TOOTE HUVE DIL... MG FF ...PT 15/45 updtd 15/8

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PROLOUGE

MAN : KAASH TUM MUJHE SAMAJH PAATI ...
WOMAN : KYA KABHI TUMNE MUJHE SAMJHANE KI KOSHISH KI...NA SAMJHAYA NA SAMJHANE KI KOSHISH...
MAN : AISA KUCH HAI HI NAHI THO KYA SAMJHAVU... AB TU HI BATA... MERA KYA GALTI THA ...


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CHARACTER SKETCH

MAAN SINGH KHURANA :A MAN IN HIS LATE 20'S
RUDE , PERSONIFIED , DIGNIFIED , HANDSOME , RICH , ARROGANT ...
MOST ELIGIBLE BACHELOR , A MULTI BILLIONAIRE AND THE OWNER OF KHURANA GROUP OF INDUSTRIES...
Gurmeet in Punar Vivaah



GEET HANDA : A LADY IN HER MID 20'S
ONCE UPON A TIME WAS A BUBBLY, CHEERFUL AND A NAIVE GIRL...THOUGH NAIVE AND INNOCENT EVEN NOW HAS LOST HER CHARM IN HERSELF BUT PRETENDS TO BE THE SAME ONE BEFORE OTHERS ... MORE TO BE REVEALED

Drashti Dhami


SIA: A CUTE 2 YR OLD

MEERA AND YASH :


ARJUN :
:

ADI / ADITYA SHARMA :



PINKY MANCHANDA :

SASHA TASHA :

SAMEERA RATHODE :


KARAN SINGHANIA:


NANDINI SINGHANIA \ MALHOTRA :

SID / SIDDHANT CHOPRA::

ANVI KHURANA : DARLING SISTER OF MAAN IN HER EARLY 20'S LOVES PAMPERING HER...CARES THE MOST FOR HER THAN ANY ONE ELSE...
other characters will be updated later on



Edited by crazy_125 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting prologue
great character sketch
looking forward for the update

continue soon

plz pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds good !! :-)
cont soon :)
plzz pm me =]
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting prologue
nice cs
continue soon
add me in ur pm list

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PART 1


OXFORD UNIVERSITY , LONDON

BOY 1 : WHERE HAVE U BEEN WE HAVE SEARCHED THE WHOLE PLACE LIKE ABOUT TWO TIMES 😡.

GIRL 1 : EXACTLY COULD U PLEASE TAKE THE DIFFICULTY IN EXPLAINING US WHERE U DISAPPEARED ALL OF A SUDDEN😡..

BOY 2 : CHILL ! I THINK WE ARE OVER REACTING😆

GIRL 1 : FIRST OF ALL U SHUT UP😡

( TO THE OTHER GIRL ) SPEAK UP😡

GIRL 2 : I WAS AT THE YARD BEHIND THE BUILDING🥱

BOY 1 & GIRL 1 : GEET OH REALLY MAY I KNOW WAT U WERE DOING THERE AT THIS TIME WHEN U ARE EXPECTED TO BE IN THE LECTURE HALL GIVING OUR PRESENTATION😡😡

BOY 2 : OH MY GOD ! FIRSE PRESENTATION KA MARKS KAM MILEGA😭 ..

BOY 1 & GIRL 1: SHUT UP YASH😕..

YASH : ABA MAINE KYA KIYA MEERA 🥱..

BOY 1 : TUNE KUCH NAHI KIYA😆

GEET : ARJUN AB THO USKA PEECHA CHOD THO😛.

MEERA : TU THO BOL HI MAT AISA KYA HOTA HAI KI TU JAB DEKHO GAYAB HOJATHI HO HAR MONDAY PE... KAHA JAATHI HO ...😡.

GEET : AISA KUCH NAHI HAIN MEERA ... JUST WENT TO THE YARD ...PATHA NAHI KYU MUJHE WO JAGHA BOHUT ACHA LAGTHA HAI ... AUR WAHI BAATH MONDAY KA THO I THINK ITS PURELY CO INCIDENTAL (LOST IN HER THOUGHTS)...

ARJUN : TEEKH HAI ABI KE LIYE HUM YE BAATHE YEHI CHODTHE HAI AUR LECTURE HALL CHALTHE HAI... PRESENTATION DENI HAI YA NAHI...😆

YASH : CHALNA HAI NA😃.. GEET JALDI KARO😕..

GEET : (COMING OUT FROM HER THOUGHTS ) CHILL YASH I THINK ABI BHI WAQT HAI TU ITNA GABRAO MAT TERE MARKS KAHI NAHI JAANE WAALA HAI...😕AB CHALE...😊

MEERA : HA CHALO 😊

UPDATING CHARACTER SKETCH :)

Edited by crazy_125 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update


loved their friend ship
waiting for maan's entry
continue soon

thnx for the pm
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PART 2


KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS , DELHI , INDIA

A LADY IN HER MID 20'S DESCENDING THE STAIRS WITH HER ASSISTANT AT HER BACK HOLDING HER COFFEE AND FILES'..

LADY : TASHA '. COFFEE'.

TASHA (ASSISSTANT) : YES SASHA ! (SASHA GLARES AT HER ) SILLY ME ''.

THEN THE SIREN RINGS'.. AND EVERY ONE STANDS AS IF ELECTROCUTED ON THE SPOT'''''..AND STARTS RUNNING HERE THERE SEARCHING THINGS AND FILES REQUIRED ''.

AND THEN A MAN ENTERS WITH STYLE AND ATTITUDE OOZING OUT OF HIM ( OF COURSE OUR ONE AND ONLY MAAN SINGH KHURANA) '''..

STAFF STAND UP TO GREET HIM ''..

SASHA : HELLO MK'

HE JUST NODS HIS HEAD ..

MAAN : WHERE IS ADI''..

A MAN COME S RUNNING AND SKIDS AND FORTUNATELY (AAHAAA ) UNFORTUNATELY BUMPS INTO HIM ''.(AYOOO ) ONLY TO RECEIVE GLARES FROM HIM AND STARTS TO SPEAK ..

ADI : GU' GU '. GUD'. MO.. GUD MORNING SI ' SIR''.

MAAN : ADI '.. WHERE WERE U?

ADI : SI'SIR '. ME 'ME ACC..ACCOUNTS FI.LES CH..CHECK KAR RAHA THA LONDON PROJECT KA''..

MAAN : ADI , SASHA COME TO MY CABIN '' SAARE LONDON PROJECT KE FILES LEKE''. JALDI'''.

ADI : YES'SIR

SASHA : YES MK


IN MAAN'S CABIN:

MAAN SITTING IN HIS REVOLVING CHAIR AND LOST INTO SOME DEEP THOUGHTS UNTIL THERE WAS A KNOCK ON THE DOOR

MAAN : COME IN

SASHA & ADI TAKE THEIR SEATS AND START DISCUSSING ABOUT THE LONDON PROJECT

MAAN : (CHECKING ACCOUNT FILES ) SASHA GET INTO THE DETAILED PLANS OF THE HOTEL

SASHA : SURE MK, THE HOTEL HAS BEEN DIVIDED SYMMETRICALLY INTO 3 DIVISIONS SUCH THAT THE EVEN THE ELEVATION LOOK THE SAME AS PLAN . AND THE FAADE IS BEING DESIGNED USING GLASS AS WELL WITH A TINT OF MIXTURE WITH THE GREEK ARCHITECTURE OF HUGE PILLARS AT THE FACADE. AN SO ON.

MAAN : I'M SURE THE CLIENTS ARE GOING TO HAPPY WITH OUR WORK …. BUT MAKE SURE U DON'T USE EITHER TOO MUCH OF GREEK ARCHITECTURE OR GLASS AND ALSO I WANT TO CHECK THE DETAILED SERVICE DRAWINGS BY EVENING.

AND ADI I HAVE CHECKED THE FILES THEY ARE FINE

SASHA : SURE MK

ADI AND SASHA LEAVE THE CABIN

AT THE SAME TIME IN OXFORD UNIVERSITY, LONDON

A PERSON ON THE DIAS : NOW WE HAVE THE PRESENTATION ON GREEN ARCHITECTURE AND LANDSCAPE ARCHITECTURE BY GEET , ARJUN , YASH AND MEERA …

YASH : BACH GAYA TIME PE THO AGAYA .

MEERA : SHUT UP YASH .. MUJHE BOHUT TENSION HARAHI HAI

PRECAP : PRESENTATION

EDITED CS



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awesome
loved it
one confusion dear r yash n karan twins or not
continue soon

thanks for the pm
Edited by kamiya - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kamiya

awesome

loved it
one confusion dear r yash n karan twins or not
continue soon

thanks for the pm


SRY SRY GALTI SE I DINT CHECK IT OUT ANY WAYS THNX ILL CHANGE THE CHARACTER SKETCH NW U CAN CHECK IT OUT IN 5 MIN 😉😛😊

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