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Part 1:
Maanvi rested her head on the air-pillow and lay down on the train berth.. She shut her eyes and drifted off to sleep..
"Mannu, tere aur Virat ke beech mein kya chal raha hai?", Jeevika blurted out into the phone. She was very upset with the fact that her sister was being blamed for Maya and Virat's breakup by Swamini Buaji. She decided to confront Maanvi once and for all.. Maanvi was startled listening to Jeevika. "Di, humne iss bare mein pehle bhi toh baat ki hai na, aur main aapko pehle bhi bata chuki hoon ki mere aur Virat ke beech mein aisa kuch nahi hai. Toh phir aap kyun baar baar..".. Jeevika: "Kuch nahi hai na, achha hai aur kuch hona bhi nahi chahiye. Tujhe pata hai ghar mein sabko yahi lag raha hai ki Maya aur Virat ka breakup teri wajah se hua hai.. Aaj ghar mein sab log bigde hue hain. khaskar Swamini Buaji.. Unhe lagta hai ki teri wajah se yeh sab hua hai. Dekh main tujhse phirse keh rahi hoon kit u iss sab ka 'the end' karde. Tu keh rahi hai na ki tere aur Virat ke beech mein kuch nahi hai.. main maan leti hoon lekin ghar ke baaki log.. unko kaun samjhayega.. Main nahi chahti ki dono gharon ke beech koi bhi unban ho aur khaskar teri wajah se toh bilkul bhi nahi. Iss liye main tujhe iss sab se door hi rakhna chahti hoon..".
Maanvi was a little taken aback by Jeevika's sudden outburst. But she was also Maanvi Chaudhary, "theek hai di, iss pure maamle pe 'the end' ka board main hi lagaungi", making up her mind to teach Virat a lesson, she hung up without caring to listen further that the Chep was already on his way to meet her.. Tum toh ab gaye Virat.. Aaj tumne mera naam barbad kar ke rakh diya.. Sab mujhe galat samajh rahe hai.. Yahan tak ki Di bhi mujhse naraaz hai.. Ab toh tumhari khair nahi beta.. But she was unaware of the storm brewing towards her.. Virat was already on the way to confess his newfound feelings for her, unaware of her feelings and the deadly disease that had gripped his Bandariya..
He reached Hrishikesh, entered the house impatiently through the window, only to find a bewildered Beeji staring at him. Not finding her at home, he ran towards the Ghats to meet her.. Yaar partner kahaan ho tum! He saw her walking away from him and ran towards her.. She seemed to be in her own world, muttering to herself.. He ran towards her, held her arms and said, "Kya yaar tum bhi, koi pakane ko nahi mila toh apne aap ko hi paka rahi ho." Maanvi couldn't believe her eyes. The Chep was actually standing in front of her.. Nahi nahi Maanvi, aisa nahi ho sakta.. Tujhe kya laga ki Virat sachmein Chandigarh se yahaan ayega, tujhse maafi maangne.. Tere haath-pair jodega, tere saamne gidgidayega aur tu taras kha kar use maaf bhi kar degi.. Yeh tujhe ho kya raha hai, aaj subah se bass har jagah Virat hi Virat nazar aa raha hai.. Pehle toh sapne mein aakar, mujhe darakar meri neend ki band baja di.. aur ab toh din mein bhi dikhai de raha hai.. Yeh ho kya raha hai yaar!!. He stood staring at her while she kept muttering to herself.. Bass ab toh ek hi tareeka hai check karneka ki yeh asli mein hai ya nahi.. Saying so, she gathered all her strength in her right fist and punched him hard on his right arm.. Oops yeh to sachhi mein hai..matlab mujhe koi vehem nahi ho raha.. Waise achha hi hai ki yeh yahaan aa gaya.. Abhi maza chakhati hoon isse..
"Ouch! Yaar yeh kya tareeka hota hai kisi ka welcome karneka.. Main jaanta hoon ki tujhe bohot khushi ho rahi hai mujhe dekhkar, par Partner yeh kya tareeka hua apni khushi zahir karneka ka..".. Huh, himmat toh dekho iski, ek toh meri reputation ki band baja kar rakh di hai wahaan Chandigarh mein aur ab mere saamne toh aise pesh aa raha hai jaise ki kuch hua hi nahi ho! "Haan, yeh Maanvi style hai khushi dikhane ka.." And even before he could open his mouth to speak further, she pushed his shoulder and shoved him onto the bench at the edge of the road, while she kept yelling at him, "Chep, maine itni mehnet karke tumhara aur Maya ka taaka fit karvaya.. Kyun, taaki tum usse breakup karlo aur saara bill merepar faado..Poori image kharab karke rakh di tumne.. Kyun kiya tumne aisa..Sabko lagta hai ki maine tumhe behkaya, bhadkaya, uksaya..Swamini bua, Maya yahaan tak ki Jeevika di bhi mujhe galat samjh rahi hain.. Sab tumhari wajah se..". She kept on pushing the poor fellow who was trying his best to get off the bench.. "Suno toh yaar Partner, aisa nahi hai.. Ek baar toh meri baat sunlo", he tried talking her out of it.. But Maanvi the great, ek baar bolna shuru kare aur ruke, toh duniya hil na jaaye!! She kept on blabbering, Nahi nahi sunni hai mujhe tumhari baat.. Kyu sunoo main? Haan, ek toh nanhi si umar mein mera naam barbad karke rakh diya hai tumne.. Sharam nahi aayi tumhe.. Sab kya sochenge ab mere baare mein? Meri image ka pakoda bana diya hai tumne.. Tum na ek number ke gadhe, ullu, bhaalu ho, Bandar ho.."
She stopped speaking as she felt him hold her arms and push her against a nearby tree.. "Bass yaar kabse bakwas kare jaa rahi ho.. Bua, Maya, Jeevika Di.. bass ab aur nahi.. main yahaan humare bare mein baat karne aaya hoon.. Tabse koshish kar raha hoon.. tum sun hi nahi rahi ho.. Ab chup karo aur meri baat suno..". She struggled against him, "Virat mere haath chodo.. Dekho mujhse pange mat lo tum abhi.. mera dimaag already bohot garam hai". She could feel her eyesight getting blurry and wasn't able to stand on her feet.. While he on the other hand was getting exasperated, "Nahi chodunga.. Jab tak tum meri poori baat nahi sun leti..nahi chodunga..Tumhe jo kehna hai kaho, aaj main bilkul bura nahi manunga..Tumhe haq hai mujhe daantne ka, mujhe marneka..well! maarneka thoda kam hai haan.. in fact, jitna haq mera khudpar hai.. use kahiin jyada haq main tumhe deta hoon Maanvi.. Tum tab meri zindagi mein aayi, jab main bilkul akela pad gaya tha.. Pyaar, dosti par se mera vishwas uth gaya tha.. tumne mujhmein yeh saari cheeze dubara jagai.. Tumne mujhe iss baat ka ehsaas dilaya ki jo baatein main humesha se Maya mein, apni life partner mein dhoondhta raha..woh toh saari tum mey hai.. Tum itne dinon se meri aankhon ke saamne thi lekin phir bhi main tumhe pehchaan hi nahi paaya.. Lekin ab main samajh gaya hoon.. Ki tum hi meri Partner ho..Tum hi mera Future ho, Tum hi mera Pyaar ho!!"
He looked into her eyes for an answer..But she had shut her eyes and was lying unconscious in his arms.. "Maanvi, Maanvi utho.. Kya ho gaya tumhe.. Hey Bhagwan kahiin meri baatein sunke to behosh nahi ho gayi.. Yaar Virat, Maanvi sach hi kehti hai, tum ek number ke ulloo ho.. He gathered her in his arms and walked towards his Jeep.. Placing her carefully in the front-seat, he fished out a water bottle from his bag and sprinkled some on her.. "Maanvi, utho Maanvi..kya ho gaya..Maanvi apni aankhein kholo..Maanvi, kuch toh bolo yaar..Hosh mein aao..".. She opened her eyes slowly, her eyelids felt heavy and there was a throbbing pain in her head.. It took her a while to get registered to the surroundings.. Yeh ho kya raha hai?? She tried to recollect what had happened sometime back.. But her memory was as blurry as the picture in front of her eyes.. She could hear his faint voice but his words didn't make any sense to her.. She finally opened her eyes and held his hand.. "Virat, yeh tum kya kar rahe ho.. Tumhe main koi sookha ped dikhti hoon, jo paani daal rahe ho.. Ab bass karo, phool ugnetak daalte hi rahoge kya!". He breathed a sigh of relief.. She was back..and How!! "Yaar Maanvi, kamal karti ho tum bhi..Ek toh main tumhe wahan se utha ke le aaya.. Tumhe hosh mein laane ki koshish kar raha hoon.. Tumhe behoshi ki haalat mein dekhkar meri jaan jaa rahi hai.. aur tum ho ki mujhi ko daant rahi ho.. Ehsaan-faramosh bandariyaa.."'She glared at him with wide eyes.. jaan jaa rahi hai.. yeh Chep kuch jyada hi Chep nahi lag raha hai aaj.. "Oye tumhe kya main ab behosh dikh rahi hoon.. Chalo ab mujhe ghar le chalo.. Thand lag rahi hai mujhe.." He nodded his head, Kutte ki doom bhi seedhi ho jaayegi, lekin iske bheje ka kuch nahi ho sakta.. He gave her a glance and got back into his seat and drove towards her house..
Virat was just about to ring the doorbell.. When she heard, "Maanvi Didi utho..Chai peelo..bohot achhi hai..maine toh 5 cup peeli.. ab chhata cup hai.. Utho na Maanvi Di!!"
P.S. I hope you guys liked it.. Most of you must've felt as if you've just read a written update of Monday's episode.. But trust me, it was very essential for the upcoming track in my FF.. And I personally loved that scene.. Couldn't skip it!! But I promise, the next update is going to be original.. And will also feature Virika and both families..
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Edited by mohabbatgirl - 13 years ago
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