TOOTE HUVE DIL... MG FF ...PT 15/45 updtd 15/8 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago


part 10



MAAN COMES OUT OF HIS TRANCE WHEN HE HEARS A SPLASH OF WATER WITH THAT HE SHOUTS GEET AND LOOKS AROUND ONLY TO FIND KIDS PLAYING AND JUMPING IN WATER………..

HE SITS IN THE SAME PLACE FOR SOMETIME ON THE OTHER HAND GEET AND HER GANG HAVE COME TO HYDE PARK AS GEET LIKES COMING TO THAT PARK…….

ALL THE GANG SETTLE NEAR THE FOODCOURT NEARBY THE WATERBODY ……AND GEET GOES TO ROAM AROUND THE PLACE AND REACHES PLACE WHERE MAAN WAS SITTING …..

MAAN SEES GEET AND HE THINKS HE IS HAVING HALLUCINATIONS BUT STILL KEEPS STARING AT HER THAT SHE DOESN'T DISAPPEAR……

MAAN: GEET

WHEN GEET SEES HIM STARING AT HER SHE FEELS THAT HE IS FOLLOWING HER ……SO RUNS AWAY FROM THE PLACE……

AND MAAN COMES OUT FROM HIS TRANCE AND LEAVES THE PLACE……GEET GOES TO HER STILL THINKING HE IS FOLLOWING HER

GEET ST : YE KY MUJHE FOLLOW KAR RAHE HAI

….AND TELLS HER GANG THAT SHE WANTS TO GO SOMEWHERE ELSE….

SO THEY HEED TO THE EXIT AFTER THEY EXIT SHE FIND MAAN AT THE EXIT AND COMING OUT SO THEY WALK TO SOME PLACE NEARBY KHURANA VILLA….

SINCE KHURANA VILLA IS NEARBY MAAN WALKS DOWN TO HIS PLACE BUT IS SEEN BY GEET BEHIND HER COMING DOWN THE SAME WAY AND SHE THINKS HE IS STALKING HER……….

SHE AND HER GANG WALK FAST ON HER INSISTANCE AND SHE FEELS SHE ESCAPED BECAUSE SHE DOESN'T FIND HIM BACK OF HER …..(GANG TAKES THE RIGHT DIRECTION WHILE MAAN TAKES THE LEFT AS KHURANA VILLA IS ON THE SO ON NOT SEEING HIM SHE THINK HE GOT MISLEAD)

FINALLY SHE TAKES A BREATH OF RELIEF BUT SHE DOESN'T SAY ANYTHING TO HER GANG EVEN MEERA…..

GANG DEPARTS , SID AND GEET REACH HOME,

SID : GEET AJ KA DIN BOHUT ACHA THA NA KITNE DINNO KE BAAD HUMNE ITNE GHOOME…….

GEET (LOST IN HER THOUGHTS) : HMMM

NANDINI AND KARAN COME HOLDING SIA AND THEY PLAN TO GO OUT FOR A FAMILY TIME…….SO GEET THINKS IT WOULD BE REFRSHING AND AGREES TO IT HAPPILY …..

GEET : TEEKH HAI TO PHIR HUM GARDEN RESTAURANT JAAYENGE……….

EVERYONE : HA TEEKH HAI

SIA : WAHA T MELEKO BOHUT SALI CHOCO FOULTAIN MILEGI NA……

GEET : HA PAKKA …. HUM BOHUT SAARA KHAAYENGE…..

SIA : YAY ! YAY ! YAY!

SID: SIA ITNA UD MAT ITNI CHOCO KHAYEGI THO IS GEET KI TARAH TU BHI MOTI HO JAYEGI……

GEET: MEIN MOTI HOON …. MUJHE TUMSE BAAT NAHI KARNI…….

SIA: heheheheeheheheeh

ON THE OTHER HAND MAAN ALSO PLANS TO GO TO GARDEN RESTAURANT…….

MAAN REMEMBERING THE OLDEN TIMES WHICH HE SPENT WITH HIS GEET

*FLASHBACK *

MAAN HUGS GEET BACK FROM HER WAIST AND NUZZLES HER NECK WITH HIS NOSE…..

GEET: moans MAAN

MAAN: HMMM BOLO GEET

GEET: CHODO NA MAAN

MAAN : still not leaving KAHI BAAHAR CHALE

GEET: gets excited and jumps and says GARDEN RESTAURANT CHALENGE NA MAAN PLZZZ MUJHE WAHA BOHUT ACHA LAGTE HAI……

MAAN : ACHHA TEEKH HAI PHIR WAHI CHALTE HAI…..

GEET: gets super excited hugs him and kisses him on the cheek and tells hiM

THANK YOU SOOO MUCH MAAN

MAAN : MERI JAAN MUJHSE KUCH KAHE AUR WO MEIN NA KARU AISA KABHI HO SAKTHA HAI KYA……

GEET BLUSHES AT THE WORD JAAN

AND THEY LEAVE FOR GARDEN RESTAURANT

*FLASHBACK ENDS

HIS THOUGHTS WERE BROKEN WHEN ADI SAYS THEY HAVE REACHED GARDEN RESTAURANT

ADI : MAAN CHALE

MAAN : gets excited like geet used to (IMAGINE MAAN AND EXCITEMENT THAT TO LIKE GEET ) ADI HUM WAHA GARDEN MEIN WATER BODY KE PAAS BAITENGE…..

ADI : HA MEIN JAANTHA HOON

ADI HAVE ONCE COME ALONG WITH GEET AND MAAN TO THIS PLACE AND SEEN GEET GETTING SUPER EXCITED TO GO AND SIT IN HER FAV PLACE…..

ON THE OTHER HAND GEET AND HER FAMILY …..AND SAYS THEY WILL SIT IN THE GARDEN NEAR THE WATERBODY , THEY ALL SETTLE THEMSELVES….

AND START ORDERING…..

EVEN MAAN AND ADI ORDER THEIR FOOD

AFTER HAVING THEIR DINNER WHEN GEET AND SIA GO TO HAVE THEIR CHOCOLATE FOUNTAIN SHE SEES MAAN SITTING NEAR TO THEIR TABLE

AND PANICS THINKING THAT HE IS STILL FOLLOWING HER…..

SIA : CHOCO FOULTAIN…….

GEET MAKES HER EAT AND SHE HERSELF GOBBLES UNABLE TO RESIST…….MAAN FINDS GEET EATING CHOCOFOUNTAIN AND HE THINKS HE IS JUST IMAGINING HER (HE DOESN'T SEE SIA )

*FLASHBACK

GEET : MAAN CHOCO FOUNTAIN… CHALNA KAATHE HAI……

MAAN : smiles seeing her jumping like a kid and accompanies her

GEET GOES ON EATING UNTIL MAAN ASKS HER TO STOP SO THAT SHE DOESN'T FALL ILL EATING SO MUCH OF CHOCO……..

MAAN : GEET BAS AUR NAHI KHAAYEGI THU

GEET : KYU

MAAN : MUJHE NA MOTI GEET PASAND NAHI ….

GEET : HAWWW MAI MOTI HOON SHE KEEPS A SAD FACE AND LEAVES

MAAN ST : AB MUJHE ISSE MANANA THO PADEGA HI…

MAAN COMES OUT OF HES RIVERIE WHEN THE WAITER COMES WITH THE BILL

GEET AND HER FAMILY LEAVE AND EVEN MAAN AND ADI LEAVE…..

GEET AGAIN FINDS MAAN AT THE EXIT………….

PRECAP : MAAN AND GEET ………….

Edited by crazy_125 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome lovely update
still trying to find why geet is not recoznising maan
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Posted: 13 years ago


oh u r able to update...I am happy...how ur problem solved...

awesome update...

God is making them meet again and again...

Geet is thinking he is stalking her...

why she don't remember anything...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome lovely update
still trying to find why geet is not recoznising maan


ull get to know y soon...but till then continue assuming 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dona86

loved the update...

awesome...


😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



oh u r able to update...I am happy...how ur problem solved...

awesome update...

God is making them meet again and again...

Geet is thinking he is stalking her...

why she don't remember anything...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


yeah finally it got solved had to update a bit and bit to find the problem

why she doesnt remember ull know soon...
and next part is an another meet of geet and maan...rest to ur imagination...
till i update😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..
bit confused as y geet is not recognizing maan
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

nice update..

bit confused as y geet is not recognizing maan


you will get to know soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏 brilliant update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420

👏 brilliant update soon


thnq dear...😳

ill for sure update soon dear...😛

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