ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ah Bubbly.. I was saving this for the night, when I could go through it in peace.. coz I knew It was going to be great!! And WOW!! What a beautiful picture you have painted for us..!!

The love that the father has for both the girls, the love and bond between the two sisters, the care and concern for each other, beautifully expressed!! Khushi has captured my heart straightaway.. I do think Amma has a little inclination towards her own daughter.. but then, I am just guessing..!! I know you will elaborate on the relationship later..!!

That lady with the hood.. very intriguing!!

Loved it hun.. Update soonish!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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GREAT FF
was really really great
xxx
plls continue jaan
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
wow...i loved it...
the whole set of this story and the amazing concept...
im always into fantasies and fairytales...
and reading the story of our ever loved arhi in this setting...
ahhh...awesome...
sooo...
khushi always blames herself wen something bad happens around her...she thinks she should have sunk along with her parents...poor girl
but i love the way how her dad and payal loves her unboundedly
doesnt her mom too love her like that or wat...
well... they were playing happily in the field that was rich with sunshine...their father sooo happy at seeing this...even me while reading it...
but after payal's tripping...that is during the night...
that woman right...wat did she mean by saying now things are going to happen standing right over the spot of payal's injury now looking totally gloomed... it meant the girls are gonna be surrounded by gloom from now on...uh huh
the way u describe the scenario is enthralling luv...
cant wait to read more...update soon dear
pls accept my buddy request and pm me wen u update hun...
I LOVE THIS FF SOOO MUCH...

~~~ sam
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
YEAH... so finally finished reading it... it was so engrossing... the pace was also good... but it ended so soon... i was like, huh? it just started and ended already? pls do post the other chapters as soon as possible... and this time a little bigger...lol...
i wonder whether the hooded woman is good/bad... is it destiny?? hmmm... thats a mysterious factor and is very interesting... hope khushi becomes more sure about the family-bonds... as she shud hv lot of self -belief and that she can draw from her strong bond with her family... khushi shud be khush-khush... :)))
loved it... :)))
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
The long awaited instalment...not long enough! You are going to kill me, it is going to be sheer torture waiting for the next instalment.
The close relationship between the father and the two daughters gives you that warm fuzzy feeling in your heart. There is deep love shared between the three of them and I think destiny designed it that way. I am not the resident expert at digging deeper so I will wait for your input Aquiline.
Loved it so far...keep going (faster if possible)...just kidding!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guturgutur, shika, Shweta, kooltoad, Leafs, xsumi, sparklystarstud, dingle, Yuks, masaf, darshi and molten_lava: Thank you so much for your comments, friends. And yes, though Kushi does seem insecure in that chapter, I will let circumstances teach her to grow stronger.

I'm updating because this is the last chapter where we'll be seeing the 'lady in the dark hood' and just wanted to prepare you guys for the coming chapters where the real story begins...

This chapter will be SHORT but there is great depth to it. The entire fantasy revolves around this little notch. And remember what I said? Its GOTHIC FANTASY. But everything gothic and fantasical in this tale is a symbolic shadow of the realism in the real story of IPKKND. I'll show you how when the story is about to wind up. Or maybe you will succeed in connecting the parallelisms yourself...


Chapter Two: In the Dead of the Night

He thrashed about in the bed as nightmares raced through his mind. He felt his very own blood crawl inside him and all he could think was to tear himself apart to stop the pain. Letting out a cry, he leaped out of the bed and fumbled in the dark. Finding the bedside table, he groped for the drawer and yanked it open. The contents fell to the floor with a crash but he didn't bother. His trembling hands searched through the mess and finding what he was searching for, pulled it out and began binding it around his mouth. The belt was thick enough to cover his entire mouth; he tied it tight and buckled it securely. Then, breathing heavily though his nose, he made for the door. Racing out of his room, he bounded down the wooden steps two or three at a time. He could see things clearly from the moonlight glinting from the long windows of his mansion. He knew he was making too much noise and his sister would awake but he had no choice. He had to reach the kitchen before all hell broke loose.

Sprinting across the massive living room, he barged though the kitchen door, stumbling towards the pantry and yanked its tiny door open. The tender light from the overhead candle burst upon his dark eyes, and he cried out angrily. But the cry was muffled in the belt that was fastened around his mouth. His hands felt numb as he searched the shelves and began pulling out edible items. His sister always stored plenty of cooked food in the cold storage just in case he needed them in the dead of the night.

His breathing was almost like heavy rasping and he could feel his jaw sweating right where the belt was tied. He hoped it wouldn't slip, and began pilling enough food into the cradle of his arm. Then when he was contented of the quantity, he kicked the pantry door close and rushed out of the kitchen. As he bounded up the stairs, an item or two fell down but he didn't stop to pick them up. He only stopped running until he was safe in his dark room and standing with his back to the closed door. He sunk to the floor right there and pulled the belt out of his mouth.

A lonely figure stood at the foot of the stairs and slowly picked up the items that had fallen from his hands. She straightened up and sadly looked at the door of his room where he would now be devouring the food to calm his... She sighed. And walked to the kitchen. Replacing the items back in the pantry, she traced her silent steps back to her room. She closed the door and stood against it for a long time. A tear slid down her cheek at the thought of what her brother was going through...if only she could do something to help him. She dropped to the floor and broke into tears. But she did what she could to not make her weeping loud, lest her brother know of it. Amidst the tears, she cried, "What can I do for you my Little One? If the sacrifice of my life would relieve you of this curse, I would do it. But I know if I do that, then you will die too. How I wish I could take your pain away..."

And saying so she cried herself to sleep, not knowing that the lady in the dark had watched it all from the window and was now walking away. The night wind flapped at her dark robe and carried her departing words into the sky that would soon welcome dawn, "You will be able to fulfill your wish...soon, my child."


And goodbye, 'lady in the dark hood' ...She's been shadowing my every chapter so far! Good riddance! For a while...

Promise you, the next chapters will be longer and if they are not longer, I will post two chapters together!


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Edited by Aquiline - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
ok! What was that???
Me totally confused.
This was Arnav right? And the curse??? And why was he gobbling food like a maniac? What's with him tying a belt around his mouth to muffle his sound???
And I don't know why but for a minute I thought he was going to transform into a werewolf or something.😆
It was nicely written. Maybe my doubts will be cleared in the forthcoming chapters.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Thanks for the PM .
A mysterious story so far.though I could not get the things clearly till now.
I am enjoying the story very much coz this a very different story.
Anxiously waiting for the story to unfold.
Pls update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
aww super short update...but what is it that Arnav has? I couldn't help but cry at his grief! ;(;(

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