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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: crazy_125


SRY SRY GALTI SE I DINT CHECK IT OUT ANY WAYS THNX ILL CHANGE THE CHARACTER SKETCH NW U CAN CHECK IT OUT IN 5 MIN 😉😛😊


no problem dear
thanks for clear the confusion😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
PART 3


AT THE SAME TIME IN OXFORD UNIVERSITY,

LONDON

A PERSON ON THE DIAS : NOW WE HAVE THE PRESENTATION ON

GREEN ARCHITECTURE AND LANDSCAPE ARCHITECTURE BY

GEET , ARJUN , YASH AND MEERA …😊👏

YASH : BACH GAYA TIME PE THO AGAYA .

MEERA : SHUT UP YASH .. MUJHE BOHUT TENSION HARAHI HAI😕

GEET : KUCH NAHI HOGA MEERA SAB KUCH TEEKH HI HOGA JAISE

HUMNE SOCHA . TU THO BEKHAAR MEIN TENSION LE RAHE HO😉

ARJUN : HA MEERA GEET SAHI KEH RAHI HAI. CHALE WARNA JAB

TAK HAM STAGE PE CHALENGE TAB TAK YE LOG DEKH DEKH KE

HAMARI GROUP KA NAAM NA KAATLE LIST SE YE SOCHKAR HUM

YAHA NAHI HAI …😆

YASH : JALDI CHALOOO😆

THE GANG GO ONTO THE DIAS AND THE PRESENTATION IS BEING

LEAD BY GEET😊

GOOD AFTERNOON EVERY ONE . WE ARE HERE TO PRESENT A

PRESENTATION ON GREEN ARCHITECTURE AND LANDSCAPE

ARCHITECTURE.

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OVER TO YASH

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OVER TO MEERA

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OVER TO ARJUN

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END OF THE PRESENTATION

EVERYONE IN THE HALL APPLAUDE👏

GEET : THANK YOU😊

PROFESSOR : GEET AND TEAM , I THINK THEY HAVE DONE A

WONDERFUL JOB AND DESERVE A HUGE ROUND OF APPLAUSE👏

ONCE AGAIN PPL IN HALL CHEER FOR THEM BY CLAPPING👏

PROFESSOR : AND AS PER TODAYS RESULTS , THE WINNERS ARE

GEET AND TEAM …👏

THE WHOLE LOT WAS HAPPY FOR THEM EXCEPT IN ONE CORNER

WHERE SAMEERA AND HER GANG SAT.

SAMEERA HAD BEEN FUMING😡 IN JEALOUSY DURING THE WHOLE

OF PRESENTATION AS THEIRS WAS JUST IGNORED LIKE A PIECE

OF SHIT 🤢AND HERE THEY GO ON APPRECIATING GEET AND HER

TEAM .👏

PROFESSOR : SO GEET ,MEERA , YASH AND ARJUN , YOU GUYS

WILL BE ATTENDING AN INTERNATIONAL SEMINAR ON BEHALF OF

OUR COLLEGE..👏

THAT WAS IT FOR SAMEERA AS SHE COULDN'T TAKE ANYMORE 😡

JUST STORMED OUT OF THE HALL😡

AFTER SOME TIME

OUTSIDE THE HALL

GEET ,ARJUN , YASH , MEERA : YES! YES! YES! YES! WE DID IT AND

HI – FI EACH OTHER😃

YASH : AUR YEH MEERA BEWAJA PARESHAN HORAHI THI

MEERA : AB BAS BHI KARO NA YASH..😳

YASH : SURE SWEETHEART…😳

GEET & ARJUN : HOYE HOYE 😉😳

Edited by crazy_125 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
nice liked it con soon and pm me when you update sweets
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: mel420

nice liked it con soon and pm me when you update sweets


sure ill do that and i loved ur "dirty revenge" it's simply awesome 😊
do continue soon and do pm me 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
IF I GET ATLEAST 10 LIKES ON MY PART 3 I MAY GIVE A BONUS UPDATE I MEAN A SUPER LONG UPDATE WHERE U CAN WITNESS MAANEET ...
THATS ALL FOR NW IF INTERESTED HIT THE LIKE BUTTON JALDI
K 10 NAHI THO KAM SE KAM 7
Edited by crazy_125 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Awesome update...
The story is really interesting...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
PART 4 (here u go though u dint fulfill my condition but here goes a double update)

AFTER SOME TIME

OUTSIDE THE HALL

GEET ,ARJUN , YASH , MEERA : YES! YES! YES! YES! WE

DID IT AND HI – FI EACH OTHER

YASH : AUR YEH MEERA BEWAJA PARESHAN HORAHI THI

MEERA : AB BAS BHI KARO NA YASH..

YASH : SURE SWEETHEART…

GEET & ARJUN : HOYE HOYE

GEET'S PLACE , LONDON :

GEET : DI , MAI AGAYI………

NANDINI : TO KAISI THI TUMHARI DIN AAJ

GEET : KYA BATAU DI AAJ TO EKDAM 1ST CLASS HUI MERI

DIN

WINNERS HAI HUM AAJ KI PRESENTATION KI

A MAN ENTERS CARRYING A KID IN HIS ARMS : WAH !

KYA BAAT HAI SAALI SAHIBA ….. DIL KO KUSH KARDI

AAPNE ……

GEET : ABHI AAPNE KYA SUNE HUMARI UNIVERSITY KO

HUM REPRESENT KARENGE EK INTERNATIONAL

SEMINAR MEIN SOCHO ZARA HUM OXFORD UNIVERSITY

KO REPRESENT KARENGE…

THE LITTLE GIRL JUMPS IN HIS ARMS TO BE WITH GEET ….

NANDINI : KARAN SIA KO JALDI GEET KO DEDO WARNA

WO RONA SHURU KARDEGI

SIA : (COMING INTO THE EMBRACE OF GEET ) STARTS

JUMPING EXCITEDLY AND STARTS LAUGHING OUT LOUD

KARAN : HA HA HASLO AB JO AAPKE MUMMA-MAASI KE

SAATH JO HO

GEET : giggles JIJU AAPKO HUMSE JALAN HORAHI HAI AND

LAUGHS OUT LOUD

SIA HEARING GEET LAUGH OUT LOUD LAUGHS EVEN

MORE SHOWING HER TWO CUTE DIMPLES …………….

NANDINI : AB MILGAYI NA DONO PARTNERS IN CRIME..

HEY BABAJI MERI RAKSHA KARNA says dramatically

KARAN : HEY NANDU KI BABAJI MERA BHI AUR MERA

NEAT SI CLEAN SI STUDY KA BHI RAKSHA KARNA

SUDDENLY THEY HEAR *BANG * NOISE AND THE RUSH

ONLY TO SEE INK FLOWING ON THE BUNDLE OF

NEWSPAPERS WHICH HAVE BEEN NEATLY SET IN THE

STUDY ALONG WID FEW MARKS SRY SRY DRAWINGS

WITH CRAYONS ON THE WALLS …..

KARAN : HMPHHH n says dramatically AB KYA KARU

SIA : in her cute voice showing her toothy grin says CLEEAAN

KALO AUL KYA KALOGI :p

KARAN : TUM DONO NA SHAITHAN HO .

GEET : WO THO HAI HI HUM

KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS , DELHI ,INDIA

MAAN CALLS ADI ASKING HIM TO COME TO HIS CABIN

MAAN : ADI JO INTERNATIONAL SEMINAR KO MUJHE

BULAYA HAI WO KAAB HAI

ADI : SIR WO 22ND APRIL

MAAN : 22ND APRIL (LOST INTO THOUGHTS )

*FLASHBACK *

POLICE : HUME EK AURAT AUR EK BACCHE KI LAASH MILI

HAI SIR AUR WO ACCESSORIES JO MILEHE AAP NE TO

IDENTIFY KIYE KI YE KOI AAP KI JAAN PEHCHAN KI HAI

MAAN : HAAN PAR USKO KUCH NAHI HUVA HOGA ,

SHAYAD WO LASH KISI AUR KA HOGA AAP DUBARA

TALASH KIJIYE NA ……

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

ADI : SIR AAP TEEKH THO HAINA

MAAN : (RETURNING BACK TO MSK MODE ) HA ADI TO EK

KAAM KARO LONDON CLIENTS KE SAATH USI DOURAN EK

MEETING ARRANGE KARO …

ADI : JEE SIR..

SASHA KNOCKS THE DOOR JUST THEN

MAAN : COME IN

SASHA : MK , WO SERVICES KA PLANS JO AAPNE MAANGA

MAAN : ADI KYA MUJHE TERI AARTHI UTHARKE BEJU KYA

TUMHE KAAM KARNE…

ADI : SORRY SIR

TURNING TO SASHA : SASHA ME CHECK KARLETHI HUIN

TUM JAAKE CHOPRA'S KA FILE LEKE AAAO

SASHA : SURE MK

MAAN CHECKS IN THROUGH THE FILES AND FINDS SOME

MINOR MISTAKES

SASHA COMES IN WITH THE CHOPRA'S FILE

SASHA : MK FILE

MAAN : HAAN , HE TAKES IT

SASHA SERVICES PLANS MEIN KUCH CHANGES HAI

PEHLE WHO KARKE LAO

SASHA : YES MK

JUST THEN ADI COMES

ADI : SIR CHOPRA'S NE HUME 20TH KA APPOINTMENT

DEDIYA HAI

MAAN : TEEKH HAI AB EK KAAM KARO MERA , SASHA AUR

TUMHARA TICKETS KARAO 18TH KI FLIGHT KA

TURNING TO SASHA : AB KYA KADE KADE MERA MUH

DEKHTA RAHOGI YA PHIR KUCH KAAM KAREGI

ADI AND SASHA BOTH OF THEM LEAVE

MAAN CALLS DEV

MAAN : HELLO DEV

DEV : HA BRO

MAAN : MEIN LONDON JARAHA HU EK PURE HAFTE KE

LIYE ON 18TH AUR MEIN EXPECT KARTHI HU TUM DAD KO

KOI STRESS NAHI LENE DOGI

DEV : OK BRO

MAAN : TEEKH HAI THO FIR MAI RAKTHA HOON

DEV : BYE BRO

AT NIGHT GEET'S PLACE , LONDON :

AT THE DINING TABLE :

GEET (ON HER PHONE – CONFERENCE CALL ): HELLO

GUYS , KYA KAR RAHE HO TUM LOG ?

MEERA : KUCH NAHI YAAR ….

YASH : ARE YE KYA BAAT HUI MEERA .. MUJHE ITNA MISS

KAR RAHE HO SWEETU TUMHE KOI KAAM KARNE KA

MANN HI NAHI HORAHA HAI. AAJAVU KYA…

MEERA: HA BOHUT L (MEERA BIT HER TONGUE FOR SAYING THAT )

ARJUN & GEET : UUFFFOOO

ARJUN : BALDI JALDI HORAHI IN DONO LOVE BIRDS KO…..

MEERA : (TRYING TO CHANGE THE TOPIC) BTW WO

INTERNATIONAL SEMINAR KAB HAI..

ARJUN: AB TOPIC DIVERT KARNE KI KOSHISH AH. .

WO SEMINAR 22ND APRIL KO HAI ..

GEET : 22ND APRIL ?

YASH : HA KYU KOI AUR PLAN HAI KYA …?

GEET : KUCH NAHI . WAISE BHI MEIN BOHUT EXCITED

HOON

ARJUN : MEIN BHI... PATA HAI WORLD KE SAARE TOP

ARCHITECTS ,BUILDING DESIGNERS, BUILDERS AUR

CIVIL ENGINEERS HONGE WAHA …..

YASH : WOAH ! YEH THO BADI FAIDE KI NIKLI . MUJHE

LAGA KUCH LOGON KA BORING BAASHAN SUNNA PADEGA

MEERA : YASH SHUT UP .. HA YEH BHI THO SACH KI

HUME WAHA RECOGNISE HONGE TO HUME EK ACCHA

START AUR BASE BHI MILEGA

GEET : HUM RECOGNISE KYUN NAHI HONGE BHAI HUM

OXFORD KO REPRESENT KAR RAHE HAI

JUST THEN KARAN COMES TO THE TABLE

KARAN : SAALI SAAHIBHA NO CALLS WHILE EATING COZ

NANDINI SAYS FROM BEHIND : COZ DINNER TIME IS

FAMILY TIME

AND COME AND TAKES SIA FROM KARAN AND SETTLES HER IN HER BABY CHAIR .

GEET : JEEJU BAS EK MIN (KEEPS A PLEADING FACE )

KARAN : TEEKH HAI

GEET (TO HER GANG ) : OK BYE GUYS KAL MILTHE HAI

COLLEGE MEIN

GUD NI8

NANDINI SETS THE TABLE

GEET LITERALLY JUMPS LIKE A SCHOOL KID SEEING THE

DELECACIES ON THE TABLE ESP HER FAVOURITE

PARATHE WITH BUTTER CHICKEN

GEET : DI UR DA BEST . LUVV UUU

NANDINI : TEEKH HAI AB KHAALE

KARAN : dramatically says PATI KO PARAMESHWAR MANA

JATHA HAI AUR KHANA BEHAN KI PASAND KA..

GEET GIVES A TOOTHY GRIN

NANDINI : AAP BHI DRAMA MAT KARO .. HAI NA AAP KA

FAVOURITE BHI CHOCOLATE MOUSSE AND PASTA

SEEING CHOCOLATE MOUSSE SIA STARTS JUMPING IN

HER CHAIR SAYING : CHOCO CHOCO..

NANDINI : PEHLE KHANA . PHIR CHOCO ..

SIA BEING A GUD GIRL SETTLES

AFTER HAVING DINNER EVERY MOVE TO THEIR

RESPECTIVE ROOMS AFTER WISHING ONE ANOTHER

GUD NI8

( SO HERE IS LONG UPDATE 😉😳)



Edited by crazy_125 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Amazing update...
But geet and maan mein koi connection hai kya??
I don't know why but aisa feel hota hai...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: icy_magma

Amazing update...
But geet and maan mein koi connection hai kya??
I don't know why but aisa feel hota hai...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm...


that will be told only when the story unfolds ... 😉😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
nice one..
waiting 2 know d maneet connectn!!

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