ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

hmm.. what can I say? its intriguing... raises a lot of questions, I hope you are writing the answers as we speak.

verry interesting scene you showed us there.

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arshi1020

@arshi1020

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

I love the suspense of it all! What could the mystery illness/curse be?? Loved it like always Aquiline 👏 Your story just keeps getting better with each update.

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dingle

@dingle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Quite honestly - Im in LOVE with your writing. Its better than a few books Ive read lately.

This chapter was short but it was more jampacked and emotional than the one before. I love how youve displayed the contrast between the 4 siblings... Khushi and Payal share everything and have a deep bond, and here Arnav and Anjali keep things hidden from each other to avoid upsetting one another, both are hurting and in pain and this small act of Arnav comfort eating secretly and Anjalie being aware of it also displays their deep bond too. So descriptive and emotional.

Goodbye mysterious lady

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shona-li

@shona-li

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Really interesting to see Arhi in a gothic context. I've always felt IPKKND was Pride and Prejudice in an indian context, the irony! :D Can't wait for the upcoming chapters :)

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shagun

@shagun_sarun

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

finally, u updated...grt going lin...its very intresting

keep writing n thanks for pm😃

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Interesting...
I wonder what his cure is. Insatiability, maybe

Yuks

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kooltoad

@kooltoad

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

heyi... so we get an introduction to both the main characaters or at least a glimpse of the characters...

the bond b/w bro and sis was shown well... each cares for the other and can't see each other in pain... wud be good to see the sis-sis and bro-sis bonding as it unfolds...

also it wud be interesting to see how the two leads cross each others path and bring comfort to each other... :)))

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Mona

@mona1997

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

loved it thanks for the pm!

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shwetachauhan

@shwetachauhan

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Bubbly!! What an update!! Loved it.. short but impactful! I am reading it in the middle of the night and believe me, i got a little scared at the description!! The lady in the hood is spooky!! *shivers*

What is it about Arnav gobbling up all the edibles?? And the belt around his mouth!! Gosh!! His anxiety and helplessness and both their grief tugged at my heart..!! Very beautifully written dear..! Gripping is the word for the story..!