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'Kitne door door ho, in dono ke raaste..
Mil jaate hai jo bane, ek dooje ke vaaste...'
Hello all you lovely EHMMBHians and Virmanians' Here's my first FF on my most favourite couple Virat and Maanvi..Its my first attempt at writing.. So agar koi galti ho jaaye, toh please maaf kar dena' Here you go! Have fun reading..
Prologue:
Mumbai.. 7:00 pm
Bandra railway station..
"Oh hatto ji.. meri train chut jaayegi.." A girl in a Green Salwar suit was running with a heavy suitcase to catch the train..
Maanvi: "Oye Dabbe, tu kisi kaam ka nahi hai.. Nithalla, nikamma kahiin ka! Ek toh ticket sahi se nahi book ki, upar se taxi dhoondhne mein itna time barbad kiya.. Ab dekh agar teri wajah se hamari train miss hui aur agar mujhe Beeji ki daant khaani padi, toh Ganga maa ki kasam, tera who haal karungi na, ki Ganga ghat par katora leke baitha hua nazar aayega.." Poor Dabbu who was struggling to catch up with her was getting scared now' They ran until they were out of breath, but finally managed to get into the train..
Settling down on her seat next to the window, she sighed with relief.. "Haaye, yeh Mumbai ke saare railway stations par toh hamesha hi Kumbh ke mele lage hotey hain.. Lagta hai aadhe se jyada India ki abaadi Mumbai mein aa gayi hai..woh bhi train stationonpar.. Aaj toh train chutte chutte reh gayi.."
Settling down on her seat next to the window, she sighed with relief.. "Haaye, yeh Mumbai ke saare railway stations par toh hamesha hi Kumbh ke mele lage hotey hain.. Lagta hai aadhe se jyada India ki abaadi Mumbai mein aa gayi hai..woh bhi train stationonpar.. Aaj toh train chutte chutte reh gayi.."
'Auntyji..Auntyji.. get up and dance''
Maanvi is brought out of her silly monologue by the ringing of her phone.. She fumbles to find it in her jhola and finally answers it after it rings for the third time without caring to look at the screen.. "Haan Jeevika Di bolo.. Isse pehle ki aap mujhse kuch poochein, main aapko bata doon ki main bilkul theek hoon, main apni davaaiyaan bhi waqt par le rahi hoon aur meri train bhi nahi chooti hai aaj toh!. Ab bass haan Di, dramaqueen mat baniye aur apne aankhon se behnewali Ganga-Jamuna ko rok kar rakhiye.. Aapki eklauti behen char mahinon baad ghar aa rahi hai, tab baha lena.. Aur haan, isse pehle ki aap mujhe daante, pehli meri baat sunlo.. Main aapki pehli wedding anniversary kaise miss kar sakti thi Di.. Chaahe duniya idhar ki udhar ho jaaye, chaahe world war 3 aa jaaye, Maanvi apni Di aur Jiju ki zindagi ka itna bada din kaise miss kar sakti hai!!.. Aakhir khoon ka rishta hai humara, sagi behnen hai hum!! Waise Di, aapne Jiju ke alawa apne gharwalon mein se kisiko bataya toh nahi na ki main Hrishikesh wapas aa rahi hoon.. Huuh..chalo, achha hi hai, varna faltu mein sabke sab Kaun Banega Karodpati ki tarah sawaal-jawaab karne lag jaate.. Aur Di, woh Che... nahi chodo.. Waise Di, aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahi ho?"
And the person on the other side had disconnected the call.. The room was dark, only illuminated by a reading lamp.. he breathed a sigh of relief and sat down on the floor, resting his back on the wall for support.. He shut his eyes, let a lone tear drop from his eye and whispered, "Kitni bakwaas karti ho yaar tum' Partner..I missed you!"
Hey Guys, this was the first part of my story.. Have a vague story in my head.. Pls let me know if I should continue.. Need to know your reviews.. Will update the next part soon if you guys want me to continue..
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Page no. Index
Prologue: Pg. 1
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Page no. Index
Prologue: Pg. 1
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Part 1 : Pg. 2
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Part 2 : Pg. 3
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Part 3: Pg. 6
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Part 4: Pg. 9
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Part 5: Pg. 11
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Part 6: Pg. 14
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Part 7: Pg. 17
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Part 8: Pg. 20
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Part 9: Pg. 24
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Part 8: Pg. 20
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Part 9: Pg. 24
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Part 10: Pg. 28
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Part 11: Pg. 32
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Part 12: Pg. 35
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Part 11: Pg. 32
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Part 12: Pg. 35
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Part 13: Pg. 39
Part 14: Pg. 43
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Part 15: Pg. 48
Part 15: Pg. 48
Part 16: Pg. 53
Part 17: Pg. 57
Part 18: Pg. 62 (Also includes a VM on Manvi..)
Part 19: Pg. 66
Part 20: Pg. 71
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Part 21: Pg.75
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Part 22: Pg.79
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Part 23: Pg.84
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Part 21: Pg.75
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Part 22: Pg.79
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Part 23: Pg.84
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