to saarthians........

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey saarthians..actually me getting bore............soo maine socha k kuch maza kia jaye..........

soooooo i m here in the forum with my funny topic........πŸ˜†

actually hum yahan aik game khele gay.........aap loog to jaante hi hain k saarthi lagne mai abhi 3 din hai coz.........aaj friday hai.........monday ane mai time hai............so let made a story.........

jub tuk monday nahi aata aik kaam kerte hain.....u all have to made a short story...........

ye short story aik chota sa paragraph ho......jis mai manasvi ka suraj ko rokte hue bataya jaye..............n ya u also add arjun bhumi scene.........but story aik paragraph mai finish ho jaye aur phir mai hum mil k decide kare ge k kiski story sub se zada achi hai................ok

hope guyzz u like it n reply..........

me waiting 4 ur stories.....

all the best.........πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

luv

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wait a sec haan...
nice thot..n game...
but first u say its a funny topic...n then u say manasvi suraj korok rahi hai...matlab kya..mansvi suraj ko hasnte hasnte rokegi????? πŸ˜†
waise thats a nice idea...wat if....it happened sooooooo ????????? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice idea mehreen πŸ‘ πŸ‘ and i will post my ff tommorrow
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Posted: 19 years ago
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okay guys... now i thot abt it... n i got one.. its quite odd...maybe not wat u guys expect..but then... ummm...ll post it later.. not wanting to be first😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very good idea πŸ‘ πŸ‘ but i am really bad in that ff but i will try πŸ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: tunna

wait a sec haan...
nice thot..n game...
but first u say its a funny topic...n then u say manasvi suraj korok rahi hai...matlab kya..mansvi suraj ko hasnte hasnte rokegi????? πŸ˜†
waise thats a nice idea...wat if....it happened sooooooo ????????? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

oh haan...........mere liye ye funny se kum nahi hai..........well ho bhi to sakta hai k manasvi suraj ko hanste hanste rokay............hmmmmmmmm.........i m waitning for ur stories...........jaldi post karo na sub.............

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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice thought πŸ˜‰

😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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no one posted.........c'mon yaar ........plzzz post na............monday a jaye ga......... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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okay okay... i'm posting soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
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okay... i'm the first one.. to write here...
tells u how lazy n shy ppl r becoming..... πŸ˜›

mera to bahut ajeeb hai... bas padho.. dekho... πŸ˜ƒ


last scene of thurs show.. suraj coming down.. n manasvi looking up.. then she remains silent.. bhoomi comes from behind her.. says bhabhi.... kuch to kariye..
M is silent.. Suraj sees.. n walks down the stairs..
n then... suddenly....
HE TRIPS...
then manasvi..
Surajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
shouts ... n then runs towards him... n she grabs him so that he's not falling... n wat a funny scene... Suraj is in Mansvi's arms... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
N eevryone els ...blushes... 😳 😳
Suraj n mansvi r just looking at each other.. eye to eye....

S : thanks...for saving me...
M : dont mention.. ye to mera farz tha....

S : ab mujhe chodogi... tab main khada hoon...
M : oh sorry...
Both smile shppeishly.. every1 is shocked.. n staring.. Bhoomi ka mouth is hanging open...

M : tussi ja rahe ho??? 😭
Suraj looks at her...
M : tussi na jao na... 😭 😊 😊 😊
S : tum pucca mujhe rok rahi ho... πŸ˜•
M : haan... main to bas thoda se natak kar rhai thi.. tum to mujhe pehle se jante ho yaar.. tumhe pata hai mujhe natak karne ki kitni adat hai... tum mujhe itni jaldi seriously kaise le sakte ho... u know ki tum thoda aur force karte to main man jaati... how can u think of leaving?????
S : main tumhe ab chod ke kabhi nahi jaunga....
N they both hug each other...
n every1 claps !!!!!! πŸ‘

Tabhi manasvi ki nazar Suraj ke suitcase par padti hai.... due to the fall... its lying open... n she sees... that
ITS EMPTY ............

M : ye kya.. tumhare suitcase mein to kuch hai hi nahi !!!!!!!!
S : oh no...
M : matlab... matlab... u were just trying to make me confess... matlab... drama... u dramebaaz.. i'll not leav u ... wait...
Suraj starts laughing uncontrolably....
Sorry.. hahaha πŸ˜† arre arre arreee.....
Manasvi is hitting him..
S : are stop it yaar...
M : tumhe to main nahi chodungi... ruko... just wait u......
N then Suraj starts running... n Manasi is running arnd the place after him... n she's picking up things on the way n throwing at Suraj..
M : suraj. !!!!! i'll not leav u....
N Suraj is dodging everything very nicely..

it looks totally like a war scene... πŸ˜†

But soon manasvi is exhausted.. n then Suraj comes in front of her... n then kneels down... n takes out a ring from his pocket..

S : so... will u marry me... miss nautanki???? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
M : yes... mr.dramebaaz 😳


happy ending...... !!!!!!!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

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