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Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

yeh that is twisted but totally incredible... this should be made into an FF!!!! Like seriously this is an amazing start... ASR's downfall and how he could make it up to khushi... complete role reversal!!! Spectacular!!

Thanks for the PM :D

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nims6

@nims6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

oh my god...😆AP...i really didnt expected it...and never thought about something like this...really different...but the matter is that i loved it...

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Weird OS but i really loved it.. Thanks for the PM>

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naina

@warriorprincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

are you going to hate me if I say I didnt like it?! You lost me at the first 'didi-ji' but I did read all the way through to the end... Please dont get me wrong, I love your writing style but 'twisted' was really twisted!

on the flip side - the ending did make me curious...

naina

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pc17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: warriorprincess
are you going to hate me if I say I didnt like it?! You lost me at the first 'didi-ji' but I did read all the way through to the end... Please dont get me wrong, I love your writing style but 'twisted' was really twisted!
on the flip side - the ending did make me curious...

naina

lol! No that's completely fine! You're entitled to your own opinion! 😛 Yep this was really twisted but I don't know...something different I suppose 😕

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513248

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Ohkaaay, so it took me some 5 minutes to digest this, but i guess my intestines refuse to work 😆

It was...what was it? Twisted? Weird? ROFLMAO? 🤣

Or maybe Mission Impossible 5? 😛

But hey, vibrantly penned down, with a HIGHLY innovative concept 👏

Looking forward to receiving more PMs from you 😊

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Scorpio17

@Scorpio17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Amazing fantabulous..u are such a great writer i must say..i absolutely love this one shot..this is soo diff and creativity at its peak..do continue soon.

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naina

@warriorprincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: pc17

lol! No that's completely fine! You're entitled to your own opinion! 😛 Yep this was really twisted but I don't know...something different I suppose 😕

Oh Phew, I was really worried that I'd be in trouble for saying something unflattering - but hats off to you for taking constructive criticism onboard!! Yes, this story definately was 'different'. Actually, I came back to say, I re-read it today and for some reason its grown on me a bit more today. If I can put my finger on it, I think its actually because Khushi is the enpowered one in your story whereas ASP gets to walk all over her on screen and thats beginning to grate on my nerves. Also would like to encourage you (if I may 😳) to continue to write 'different' stories 😊.

naina

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hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

aahahaa ! 'didijii'

surely a well written and oh my have you twisted the situations !
no matter how much I tried.. I couldn't come to imagine the great ASR or Arnav.. being khushi (his own ex-wife's servant) that just sounds sooo awkward.. but I did end up enjoying it ! LOL. loved the ending how he was beaming by spending another moment with her !

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