z almost ready..just givng final editing n adding more scenes!!

waiting 😃

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tina tartari

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CHAPTER 27
Sorry 4 the short update guys!bt I promise next part wud b fab.n the confession wud b soon.n wen well tats a surprise!!
Rey hid himself behind the tree n went bck 2 party 4m behind n kriya ws standing thr
Piyush:bhabhi!wot r u dng here?
K:actually i..i'i'
P:tats ok!mayb sme ov ur personal prob!bt plx come n enjoy the party!!
N he took her 2 the party.thr ws a perfect couple competition announced.
Announcer:well..well..well guys!as u all knw we hav gathred here 4 1 ov our very special frnd s birthday party n as his wud-b z also wid him n all ours 2 so lets ply a couples only game.in this game we ll chk the coordination between couples.may the best couple wins
Every1:yaya!!!
So our 1st couple z obviously the brdy boy eagle n his wud b,2nd z sky,3rd z ',4th z '
So lets start
Kriya ws feeling bit shy b trey held her arms in his n took her 2 the center.they were given seats 2 sit
A:ur 1st task wud b 2 knot a tie round ur partners neck.cmon grls start
Kriya dint knw hw 2 knot a tie!n she wnted 2 win.so rey helped her by directing her n he cudnt touch or do smthng himself acc 2 rules of game so he kept telling her..knot it like this,right,left'
N she tied it n they stood 2nd
The next game ws tat the boy has 2 fix the pallu ov the sari.rey had nvr done it b4 n nt even kriya knew abt it.they tried n he did it pathetically'
The 2nd round ws coordination round
Q:her fav color
R:green
C:z tat right??
K:ya
Q:her fav place
R:paris
K:ya
Q:her fav costume
R:casual
K:rite
C:nw maam its ur turn
Q:his fav color?
K:blue
R:right
Q:his fav holiday destination in india??
K:simla
R:rite
C:wow!!u guys r awesome..u knw evrythng abt each othr!!ur couple rockksss!!!
Nw the next round z paper dance'
All the couples gathered on the dance floor n they were given a big paper 2 dance on.every1 started.aftr the music got changed they hav 2 fold the ppr n dance again widout putting their feet outta ppr!!
Rey n kriya started the dance.they were far apart n were dng traditional dance as thr ws ample space on the ppr..tat ws a cute dance.then music change.rey folded the ppr n they came closer,he took her hand n put it on his shoulder n took the othr hand in his hand n put his othr hand round her waist n brought her closer.she felt tickling sensations in her stomach.they had an eyelock(nw this is aftr such a long tym)
Again music change
Roop ter mastaana
N they were 2 close tat their chests were into each othr.kriya cud feel the pressure on her curves..she tried 2 move aprt b trey held her 4m her waist n brought her closer.many tripped outta ppr bt they were dancing beautifully
Next music
(cnt thnk ov any song as I dnt actually listen 2 many hindi songs,so sorry bout tat)
Ppr folded.thr ws so lil space tat rey had 2 ask kriya 2 stand on his feet,nw their breaths were touching.kriya cudnt take it so she closed her eyes in passion!!
Rey ws looking at her face,her angelic beauty ws driving him insane.ther were few lights in the room as it wsnt a proper disco so no disco lights..it ws dark.he cudnt hold it anymore n he pecked her on her lips slightly.he ws abt 2 kiss completely wen the music change
Baahoon k darmiyaan
By then only one more couple ws left. Thr ws no space 2 stand so rey took kriya in his arms n she ws above the floor.she saw him in shock n he swayed his body wid her n they danced.constantly gazing at each othr.lights came bck n every1 clapped.this made them come outta their passion n rey put her down on the floor.
C:so this tym again the bday boy n his mistress won!!yay!!
N they both smiled..
nw it ws their turn 2 show their love 2 each othrc:tell me bhabhi!wot does he really mean 2 u?n tell us sme incident tat made u fond ov him?k(blushing)well i like his evrythng,his smile,his style,his personality!!everythng!!well i became fond ov him bt he risked his own life 2 save my life at many instances..he never asked me abt ma past.he always cared 4 me..every1:awww!!!c:well tats super cute.nw u tell smthng abt her?wot u like n wot made u fond ov her?r:well i became fond ov her smile,her eyes n her innocence the 1st tym i saw her..n she z the best grl i ve ever met n her dance z megical!!(rey said it so cutely tat evry1 laughed)she always stood by me!!n i love u 4evr.ll love u evn aftr my death BC!n kriya put her hand on his mouth wid teary eyesk:never evr say this again!!!r(flying kiss)love uk:love u 2!!c:aww!!!tats so cute.they r the perfect couple made 4 each othr!!!coming up next:the brthday KISSS😉

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Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago