FF: Kashish, UPDATED PT25/ pg 55/ Aug 25

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hello everyone! Im back with another FF! Thanks for all the lovely responses. Would like to take a moment to recognize all the FFs afloat on the forum! All deserve a special mention. They are too good! And a couple are so diff! They have that extra zing! 👏 to all the writers. Heres introducing yet another FF. I hope it will engage your senses. Its diff. from last time. We have a diff Bani, the same JW, except one aspect, and diff circumstances.

Kashish

Jai Walia: A passionate man, and a man of few words. Is a filthy rich business tycoon. He is 39 years old. Always believed in marriage. Doesn't want to marry anymore because of his insecurity. He thinks he is too old for marriage, and even when he does toy with the idea of marriage, he backs off. He fears that if at all a girl may agree, it will be for his wealth and not for him.

Maasi: Jai's ever understanding Masi who adores him to death. Stays with him for the most part. Has decided to get him married by any means.

Bani Dixit: Comes from a well off family. Quite outspoken, always speaks her mind. Dreams of a prince charming, totally believes in love. Independent by nature, always finishes what she decides on. Believes that love crosses all boundaries. Doesn't allow others to wrong herself. Very beautiful, very down to earth, yet headstrong. 25 years old.

Bani's family: Mom, Dad, sister, Rano-living in Mt. Abu. Her parents insist on her getting married. Her younger sister is all set to marry the love of her life. Her parents are worried at the thought of the younger one settling before their eldest daughter..

Their families emotionally blackmail Jai and Bani into this arranged marriage. They get into this marriage, not knowing whether it is right or wrong. Neither has divorce, or separation in mind. Overwhelmed by pressure, they just take the plunge….

Part 1

Jai and Bani enter the Walia House. After all the rituals, Bani is taken to Jai's room.

Sitting on one side of the bed, Bani is lost in her thoughts, with a tear flowing down her eye, when she hears the door knob turn. Jai enters, throws his stole on the resting chair as he seats himself on the other side of the bed. Am uncomfortable silence prevails.

Jai clears his throat: Mein

Bani: Wo

As Jai fidgets his hands, Bani clutches the sheet in anxiety. Suddenly they speak in unison:

Jai and Bani, together: I was not ready for this marriage…

Shocked at hearing the other, both turn to face each other. Bani stands on her feet followed by Jai. As they face each other for the first time,

Jai speaks softly : Shayad achha hi hai. We don't have to expect anything from each other then.

He changes into his night gown and lies on a side of the bed.

Jai thinking: Yeh zindagi ne kaisa mod le liya…Pehle mujhe shaadi hi nahi karni thi, ab jab ki hai to usse jisse bhi meri hi tarah yeh shaadi nahi chahiye thi!

Bani lies on the other side of the bed crying silent tears…

Bani thinking: What luck! I wanted to marry the man of my dreams and here I am with someone who is not my choice and I am not his either. But why did it hurt me so much when he said he never wanted this marriage…Kaha phas gayi is unchahe bandhan mein..

The next day:

Bani is the first one to wake up. Reality hits her as she realizes she is married and in a new place. She gets off the bed, sore from an uncomfortable sleep in her bridal dress and jewelry, she showers, changes into an orange salwar kameez, and leaves her room to the hall to be greeted by Maasi.

Maasi lovingly: Bani, uth gayi itni jaldi

Bani: Masi mein roz isi time par uthti hoon

Maasi: chalo acha hai, hum roz subah baatein kar sakte hai. Bata Jai kaha hai

Bani: wo so rahe hai

Maasi: Acha ek kaam karo, jaakar use bhi utha do

Bani: Maasi wo uth jaenge

Maasi: betaa mein janti hoon Jai ko, wo chhutti ke din itni jaldi nahi uthega jab tak koi use uthaega nahi

Bani thinking: yeh kaisi musibat hai…

She walks to her room reluctantly

Bani thinking: oh god, how do I wake this man up…..

Bani: uthiye, Maasi bula rahi hai…………………………………………….Uthiye……………………………………………………………………Uthiye… ………………(O god!) …..J…J.. Jai Jai

Jai who is soundly asleep doesn't budge. Bani then hesitantly shakes him by his shoulder when his eyes fly open at the jerks. He gives her an annoyed look as he speaks

Jai, quite loudly: Tum yeh kya kar rahi ho!

Bani: Maasi bula rahi hai

Jai: Itni zor se kyu uthaya

Bani losing her patience, sternly: Dekhiye, apna irritation mujh par mat nikaliye, mein aapko bohot der se utha rahi hoon, tang mein bhi ho chuki hoon aapko utha utha kar.

Releasing her frustration, Bani walks away, leaving a troubled Jai sitting on the bed.

As Bani walks out of their room,

Jai comes out of the bathroom to find his clothes on the bed. He changes when Bani enters.

Jai: dekho mere liye kapde nikalne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Mein khud karlunga.

Bani: Maine apne marzi se nahi kiya, Maasi ne kaha isliye

Jai stares back at her as she says this before walking out of the room.

Would love feed back. Next part coming soon! Once you get the feel, I dont mind suggestions-an idea or two for the scenes or more! This FF is only going to revolve around our favorite couple JB😳

Luv, Jojo

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eran thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks!!
fantastic!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx
soz i am thinkin of suggestions but it is a great fanfic
will post some suggestions 😊
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that was great.. please continue.. we have never seen this Bani yet.. so it kinds of sound funny.. but it is great... please continue soon.




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Posted: 19 years ago
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That is a great start I can't wait for next part please continue!!!
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hmmmmmmmmmmm interestin and DIFFERENT.. i wanna see how these two fall in luv.. plz cont soon!!!!!! that was gr88 👏
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Wow! Gr8 start.I can say without reading it. 😉 Ur previous one was fabulous. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow great start.... quite different... seems intresting.... pls do cont soon


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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 look forward to the next part 👏 👏
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looks interesting sumthin diff! pleez do continue!!

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